zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: madhuxyz
Okay will not write awesome
Its amazing dear, its a cute os 😊 loved it
All chudails became Sweet at a time
Poor aliya hope she recover soon 😊
Thanks for Update

thanks a lot.
Really appreciate that.
Will continue by tomorrow.
And don't worry Aaliya will recover soon.
Thanks a lot.😊

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Okay so this is the first time I am reading this since I got your PM and although you told us not to reply 'awesome OS' I have to say, this is an Awesome fic. 😆

So basically evrything frm the start has been sweet.

the confession was cute.

Bobby...is just bobby :/ A villain.

Aliya...Hand paralysed xO Sachi? That's a twist i thought there was the risk of her hand getting paralysed par yeh toh risk se reality ban gyi.

Awaiting for next update.

Love ur writing :*

~Tanya ;)

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Tamihna

@Tamihna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Your story is absolutely amazing. Every update makes me smile and want to read more. Thank you for entertaining us your wonderful writing. The story is lead into different situationa ever so smoothly! Its an AWESOME story. Keep it up! Take care sweety

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: TashaForever
Okay so this is the first time I am reading this since I got your PM and although you told us not to reply 'awesome OS' I have to say, this is an Awesome fic. 😆
So basically evrything frm the start has been sweet.
the confession was cute.
Bobby...is just bobby :/ A villain.
Aliya...Hand paralysed xO Sachi? That's a twist i thought there was the risk of her hand getting paralysed par yeh toh risk se reality ban gyi.
Awaiting for next update.
Love ur writing :*

~Tanya ;)

Thank you soo much Tanya.
Loved to know you liked it.
And by mistake wrote 'os' i meant 'ff'.
Thanks a lot.😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Tamihna
Situations *

what do you mean?

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zayalove

@zayalove

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

I feel bad for aliya but this is very nyc part finally family xeptd aliya plzzz do update hy tomorrow

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Love the update dear

Oh no Poor ZaYa

so much in pain😭

but love the way hey both are with each other

Zain is a sweetheart

plz continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

HEY PEOPLE
SORRY FOR THE VERY SAD PART.
BUT NOW I AM BACK WITH SOME HAPPINESS.
UNFORTUNATELY THIS IS THE LAST PART.
I AM NOT SO HAPPY.
BUT HOPE YOU LIKE IT.

PART-11
THANK YOU

zain woke up and saw aaliya sleeping on top of him on the side. A smile crept his face as he admired her. After some time he decided to wake up too so he lightly lifted her hand which was on top of him aside. While doing this he saw her paralyzed hand. Poor thing.
kya kr rhi ho princess. Apne mamu ko bachane ke liye apni hi haath ki dhajiya uda di? kya zarurat thi unke saamne kdhe hone ki? dad ko dhakka hi maar deti side mei. Lekin nahi tumhe toh bada srk banana hai. Jaake khadi ho gyi dad ke samne. Kyun nahi samajhti ki mere se zyaada mujhe tumhari jaan pyaari hai. Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh.
saying this a lame tear escaped his eyes which woke up aaliya. She got up and saw zain crying. She slowly cupped his face with her good hand and he raised his head.
Aaliya: kya hua? ro kyun rhe ho?
Zain: aaliya. Tum pagal ho kya? Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh mei kya krta?
Aaliya: Zain-
Zain: nahi aaliya. U cant risk ur life like that.
She knew he was tensed so he hugged him. Zain was first shocked then hugged her back.
Zain: I love you Aaliya!
Aaliya: I love you too Zain!
Zain: kaash humein barkat ke intensions pehle hi pta chal chuke hote.
Fahad: dont worry Zain. Barkat ke baare mei sab pta chal gya hai.
They broke the hug and saw Fahad entering the room.
Zain n Aaliya: Kya?
Fahad: Aaliya tumhe yaad hai jab tum ek photo album dekh rhi thi jo phupi ne di thi.
Aaliya nodded.
Fahad: toh usme jo Mir Khan ke saath khadi thi woh unki beti thi Bobby Mir Khan. Well humne pta laga liya hai ki-
Zain: kya bhai?
Fahad: BARKAT HI BOBBY HAI. BOBBY MIR KHAN.
Aaliya and Zain were shocked. They looked at each other then back at Fahad.
Aaliya: aap sure hai fahad bhai?
Fahad: haan mei 100% sure hoon. Well, bobby ko laga ki yeh saari property Mir Khan ki honi chahiye kyunki yeh unki mehnat ki kamai hai. Par jab usse pta chala ki Aaliya uske raste mei aa rhi hai toh usne isse hatane ki koshish ki.
Zain and Aaliya looked at each other at this.
Fahad: toh jab dad ko construction site pe bulaya toh usne unhe tent mei aane ko kaha taaki woh kuch kha ske. Par ehem waqt pe tum dono pahaunch gye aur baaki toh tumhe pta hi hai.
Zain: toh Fahad bhai asli barkat kaha hai.
Fahad: Zain, abhi toh Mir Khan ko bhi nahi pta ki asli barkat kaha hai. Barkat 5 saal ki thi jab woh ek din kahi chali gyi. Mir Khan ne usse dhudne ki bahaut koshish ki par woh mili nahi. Humein darr hai ki woh-
saying this he shook his head in sadness. Aaliya looked at Zain who was almost about to cry. She again cupped his face as Fahad ran out of the room not wanting to show the couple his tears. She made him look into his eyes and saw how much pain was there in them. She shook her head signalling him not to cry. He immediately hugged her for support. She hugged him too. He pulled back and cupped her face now.
Zain: thank you!
Aaliya: kiske liye?
Zain: meri zindagi mei aane ke liye.
Aaliya: kitkit, jab se confess kiya hai na tab se filmi hote jaa rhe ho.
Zain: kyun mei filmi nahi ho skta?
Aaliya: chalo neeche chalte hai.
Zain smiled then nodded.

