Story : CID-Aahat Mahaa episode

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Very well written........keep it up....

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zerry123

@zerry123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: visrom
Daya: Haan Freddy... hum dono kitchen mein the, sabke liye soup bana rahe the

The thought of Daya and Vivek making soup for everyone is so funny 😆... but yeah, really nice story visrom and everyone else who contributed did a great job too 👍🏼

Edited by zerry123 - 15 years ago

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BeastInCarnage

@BeastInCarnage

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Hey Jiya, where is the ending part of your story? You should add the idea of making Yamini ghost and fall in love with Vivek.
I am waiting for your story.

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prabha.

@prabha.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Nice. I had missed this one earlier. Freddie Sir ka bhi jawab nahin. I love the last line😆. Such easy simple narration, I enjoyed it.

Edited by prabha. - 15 years ago

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Was reading the stories all over again 😊 Really! Writers here are even gud at horror stuff!! Actually horror features these days really suck! d olden golden are really gud... Btw very strange! I dreamt I was a ghost haunting some people! And it a funny, feel-gud dream, not d usual gory stuff but a cute one 😆 No Offense!