zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

[COMPLETED]

HEY PEOPLE...
I AM HERE WITH ANOTHER FF...
THIS ONE IS ABOUT CONFESSION...
NO IDEA THAT ZAIN N AALIYA ARE NOT BEING ABLE TO CONFESS...
THIS FF WILL GIVE THEM AN IDEA...
SO HERE'S THE PROLOGUE...

ZAYA FF: IS CONFESSING THAT DIFFICULT
PROLOGUE

zain and aaliya go on a trip to shimla... unfortunately the roads get blocked due to excessive rainfall and snow... because of that zain and aaliya will have to stay for a month or so... at the other end bobby was trying to kill osman... the whole abdullah family was unaware of the fact that bobby was trying to kill osman but was fortunately failing... back in shimla... zain n aaliya have to stay in their hotel... for a month or so...
isnt it enough time for someone to confess... think about it... living in one room of 1 months... that is 4 weeks... 31 days approx... will they be able to confess? will bobby be able to kill osman before zain and aaliya are back? will zain and aaliya be able to live in one place with each other for 1 month? will they distance between the two of them decrease? keep reading to know...
and also to increase the excitement... i think i should tell you... there will be a slight twist in the story... i am sure u people are gonna like it... you think i am gonna tell u right now? no... it will come soon... and here i give u a clue it will be something very painful related to aaliya's past... actually its the most biggest thing in aaliya's past..
lets see what happens...

INDEX:
PROLOGUE: above..
PART-1 LETS GO: (PAGE 2)
PART-2 I DONT THINK I CAN LIVE WITH THIS: (PAGE 3)
PART-3 THIS CANT BE HAPPENING!: (PAGE 4)
PART-4 1 MONTH?: (PAGE 5)
PART-5 JUST LIVE WITH IT: (PAGE 6)
PART-6 I WANT TO TELL YOU SOMETHING: (PAGE 7)
PART-7 TIME TO GO BACK: (PAGE 8)
PART-8 GOODBYE OSMAN ABDULLAH: (PAGE 10)
PART-9: N0! AALIYA!!!: (PAGE 11)
PART-10: ILL TAKE CARE OF HER: (PAGE 13)
PART-11: THANKS: (PAGE 14)

SO HERE ARE THE TITLES...
PLS LIKE AND COMMENT...
THE MORE LIKES AND REPLIES I GET...
THE SOONER I UPDATE...
THANKS...😃

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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Starwalkers

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Posted: 11 years ago

Guddd job ,, waiting for you to update the next part

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting concept
would love to read more

so plz do continue soon

Take care

Geet

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crazygurl1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting concept
please continue soon😊

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

HEY PEOPLE...
SORRY FOR THE DELAY...
HERE'S PART-1: LETS GO...
BEFORE THAT LET ME CLARIFY SOME THINGS: (DO READ)
this incident is after yesterdays episode... means after coming back from the party... as per the precap promo aaliya will be leaving the house to bhopal... but... since i only have happy works i cant do something really sad and heartbreaking... so in my ff aaliya and zain will only be bugged (annoyed) with each other... zain will think that aaliya is not in love and vice versa... so here's the part...
(zain's pov: blue)
(aaliya's pov: pink)
(barkat's pov: green)

PART-1
LETS GO...

aaliya and zain were back from the party... they were so angry with each other that they couldnt even meet their eyes... since zain was drunk aaliya drove the car and had to support him to walk even after his protest... while zain went straight to bed aaliya had to change... aaliya came back and slept on the couch...

NEXT MORNING...
while zain was sleeping... aaliya woke up and saw zain sleeping peacefully... she simply adored him... but then remembered last nights incident and looked towards the clock... it was 6:30... she quickly got up and went straight to the bathroom... after the namaz she went straight to the kitchen to prepare food... chand bibi was there...
aaliya: aslam valekum chand khala...
chand bibi: valekum aslam dulhan... zain kaha hai...
aaliya: chand khala... raat ko itni sharab pi hai uss kitkit ne... utha kaha jayega...
chand bibi: ya allah! sharab?
aaliya: ha...
chand bibi: lekin dulhan usse utna toh hai na... jao uthakar aao...
aaliya: par chand khala...
osman entered...
aaliya: as... aslam valekum mamu...
osman: valekum aslam aaliya... zain kaha hai?
aaliya: mamu woh so rha hai...
osman: jao uthakar aao... mujhe tum dono se ek bahaut zaroori baat krni hai...
aaliya: kya baat hai mamu?
osman: pehle tum dono neeche aao... phir bta ta hoon...
aaliya: ok...

