zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14) - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Thanks for updating dear
Love the part so much
Beautifully written
Thayt Barkat na
I wish wo goli usse lag gayi hoti
Love the way you showed Zain pain for her princess
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care
Lots of Love
Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Thanks for updating dear
Love the part so much
Beautifully written
Thayt Barkat na
I wish wo goli usse lag gayi hoti
Love the way you showed Zain pain for her princess
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care
Lots of Love
Geet


thanks a lot geet...
like always thanks a lot to you to appreciate my work...
i know this part was a bit painful... but it will get better as aaliya will progress...
if i had more time i could have stretched the story... but i am kinda not into this story anymore... i have new ideas coming into my mind so i prefer to pen them down other than keep continuing this story...
but i will stop at the 11th chapter only...
dont you worry...
and pls keep commenting geet...
love to read ur reviews...
thanks a lot..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
fantastic update
Aliya is truly a guarding angel, she save her mamu and got shot.
I hope she will gt fine soon.
Barkaat did very wrong trying to kill osman.
update next chapter soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

fantastic update

Aliya is truly a guarding angel, she save her mamu and got shot.
I hope she will gt fine soon.
Barkaat did very wrong trying to kill osman.
update next chapter soon
thanks for the PM


thank you sooo much...
ya sometimes these bahu, biwi, whatever come really good in daily soaps...
but I think that they always appear good... whatever it is...
will surely update by tomorrow...
till then shower this with ur reviews...
thanks a lot and ur welcum..
😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Very sad update but it was really nice😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

Very sad update but it was really nice😊


thanks a lot.
Really appreciate it.
Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Hey its really sad plzzz update by tomorrow cant wait to read what will happen to our alu jst cant wait to read plzzz update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Hey I am here with a new part.
Here you go:

Zain: AALIYA!!! AALIYA PLEASE AANKHE KHOLO!!!
Aaliya slowly started to open her eyes. A smiled brimmed up Zain's face.
Zain: Aaliya. Aaliya aankhe mat band krna. Ab mei tumhe sone nhi dunga.
Aaliya: Zain?
Zain: haan tumhara Zain. Princess please ankhe mat band krna.
Osman: Zain we should go to the hospital.
Zain: haan dad. Aap gadi kholiye mei aata hoon.
He picked her up in his arms and then sat in the car. Zain was still trying to keep Aaliya awaken.
Zain: Aaliya!!! Aaliya please mujhse baat kro. daaton mujhe. Mujhe kitkit bulao. Please Aaliya.
Aaliya: Zain?
Zain: please Aaliya mei tumhare bina nhi ji paunga. Tumhe kuch hi gya toh mei nhi bachunga.
Osman: driver kya kr rhe ho? jaldi chalao.
Driver: ji sahb.

They reached the hospital and Aaliya was immediately taken to the hospital. Osman informed everyone and they came to the hospital panting. But the most worried person? Well that would be her husband, Zain. He was worried as hell. But he knew one thing for sure. That if she dies, he knows what to do.

20 minutes passed and the whole Abdullah family waited outside. The doctor came and Zain rushed to her. She had a frown which turned into a smile.
Zain: doctor. Aaliya. is she okay?
Doc: she is okay. But the gun shot reached her veins.
Zain: so.
Doc: well the gun shot has damaged some important organs in her body which are not clearly visible to us. As the gunshot has reached the veins there is a slight chance of-
Zain: of what??
Doc: SHE IS PARALYZED.
They whole Abdullah family went in deep shock. Zain was almost about to faint when Osman came from behind and catches him from falling. He felt guilty. It was all his fault, he thought. How could he do this to her? She did so much for his family? How could she be-? No, this was all wrong. S**t! Why ddint he step in front of Osman and save both of them? What has he done?

Doc: only one can go in.
Osman: Zain bte tum jao.
He nodded.
He stepped in to the ward and saw her laying there. Oxygen mask attached to her mouth. Drip on her hand. She was terrible. He slowly walked up to her as the nurse removed the oxygen mask and left the room.
Zain: hey princess.
Aaliya: Zain?
Zain: how r u?
Aaliya: cant you see how I am?
Zain felt bad as her smile turned into a sad face.
Zain: I love you.
He leant down and kissed on her forehead.
Fahad: dekha dad. Yaha bhi romance shuru.
Fahad walked inside with Osman, both laughing.
Osman: Zain todha wait kr lete. Waise bhi hum Aaliya ko ghar le jaa rhe hai.
Zain: really dad?
Osman nodded. Zain smiled looking at Aaliya.
Surraiya: haan Osman sahb. Lekin Zain se wait kaha kiya jaata hai. Kyun Zain?
Surraiya entered smiling sweetly looking at Aaliya.
Shazia and Nafisa: waise agar room mei jagah bachi ho toh kya hum bhi aa skte hai?
They both entered with great smiles. They finally accepted Aaliya.

AT HOME.
Zain and Aaliya entered as Zain supported Aaliya walk by holding her waist and her hand around his shoulder. They reached their room. It was quite a night so they decided to sleep. At night Aaliya kept changing her sides. Not being able to sleep. Zain saw here and felt bad for her. He slowly and gently pulled her on top of him. He held her waist for support and then gently left her paralyzed hand on his chest. He smiled at her and kissed on her forehead. Aaliya closed her eyes to let the feeling sink in her.
Zain: I love you soo much!!!
Aaliya: I love you too!!!
They both slept.

Thank you soo much for reading.
Pls like and comment.
Biggest support ever.
And don't just write "awesome os".
Please write long replies.
Thanks a lot. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Wow awsm update
Loved it
Felt bad for aliya
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Okay will not write awesome
Its amazing dear, its a cute os 😊 loved it
All chudails became Sweet at a time
Poor aliya hope she recover soon 😊
Thanks for Update

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