DOWNSTAIRS.
They both went downstairs and saw everyone sitting there happy as ever. Suddenly they heard someone coming. As they saw the faces. It was the Ghulam and Shabana.
Aaliya: ammi abbu!
She said as she ran to them and hugged them. Zain smiled looking at her so happy.
Shabana: Aaliya meri bacchi kesi hai tu?
Aaliya: mei theek ho ammi, abbu!
She said as she hugged Ghulam.
Ghulam: meri bacchi.
Aaliya: kese ho aap abbu?
Ghulam: meri itni pyaari bacchi ke hote huye mujhe kuch ho skta hai kya?
Zain: aslam valekum phups, aslam valekum phupa.
Aaliya turned to see Zain standing right beside her.
Shabana: valekum aslam Zain. Khyal rkh rhe ho na mere jigar ke tukde ka?
Zain: haan phups par yeh apna khayal nahi rkh rhi!
Zain said half angry while Aaliya looked at him helplessly.
Osman; Zain beta Aaliya ke saath kamre mei chale jao usne rest krna hoga.

IN ZAYA ROOM.
Zain and Aaliya walked in the room. Zain was angry at Aaliya for not taking care of herself. Aaliya walked behind him. Zain went and sat on the couch. Aaliya followed him and sat next to him.
Aaliya: kitkit tum mujhse itna ghussa kyun ho?
He remained silent still angry.
Aaliya: kitkit kuch toh bolo.
Zain: tumhari problem kya hai Aaliya? Tum samajhti kyun nahi ki tumhari zindagi pe sirf tumhara hak nhi hai. Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh mera kya hota?
Aaliya: I am so sorry kitkit.
Zain: nahi Aaliya sorry se kaam nahi chalega. Tumhe mujhe promise krna hoga.
Aaliya: kya?
Zain: ki tum kabhi bhi ese kuch nahi krogi chahe woh jisko bhi bachane ke liye ho.
Aaliya: tumhe bhi?
Zain: mujhe bhi.
Aaliya: PROMISE.
Zain: PROMISE.
They both smiled then hugged each other.

As they went back downstairs, Aayat had come down too. Aayat was in Surraiya and Osman's arms and was crying happily. When they both asked what had happened Shabana came up to Aaliya and explained her everything.
Shabana: Aaliya jab tum bahaut chhoti si thi toh Mir Khan ne iss ghar ki beti ko kidnap kr liya tha. Jab humein iss baare mei pta chala toh humne barkat ko Mir Khan ko hamesha hamesha ke liye iss ghar se nikal diya. Par humein pta nahi tha ki Mir Khan se unki beti kho gyi hai. Hume ek aur beti chahiye thi toh humne Aayat ko adopt kr liya. Par ab pta chala hai ki AAYAT HI BARKAT HAI.
Zain and Aaliya were shocked. Was this true? Zain looked at Aaliya who was almost about to cry. He held her hand for support and she looked at him and smiled. Aayat ran into Aaliya's arms and hugged her tightly.
Aayat (barkat): aap humesha meri appi rehengi?
Aaliya: humesha.
Zain: waise if you dont mind can i join the hug?
The sisters laughed as they invited Zain in their hug. They all smiled.

Back in zaya room when they came back. Aaliya was arranging things when suddenly her paralyzed hand moved.
Aaliya: Zain!
Zain: kya hua?
Aaliya: Zain mera haath hila.
Zain: kya? dikhao.
Aaliya raised her hand slowly as she was shocked as hell. A smile brimmed up their faces. She could move her hand. Zain slowly tried to move her wrist. OH MY GOD. HER PARALYZED HAND IS NOW OKAY. SHE CAN MOVE HER HAND. They both looked at each other happily and then hugged each other.
Zain: I LOVE YOU AALIYA!!
Aaliya: I LOVE YOU TOO ZAIN!!!
They both hugged each other.

THE END.
HOPE YOU LIKED IT.
ITS TOOO LONG BUT I DECIDED TO PUT AN HAPPY ENDING.
SO HERE IT IS.
PLEASE LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND LIKES.
IT TOOK ME 2 HOURS TO WRITE THIS.
AND I THINK ITS A APPRECIABLE WORK.
AND DONT AGAIN WRITE "AWESOME FF"
PLEASE WRITE MORE THAN THAT.
THANKS A LOT.😊

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Love the update dear
Oh no Poor ZaYa
so much in pain😭
but love the way hey both are with each other
Zain is a sweetheart
plz continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

thank you sooo much geet.
I hope you like the last part too.
Please like and comment on it too.
Zain is a sweetheart really.
He's awesome.
Keep commenting and liking.
Thanks a lot.😃