IN ZAYA ROOM...
aaliya entered and saw zain already waken up... holding his head... probably because of the hangover... aaliya went straight to him and offered him a glass... zain looked up...
zain: yeh kya hai?
aaliya: isse pi lo... sir dard theek ho jayega...
zain: nahi zarurat hai...
aaliya shook her head... then forcefully made zain drink it...
zain: tumhari problem kya hai...
aaliya: tum! ab jaldi utt jao... mamu ko kuch baat krni hai.. lagta hai kuch serious hai...
zain: kya?
aaliya: mujhe kya pta... ab jaldi chalo...

AT THE DINNING TABLE...
aaliya was serving everyone... just then zain entered... aaliya made a face and served him... she was about to sit next to zain when barkat sat before her...
barkat: sorry bhabhi... kya aaj mei bhaiyu ke saath bhet skti hoon...
aaliya: arre koi baat nhi barkat mei kahi aur bet jaoongi...
aaliya zain abdullah... tum bas kuch hi dino mein aaliya ghulam haider ban jaogi...(evil smirk)
osman: zain...
zain: haan dad...
osman: mera ek dost rehta hai shimla mei...
zain: accha... toh?
osman: toh meine socha hai ki waha mei barkat hotels ka ek branch kholo...
zain nodded signalling him to continue...
osman: toh mei chahta hoon ki tum aaliya ke saath woh plot dekhne jao...
kya????
kya????
kya????
zain and aaliya looked towards each other shocked n angry...
mei iss mamu ki bhanji ke saath kabhi shimla nhi jaoonga...
mei iss kitkit ke saath kahi bhi akele nhi jaoongi..
mei inn dono ko nhi jaane de skti...
aaliya: par mamu zain akele bhi toh ja skta hai..
osman: arre biwi hote huye bhi zain akele kyun jaye... chali jao na...
zain: par dad...
osman: par war kuch nhi... u both r going and that's final... go do ur packing... and u r going by car... no planes.. road trip... kal jaana hai...
zain and aaliya got no time to think... while barkat was sitting back fuming with anger...
waise accha hi hoga... agar yeh aaliya yaha nhi hogi toh mei asani se osman ko maar skungi...
zubair: yaar aalu... i think u shud go...
zain fumed with anger...
yeh kambaqt har jagah bkwas krne ghus jaata hai...

IN ZAYA ROOM...
zain: mujhe tumhare saath shimla nhi jaana...
aaliya: haan haan... jaise mei toh mari ja rhi hoon na... tumhare saath jaane ke liye...
zain: woh toh dikh hi rha hai...
aaliya: shut up...
zain: umm... mkb?
aaliya: bolo... (she said while taking clothes out of wadrobe)
zain: mujhe tumse kal raat ke liye...
aaliya looked around...
zain: i am sorry...
aaliya wide opened her eyes...
aaliya: zain abdullah ne ek ladki se sorry bola...
zain: pta nahi... itna difficult kyun hota hai...
aaliya: maaf kiya...
zain: tum bhi sorry bolo..
aaliya: main kyun?
zain: kyunki tumne mujhe chhod ke zubair ke saath dance krna shuru kr diya tha...
aaliya: ooh... tabhi mei sochoon kahi toh jalne ki smell aa rhi thi...
zain: shut up!
aaliya: aur tum itna drink mat kiya karo...
zain: kyun tumhe usse bhi problem hai?
aaliya: haan... sharab haraam hai...
zain: theek hai meri maa... i am sooo sorry...
he said while holding his ears...
aaliya: its ok...
zubair was looking at this from the window...
zubair: chalo sorry toh bola... dheere dheere i love u bhi bol denge...

PRECAP- zain and aaliya reach the hotel... the snowfall starts... rain and snow causes the roads to block... barkat meets up with mir khan and decides to kill osman by using a gun and say that it was a accident...

TO BE CONTINUED...
THATS THE END OF PART-1...
HOPE YOU ALL LIKED IT...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
PLS DO COMMENT...
PM'S FOR THIS...
THANKS...😃

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1103371938
awesome
eagerly waiting

thank you soo much...
part-1 is updated...
part-2 will be updated by tomorrow...
thanks...😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Interesting concept
would love to read more
so plz do continue soon
Take care

Geet

thank you soo much...
glad to know you like it...
i have updated part-1...
thanks...😃

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

wow awsm update

loved it

aww so sweet they are both going shimla

very excited now to see wat happens

continue soon

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow awsm update
loved it
aww so sweet they are both going shimla
very excited now to see wat happens
continue soon

thank you soo much...
but let me tell u...
i am not so good at describing romance...
so i will just make my ff cute and sweet...
if its ok with u...
thanks...😊

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Res
Will edit it SOON...Pakka

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Just love the first part
That Bakbak
I so waana kill her
Tum hi maar do usse yaar :p
Love ZaYa Kitkit
Finally Zain said Sorry
Can't wait for this trip
So plz do continue soon
And yaah,thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago

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