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ayushi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

it was avery nice and origimal story i liked it veryyyy much

and i can se u worked very hard dear and i like it it shoul b telicast in the tv it was to nice and my abhijeet was awesome😍👏

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rozeishere

@rozeishere

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

great story... lovely and sentimental when abhi gets hurt and daya tries not to cry... wow how do u get the ideas for stories .... keep it up and do write some more soon

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Soumik Banerjee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

very planned, organised story. I really love it. You got great composition talents...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and really, in the CID cases, these types of words r used like "Haan sir", "haein", "meri wife"

Thanx, u inspired me for writing a story.⭐️

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rozeishere

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

very nice one.. thanks for the story

Edited by rozeishere - 15 years ago

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latha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Somu d sitry was awsome n marvellous i loved it
thanku for succh a wonderful story

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latha

@nishalpvsk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

hey did u firstly wrote seperately in a pad n den printed out d whole story or wat
Bcaz u hve written all in one shot post how come pls reply
thank u

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somu_05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

yess... Firstly it was written in a notepad.. then copied here...!!

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JP22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Somu this was ther first story I had read at IF...and I had finally decide to join IF...somu I like this forum...I wanted to read more and nore stories therefore I have joined this forim...somu tumhare vakjah se meine IF join kiya

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somu_05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

OMG Jiya di.. I hope you know thats like the biggest compliment i can ever receive..!! 😃 meri wajah se Our members got such a Lovely Member.. and such lovely Poems...!!! i am so proud of myself..!! [:p] 😆

Edited by somu_05 - 14 years ago