zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

Nandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey Dear
Love the update
Awwiee ZaYa roamnce is just too cute
after wo dono hai hin adorable
Lets see how will ZaYa Save Usmaan
want to read more
so plz continue soon
Take care

Lots of Love
Geet

thanks a lot geet...
but after todays episode...
meri works bhi pheeke lag rhe hai...
itni chemistry mei toh mei dub hi jaoon...
hayy... mera kya hoga? the screen was on fire...
too good...
cant wait for more...
thanks a lot..😊

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Tamihna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

This is awesome! You've got really good content and take your time writing, at the moment I'm raking my brain to think of something good to write and I'm relaxing, LOL, something we all need. Keep updating this great story all of us are loving it!

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Tamihna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

This is awesome! You've got really good content and take your time writing, at the moment I'm raking my brain to think of something good to write and I'm relaxing, LOL, something we all need. Keep updating this great story all of us are loving it! Zaya scenes are so cute, just absolutely waiting eagerly!

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zayalove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Hey chp 8 is really gud our zaya moments r really cute hope zain aliya sees barkat true colours pllzzz update chp 9 by tomorrow i cant wait to read and plzzz write some os on zaya also your work is really amazing

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sahar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Amazing update, continue soon😊

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suma madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Awesome Update dear 😭 thank u for regular updates
I want some thing like this shud happen in our show
Do Update soon 😊

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Nandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: zayalove
Hey chp 8 is really gud our zaya moments r really cute hope zain aliya sees barkat true colours pllzzz update chp 9 by tomorrow i cant wait to read and plzzz write some os on zaya also your work is really amazing

thanks a lot.
glad to know u liked it.
will surely update today but late evening.
sorry if this disappointed u but I have to study for exams.
as I claimed earlier I wont be able to give u regular updates anymore.
but I would keep u engaged with the teasers.
so u don't worry.
you just enjoy zaya chemistry.
thanks a lot. 😊

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Nandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Hi people.
Unfortunately I couldn't resist myself from writing for you people.
Here's the next and latest part. Here you go:
PART-9
NO! AALIYA!!!
Zain and Aaliya reached the construction site. They got out of the car and held hands. They started searching for Bobby and Osman but they were no where to be found. Finally the heard a loud thud on the ground.
Aaliya: Zain? tumne woh suna?
Zain: kya suna?
She went towards the voice as Zain followed her. This voice let them to a tent basically for the staff. Aaliya knew something fishy was happening inside she started towards the area.
Zain: Aaliya! Aaliya woh jagah safe nhi.
But she wasn't the one to hear. She went near it and peeped inside. There she saw the most frightening scenario. Bobby was holding a gun in her hand, Osman was lying half eyes open but unconscious on the ground. Bobby was about to shoot the trigger. But before she started to give a speech.
Bobby: kya hua Osman Abdullah. Tumhari pyaari bahu kaha hai? Aaliya? Who tumhe bachane nahi aayi? Tumhe kya laga? Mere abbu ki mehnat se kamaye gye paise tum apne paas rkhoge.
Zain reached huffing and puffing and held Aaliya's hand as they both looked at this scene.
Osman: tumhara abbu toh mei hoon barkat.
Bobby: Barkat? ghinn hoti hai mujhe iss naam se ab? barkat, barkat, barkat. Hay. Tang hi kr diya tha. Kitna kaam kraya mujhse. Pehle mera woh dokha dena uske baad itna sab kuch hona aur uske baad Aaliya ko Zain ke khilaf badhkhana. Par ab sab kuch khatam. Good bye Osman Abdullah. Hahahaha. Dekha aapne abbu. Bobby Mir Khan ne kar dikhaya.
Aaliya and Zain tensed. Bobby Mir Khan? they both thought.
Bobby held out the gun and was about to shoot Osman. Zain and Osman closed their eyes as they heard a shot. They first hesitated to open their eyes but when they opened it they saw. AALIYA LYING UNCONCIOUS WITH A SHOT ON HER LEFT ARM. Zain screamed "NO! AALIYA!!!!" he ran towards her and lifted her head up and kept it on his lap.
Zain: nahi Aaliya. tum itni jaldi himmat nhi haar skti. tumhi ne kaha tha na ki biwi ko shohar ki kamzori nhi himmat banana chahiye. toh bano na meri himmat. nahi Aaliya. mei tumhe jaane nhi dunga. itni aasani se mujhse peecha nhi chhuda skti. AALIYA!!!! AALIYA AANKHE KHOLO. AALIYA!!!!!

And there Aaliya slowly opened her eyes.
Aaliya: Zain?
Zain: haan Aaliya. Tumhara Zain tumhare saath hai. Humesha rhega. Aaliya please tum aankhe khuli rkhna.
Aaliya: Zain?
She slowly started to close her eyes.
Zain: nahi Aaliya. U cant leave me. dad? AALIYAA!!!!!!!

to be continued...
sorry this was a painful and sad chapter.
next will be god.
I promise.
take care till then.
AND COMMENT AND LIKE.
thanks a lot.
😊

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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