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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sristy

Story is great. Thanks a lot for a nice story like that.

But I want to share something about Daya Sir that as per Sony TV's information they recognise that Abhi Daya both are senior inspector as they described their characters as Sr. Inspector Abhijit and Sr. Inspector Daya not Inspector Daya.

It is just for the information nothing meant else. Please don't mind.

he is senior inspector daya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

Nice one again. After that bullet wali story this one is really good. This is another story I would love to see. Lots of scope for Daya-Abhi to perform.

This time the comedy target was Daya Sir, I can imagine his face, how embarrassed he must be feeling when Abhi Sir was telling everyone about Diya. He must be embarrassed throughout with his name being joined with some random woman and worse still being accused of murdering her as well. He must be embarrassed and angry.

Good to see Vivek get some importance, lekin Tasha abhi bhi sideline ho jaati hai aapki stories mein. In both your best stories she has almost nothing to do. Use bhi kuchh dena. I have observed another thing. Your ACP is a little lenient than what we see in CID. In these circumstances he would have been the one screaming-shouting at Daya Sir when the body is found in his house. See how he behaved when Abhi Sir was accused last week. I wish ACP behaved like you show him.

Lekin yaar yeh Sonali, Purvi, Naina, Diya, aisi sab sample ladkiyan 😡 😡 😡 kyon aa rahi hain Daya Sir ki life mein. Ab is Naina madam ko bye bye kar do ji, please, mujhe nahin chahiye woh aage ke cases mein. She is soooo.... so .... how to say it, she is so galepadu, peechhe hi pad gayi hai. Bhaga do ji ise ab.

Edited by prabhanarayan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u r tooo gud in making stories yaar...keep up this wrk yaaar...ur too talented in making so...hpe 2 see u as a gud story writer 4 future CID cases...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
hi puja... though my hindi knowledge is not very gud, i managed to understand ure stories! u do write well...

I Do Hope U Have Got A PM From Me Regarding The Character Diya..... Please dont mind!!!!

anyway... do continue!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
THANKS FOR ALL OF U. NEXT STORY IS COMMING SOON
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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please gyes i am waiting for your comments, so please do comments

Edited by vs-kmh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
god its realllyy good! in fact d best among ure stories acc to me!!! and for d first tym i felt like crying reading a fan fiction... u shud join cid creative team!!!!!!! and y abhi everytyme! i cnt bear that!! anyway it was fantastic!! keep it up!! btw i hope u hv got my messeg!

btw. r yu actually in cid creative team?? i hv a feeling.... loved ure writing!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG !!! what an excellent story you maintained the mystery so well,each and every scene touched me so much !! i could see everything happening in front of my eyes,i felt like crying when Abhijeet was being transferred to a normal jail 😭 and felt like killing those media people.
When Abhijeet was handcuffed i became so emotional and i kind of felt so angry with ACP when he asked Daya to do that(woh hamesha aise hi karte hain 😡 )anyways keepup the excellent work hoping to read may more from you 👍🏼 👍🏼
Edited by didobhav - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bonding between them nicely shown. Maintained charm till the end. keep up the 👍🏼 good work. Really felt for Abhijeet.

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