**My first story AT PG 4 :)** - Page 8

Originally posted by: vevah

hey SHIVZ , Hatts Off :) its so

U hav done a Superb Attempt 👏

de Concept ws really MIND BLOWING!👍🏼

Liked de BOND of "DU☺️"which is really missing 😔 now a dayz;hense de Suspence & Thrilling part ws also Gud !👏,& LUVED de Emotional Sequence😳

KEEP IT UP :)

FOR U ON UR FIRST SKILL !

WITH SOME FRESH😉 FLOWERz

🤗 & finally so SORRY 4 LATE😃😉

as it need time so 😉,
abt de FONT, plz SHIVZ ,do use large font, as my Chashmaa is tooo weak Dear😉

updated my comment on page 9😃

HEY I LIKE YOUR STORY SHIVA:-). ITS YOUR FIRST STORY AND YOU DONE A WONDERFUL AND AMAGING JOB:-),,,,,

Originally posted by: krishnarock

HEY I LIKE YOUR STORY SHIVA:-). ITS YOUR FIRST STORY AND YOU DONE A WONDERFUL AND AMAGING JOB:-),,,,,

thanks a lot dear:-) n i m really sorry:-(...

Shiva when your next is coming up? I m waiting!!

Originally posted by: snehal.

Shiva when your next is coming up? I m waiting!!

ab to Mere exams ke baad hi kuch hoga dear 🤗

🤗

Originally posted by: snehal.

🤗

Kab hai aapke exams?

Abhi chal hi to rahe hai:-)... Next exam monday ko hai... Aur mai yaha masti kar rahi hu;-)

Acha hai! Thoda timepass karna chahiye! Waise bhi koi bhi 24 ghante toh padh nahi sakta 😉

Originally posted by: snehal.

Acha hai! Thoda timepass karna chahiye! Waise bhi koi bhi 24 ghante toh padh nahi sakta😉

All the best for Monday!

Thanks snehal 🤗