zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: madhuxyz
Just now read last too updates too good dear 😊
Wow sweet and cute confession loved it 😳
Zeeshan part was good
I love this zain he trusts aliya in barkats issue 😲 😛
Thanks for quick updates dear
Beautiful updates 😊

thank you sooo much dear...
confessions are cute as always...
unknowingly my every zaya work has an confession...😆
will surely updated by tomorrow...
keep commenting...
thanks a lot..😊

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey dear
First of all toh very sorry for not commenting on last part
Wahi storm n all
So electicity prob thi
Read both the parts in one go
Me just loved it
So finally ZaYa confessed
Love their confession
The way Aaliya gave answer to that zeeshan
Mazza aa gaya

ZaYa romance at its best
Me loving it

Thank god Aliya and zain se apna doubt share kar liya abt that barkat
And zain also trust his princess
So sweet of him

I so hope show mein bhi asia hi ho

So want to read more
So do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

thank you sooo much geet...
i thought that u people won't like this part bcoz i didnt think much for it...
doesnt matter... glad to know that u liked it...
will surely update by tomorrow...
and ur welcome for the pm...
keep commenting...
thanks...😊

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Wow awsm update

Loved it

Thank God zain believed aliya

Continue soon

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zayalove

@zayalove

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

I hope lyk your chp zain trsts aliya in the show also and its an amazing chp plzzz update nxt soon

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Amazing
Sorry reply still on vacation so
All the updates are amazing
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: zayalove
I hope lyk your chp zain trsts aliya in the show also and its an amazing chp plzzz update nxt soon

thank you sooo much...
i think it will happen in the show too...
there are no spoilers out yet...
i am so drowned into what is gonna happen...
i will update it today evening...
or probably after today's beintehaa ep...
thanks a lot..😊

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

HEY PEOPLE...
I KNOW I HV UPDATED FASTER THAN I TOLD U..
BUT I HAD TIME NOW ONLY...

PART-8
GOODBYE OSMAN ABDULLAH

zain woke up and saw aaliya sleeping... he sweetly admired her face... he was so happy that they had finally confessed... but then a thought ran up his mind... barkat...
aaliya ko yeh kyun lagta hai ki barkat barkat nhi hai... nahi zain... tumhe aaliya pe vishwas krna hi hoga... woh kyun bina kisi wajah ke teri behan ko galat batayegi? koi toh baat hogi na... par kya?
just then aaliya woke up and saw zain lost in deep thoughts.. she woke up and cupped his face in her hands...
aaliya: kya hua kitkit...?
zain got out of his thoughts and held her hands...
zain: kuch nhi princess... meine tumhe mkb se princess bulana shuru kr diya... aur tum mujhe abhi bhi kitkit bulati ho...
he let out the cutest pout... she giggled... then moved closer to him...
aaliya: accha toh mei tumhe zain sahb bula loon...
he grabbed her hand and she fall on his lap... he wrapped his hands around her waist...
zain: agar tumne mujhe zain sahb bulaya toh mei tumhe aaliya begum bulaoonga..
aaliya: i have no problem with that...
zain: accha theek hai phir... mei tumhe aaj jaane nhi doonga... stay here...
aaliya: zain... mamu mami wait kr rhe hai..
zain: pehle mujhe kuch accha sa do...
aaliya: kya doon?
he pointed his cheek... she glared at him... but with cutely...
aaliya: no...
zain: yes... or i wont leave u...
he held her tighter... she let out a sigh... then slowly neared his cheek... and lightly pecked there... then he pointed his lips...
aaliya: zain... tumne confess kiya hai iska matlab yeh nahi hai kuch bhi milega... ab mujhe jaane do...
she got out of his grip and ran towards the bathroom.. he was left back smiling...
tum itni khush ho aaliya... mei tumhe phirse uss baare mei yaad nahi dilana chahta... par mujhe yeh janana hi hoga ki barkat mei ese kya hai ki aaliya ko lga ki woh barkat nhi hai... zain abdullah ab sab kuch usse hi kehna hai.. par meine toh usse promise kiya tha ki mei usse kuch nhi chupaoonga.. sorry princess... par mei tumhe abhi nhi bta skta... m sorry...
he heaved a sigh and got up himself... aaliya came out... they smiled... while he went inside bathroom aaliya took out his clothes...

DOWNSTAIRS...
zain and aaliya reached the dinning table.. both holding hands.. which didnt go unnoticed by anyone present on the table...
zain: aslam valekum dad.. aslam valekum mom...
aaliya: aslam valekum mami... aslam valekum mamu...
surraiya just nodded.. she was too annoyed with aaliya... she could have lost her son because of her...
osman: valekum aslam... aao bheto..
they both sat...
osman: sorry mei kal dang se puch nhi paaya... kesi rhi tumhari trip?
they both looked at each other..
osman: lagta hai kuch bahaut accha hua hai miya-biwi ke beech...
zain: nahi dad esa kuch nhi hai...
osman: woh toh dikh hi rha hai kesa hai...
aaliya stuffed her mouth to hide embarrassment... while he looked at her...

LATER THAT DAY...
while aaliya was in the kitchen... zain was in office... osman was at home... he got a call from barkat...
*call*
bobby: hello...
osman: barkat bete.. kya hua? kaha ho tum?
bobby: abbu mei yaha construction site pe hu.. yaha kuch help chahiye aap aayenge?
osman: construction site.. tum waha akele kyun gyi?
bobby: abbu woh meine soccha ki kuch kaam hoga...
osman: kaam hoga? chalo theek hai.. mei aata hoon...
bobby: ji abbu (she said as a evil smirk crept upon her face)
*call ends*
aaliya was standing right behind him.. she had brought tea for him.. she didnt herself knew but somehow she knew that something is not right... she couldnt let a imposter effect her family... osman turned around...
osman: arre aaliya... kya hua?
aaliya: mamu.. woh.. woh... chai...
osman: haan bete mei abhi construction site jaa rha hoon... barkat akele waha pahauch gyi hai... pta nhi kyun... keh rhi hai ki kuch zaruri kaam hai... mei raat tak lot aaunga...
aaliya: theek hai mamu... khuda afiz...
osman: khuda afiz...

just as osman went out of the house... aaliya called up zain...
*call*
zain: hello?
aaliya: hello..
zain: kya hua princess meri itni yaad aa rhi hai kya?
aaliya: zain tum construction site pe pahaucho... abhi...
zain: construction site?
aaliya: haan...
zain: par kyun?
aaliya: zain woh sab batane ka waqt nhi hai... tum ghar aao.. mei tumhare saath chalti hoon...
zain: accha theek hai mei aata hoon..
*call ends*

zain reaches barkat villa... he blows the horn... aaliya knows its zain... she runs outside the house informing chand bibi... she reached the car and quickly opened the door..
zain: aaliya yeh toh batao hua kya hai?
aaliya: zain tum jaldi gadi start kro...
zain: ya... ok... ok...
on the way...
zain: ab toh batao...
aaliya: zain barkat construction site pe pahaunchi huyi hai... usne mamu ko phone kiya aur kaha ki kuch kaam hai... pta nahi kyun zain mujhe lagta hai ki kuch galat hai... mujhe uske irade theek nahi lgte... tum jaldi kro..
zain: haan...
TO BE CONTINUED..
A/N:
because of i am not getting enough replies i wont give the update fast... so as i always say the more replies i get the faster i update... if i wont get 7-9 replies by tomorrow i wont continue to till day after tomorrow.. these are the terms n conditions... so its up to all of u... if u wnt the next part fast keep commenting and liking...😛 sorry its a bit long... but manage...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
THANKS A LOT...😊

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago