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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Abhjeet: kya esake bag mein chau? kaha hein ye tumhari bag dikhana to jara?

(harsh apani bag dikhata hein lekin vajha se chaku gaab hota hein)

Fredy kaha hein chaku..hannn...? lagata hein fir se pina shuru kar diya hein? jao aur wo chaku dhundo? aur vivek kaha hein..tm ko meine chaku dhundhaneko kaha tha na?

Fredy:ha sir vahi...uper aur eak lash hein....vivek vaha hi khada hein us lash ke pas.

Daya: kya aur eak lash...dikhao kaha hein?

abhi: ha chalo dikhao...

fredy: chalye sir..vaha uper

(sab vaha chale jate hein...unake saath Yamini ,Raghav aur harsh chalane lagate hein)

he aap log kaha chal rahe hein?

Yamini: nahi wo sir

Abhi: kya sir...tum sab yaha ruko..hm upr jake aate hein..aur ha fir se es lash ko haath mat lagana.

Yamini: ok..sir.

(fredy,daya aur abhi vaha se chale jaate hein)

harsh hame enako batana hoga..ki enki jaan khatre mein hein..

Harsh: nahi Yamini abhi nahi...wo hamp pe vishwas nahi karenge...wo CID vale hein.

Raghav: ha yamini...Harsh thik kahe raha hein...hame mauka dekhakar hi unase baat karani chahiye.

(Fredy ,Abhi aur Daya uper ke kamare mein aate hein...lekin vaha vivek aur lash gayab hein)

Daya: Fred..kaha hein lash?

Fredy: sir yaha hi thi?

Abhi: Aur Vivek kaha gya?

Fredy: yaha hi mein use chodkar chala gaya tha?

Abhi: Tum bola rahe hon lash aur vivek dono yaha the...to ab kaha gaye..hannn? fredy tu hos hosh mein to ho?

Fredy: sir mein sach kaheta hun lasha uar vivek dono yaha the....mein unko yha hi chod gaya tha? pata nahi gayab kaise ho gaye dono?

Daya: thik hein dhundo dono ko aaju baaju mein.

(sab ethar ushar dhundhane lagate hein)

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Ok, everyone...when I am free, I'll read all your posts and pick out bits from everyone and post my full story...i need your help becase I have 0 knowledge about Aahat. Pls continue....

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Really good going!!!! i actually made a nice long continuation from d first post but d entire thing got deleted!!! But wow yaar, visrom, jiya, sunny, bhinder- u r better writers than d aahat writers!!!

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

bhinder.kamboj u continue next scene

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

p.n.:

plz yaha story mein confusion na ho esliye aap pahel scene padhiye ar aage ki story start ki jiye...aur advance mein bolie who will write next scene😊

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

It think we have overlap here. Its nice visrom you take bits from here and complete story.

For other writers it will be nice if person writing could just post. I am writing when complete delete this line and post your own story over there. SO that every other member could know this person is writing and wait till he writes and then next who want to write put up same line I am writing and deletes this line and write story. This way less chances of overlap

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Daya- Vivek kaha ho tum Vivekkkkkkkkk
Abhi- yeh vivek kaha gaya hoga?? pehle voh lassh aur ab vivek? yeh ho kya raha hain?
Daya:- kuch gadbad hain boss..jaroor kuch ton hain jo hum log dekhkar bhi anjaan ban rahe hain..
(suddenly trio of Aahat come up)
Harsh:- kya baat hain Sir?
Abhi:- hamara ek officer Vivek yaha lassh ke pass tha aur ab lassh bhi gayab hain aur Vivek bhi ? kaise ho sakta hain yeh?
Yaminn whisper in harsh ear:- ab moka agaya hain bata dena chhaiye hume iss se pehle ke der ho jaye..
Freddy:- yeh kya gussar-pussar kar rahe ho??
Hrsh:- vo sir hum log appko kuch batana chahte hain..

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

good going guys! really nice to read.👍🏼 I have no knowledge about aahat, so need some time to gather informations about it, and then I can continue. but i will add my part soon.

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Fredy: Kya...kya batane chahate ho?

Abhi: Mein kaha tha na aap upar mat aao kyo aahein ho yaha ...han?

Harsh: sir meri baat to suniye?

ABhi: kya btana chahate ho?

Daya: Ha bolo..kya kahena chate ho humse?

Harsha: sir aaapke jan ko yaha khatara hein? last time khuch aise police vale yaha aae the....unke saath bhi khuch yaha aisa hi huva jo aapake saath ho raha hein?..dusare din sab ki laashe mile.hum aatnmao ka khatama karate...kuch dino se yaha pe hum najar rakhe huve hein aaj aap sabako yaha dekha esliye aappako bachane aaye hein.

Daya: Tum hum ko ppagal samaz te ho..hum CID officers hein ye aatma bitma pe vishwas nahi karate hem..muze to tum sab pe shak hein...bolo tum yaha kyo aaye hon? tumhara yaha aane ka maksad ya hein?

Yamini: Sir hamara yahin ki jiye...yaha aatamaye hein...

ABHi: Tm hamako pagal samhjete hon ...haan? ke aap sabki baato pe vishwas karenge..daya..fredy..chalo boss...us lash ko aur vivek ko dhundo...enke baato mein aakar apana time west mat karo

fredy: ha sir

daya:chalo boss...vivek..vivek

(Yamini,harsh aur Raghav tino baate karane lagate hein)

Yamini: ye log hampe vishws kyo nahi karate..

Raghav: Yamini...wo CID wale hein unko hamape yakin karana asan nahi hein

Harsh: phir kya karenge hm

Yamini: kuch bhi ho gaye lekin hum yaha hi rahenge aur un dust aatmaose un sabko bachyenge..

raghav aur harsh: ha tum sahi kaha rahi hon..

(tino abhi,daya aur fredy ke piche jaate hein)

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago