puja's story centre- NO. 10 & Index page 1 16 jan - Page 6

Hey Bhagwan Puja, yeh kya kiya tumne. Kahan hain ACP Sir. Jaldi karo, jaldi wapas laao unko. Mujhe to rona aa raha hai. Daya Sir aisa thappad maarna is villain ko, ki life mein kisi cheenti ko bhi maarne ki himmat na kar sake.

Ek baat aur kehni thi, tume ne characters to bahut acche pakde hain lekin Salunkhe ki dialogbaazi, Freddie ki wife aur Abhi Sir ka Taarika Puran, humlogon ko pasand nahin hai. Humlog CIDwalon se keh rahein hain in sab se baahar nikalne ko. Bahut time waste hota hai in scenes mein. Ho sake to tum bhi in scene to chhod do, koi aur, behtar comedy track socho.

Aap kahani pehle complete kijiye, main uske baad hi padhoongi.

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puja ur stories were all marbellous
ur future is to b like a good scrip n story wrriter
ur like the writer as actually the cidians want as was earlier
GOOD WORK
n keep it up

all the stories has to get 9/10 except d 3rd one is 8/10
superd pitcching of stories with great supense n alll members in action

hey srry to disturb pls complete d story dont let us in d middle death hnagning pls complete it srry
srry n thank u for ur efforts to put up so nice storiesn taking time for it
thank u

So again left ACP part hanging. Keep on increasing suspense.

about the story I loved loved that code (shayari type) and the way they solved. Loved all suspense and rings part. Missing ACP sir.

But somewhere is starting I thing some dialogues were totally out of character (atleast for me as I consider them professionals who have created friendly environment in bureau but they will never forget they are professionals.) So Ok they were not happy with him but when RS entered it was like from that moment they started hating him or sort of like jumped on him even he has just said few words. Although he may be having strong motive to come in CID Mumbai that will be revealed later but bachon jaise lad rahe the. I felt but later on in story where points were necessary they were raising there voice I liked it.

I would have liked that in starting they do respected as headquarters send him but due to his behavior and activities CID members were like revolting hi. Not from starting just no respect.

Puja nice story I liked it but kahin I missed that PUJA'S Story's charm,you know matlab tumhaare story's hatke hothe hain,ek alag hi maza hotha hai unme,this one had a nice plot the RS made me go 😡 he was such an attitude filled guy !! investigation wise good work !! Code's mystery was superb I wasn't thinking that the mystery was related to magnet !! all in all a nice work done,I liked it
but one final thing jaldi le aao humaare ACP sir ko aur iss RS ko bhagao,missing ACP sir badly !!!