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neelambari

@Chiinnu

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

sachin: darwaza mat todo
abhi:kya
sachin:darwaza mat todo
daya:ab tum bhi.....
yamuna looks at sachin
yamuna: harsh....isko kuch hogaya hain
everybody:kya?????

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JP22

@JP22

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: shreela
Achanak Dr. tarika kahanse aa gayi beech mein? unka toh is case se koi sambandh nehi hai!😕

hey trika abhi bich mein nahi aayegi yaha,

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: jiya1
hey trika abhi bich mein nahi aayegi yaha,

nehi woh chinnu manikyam ne likha tha na, isliye maine poocha. achha, next scene main likhti hoon.

Edited by shreela - 15 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: shreela
nehi woh chinnu manikyam ne likha tha na, isliye maine poocha. achha, next scene main likhti hoon.

thi hein nahi aayega...ok..shreela why dont u write something

..aur mallika us ladkika naam yamin hein Yamuna nahi...plz edit that,

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Abhi: keya hua sachin ko?

Harsh: sir, lagta hai ki kisi aatma ne ise apne vash mein kar liya!

Abhi: sab bakwaash! Daya, darwaja todo. is sachinko toh baad mein dekhenge!

Daya: 1 minute Abhi, yeh darwaja asanise tutnewala nehi lagta.

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

daya kicks the door
1.......
2.......
3.......
daya: ye kaise darwazw hein, jo muje tod na aate
ek kam karo fredy , tum bhi avo
fredi: (shivering) kya ? apne kya kaha sir?
daya: help me freddie
freddie: sir is darwaze ke peeche rakt dahee aatma ghoom rahe hein
me aisa nahi kar sakte
daya: fredi,tum........

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

sachin ka chehara pura mitti se dhaka huva hein,,,usaki aakhe lala lala hein..usaki jibh badhi huvi aur lala hein...

Sachin: Meine kaha tha na ye dharwaaza mat kholo...lekin tune khol diya...ab tum sabko es dniya mein chalana hoga...hamare jaisa banana hoga.

(sab shock hote hein)

Abhi: sachin..ye tumhe kya ho gya?

Fredy: Abhijeet sir...sachin ko aatma ne apane kabje mein kar liya chalo yaha se sab bhago..

Daya: fredy:

Fredy: sir es bar to mera kaha maniye

tabhi harsh ki sachin gardan pakdake upar hava mein utha leta hein..daya use chudane ki koshish karta hein..lekin sachin use eak haat se zatka deta hein...aur daya uchal kar durtak jake pgirta hein

tabhi abhi aur vivek bhi try karte hein sachin ke changul se harsh ko bachaneki Raghav aur fredy bhi unka saath dete hein....kaise vaise harsh ko chudavake vo us cave se bahar aate hein...vaha daya behosh pada huva milataa hein..use sab hosh mein laneki koshish karate hein..lekin utane mein sachin vaha aa jata hein..fir se vivek aur usamein haatha pai hoti hein...vivek se eak kick marata hein sachin vaha ke eak ped se takarata hein..daya etane mein hosh mein aa jata hei aur sab bhagane lagate hein...sachin bhi nake pichhe bhagane lagate hein...Abhi aur daya Bich mein se apani gun se usapar fire karate hein use goliya lagatoi hein lekin sachin marata nahi...wo fir bhi unake piche bhaga raha hein...kuch der baad sab CID ke ghadi tak aate hein aur baithate hein...daya gadi start karane hi vala hein tab sachin usaka haata pakadata hein..daya ke baju mein baitha huva ABHi aur raghav,vivek daya ka haath kaise vaise sachin ke haath se chuda leta hein..aur daya ful speed mein accelrator dabake gadi vaha se bhagata hein...