zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12
I read all your updates in one go, its amazing👏

thank you sooo much...
and ur kinda lucky u didnt have to wait like others...
glad to know u liked it...
thank you sooo much..😃

Quote

sahar

@...Smile...

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: zaya15

thank you sooo much...
and ur kinda lucky u didnt have to wait like others...
glad to know u liked it...
thank you sooo much..😃

No problem😊, just update the next part soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

No problem😊, just update the next part soon

yeah sure...
thanks...😃

Quote

Tamihna

@Tamihna

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Again, just mind boggling! You write dome great stuff! Continue sprinkling your magic, if you have time do read a story i write which is on a website called MyeDuniya, Beintehaa and My story is called Love will blossom... I would love it if just took a look.

Quote

Tamihna

@Tamihna

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Sorry that was meant to say some not dome

Quote

Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Tamihna
Again, just mind boggling! You write dome great stuff! Continue sprinkling your magic, if you have time do read a story i write which is on a website called MyeDuniya, Beintehaa and My story is called Love will blossom... I would love it if just took a look.

thank you sooo much...
will surely read urs tooo...
i believe u r an awesome writer...
will surely read it...
thanks a lot...😃

Quote

Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

HEY PEOPLE...
I AM HERE WITH A BRAND NEW PART...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
EVEN IF U DON'T LIKE IT...
HOPE YOU LIKE IT...

PART-7
TIME TO GO BACK

finally the roads were clear... zain and aaliya were in no mood to go back but had to... while aaliya was packing the stuff... zain was looking at her... he stood behind her and hugged her from back... aaliya turned around her head... he settled his head on her shoulder...
zain: mujhe waapis nahi jaana...
she turned around... and placed her hands on his shoulder while he grabbed her waist..
aaliya: jaana toh padega..
he grabbed her more closer..
zain: lekin mujhe yahi rehna hai... ghar jaake no privacy...
aaliya: kitkit... chhodo... mujhe packing krni hai... warna late ho jayenge... driver bhaiya wait kr rhe hai...
zain: mann toh tumhara bhi nahi hai...
she got out of his grip... and ran away
zain: princess!

AT BARKAT VILLA...
zain and aaliya had finally reached barkat villa... on the other side barkat was planning to shoot osman... she didn't knew that zain and aaliya were coming back... now she thought that aaliya will make her work more difficult...
as zain and aaliya entered everyone was waiting... they hugged everyone... and everyone asked about there health.. etc.. etc...

IN ZAYA ROOM...
aaliya had started unpacking stuff... zain was sitting on the bed admiring her... she caught him staring at her...
aaliya: kitkit mujhe pta hai ki mei bahaut sundar hoon... par kam se kam don't stare...
zain got up and pinned her to the wall...
zain: princess tumhe zyaada bhau khaane ki koi zarurat nhi hai...
he slowly neared her lips...
aaliya: MAMU!
he turned around and saw no one... she started giggling... he glared at her with anger.. she knew he was upto something... she ran from there and zain followed her... she climbed up the bed... zain kept chasing her at the edges... both were getting kinda tired of this... she got off from the bed and he pinned her on to the wall... again...
aaliya: zain.. tum bahaut besharam ho...
zain: haan toh theek hai na hoon besharam...
he neared her lips again...
"aaliya!" osman called her from probably downstairs... she pushed zain to side and ran away...
zain: meri princess itni strong hai aaj pta chala
he said as a smile crept her face.. he followed her downstairs..

DOWNSTAIRS...
aaliya came and stood next to her mamujaan...
aaliya: kya hua mamu?
osman: beta mei construction site pe jaa rha hoon.. zain se kehna ki woh kal se office aana shuru kr de...
aaliya: theek hai...
osman: ok.. khuda afiz...
aaliya: khuda afiz mamu... apna khayal rkhiyega...
as osman was about to leave someone called him out...
barkat (bobby): abbu...
osman: barkat...
bobby: abbu kya mei bhi aapke saath chal skti hoon?
osman: haan zarur lekin tum wahan krogi kya?
bobby: actually abbu mei todha bore ho rhi thi... toh soccha aapke saath chaloon..
osman: theek hai chalo...
bobby followed osman outside... her evil smirk didn't go unnoticed by aaliya...

BACK IN ZAYA ROOM...
zain went back to their room... aaliya came in with a confused look.. zain reached her...
zain: kya hua princess?
aaliya: kuch nhi zain... tum change kr aao... kal se tumhe office jaana hai...
she walked past him... still thinking of something... this made zain scared... he knew that although aaliya helped everyone in his family... no scratch that 'her' family... she never shared her own problems... this kind of troubled zain... he decided to talk to her... the whole day she ignored him when he asked what's wrong.. she always made a way out of their conversation... this was getting more and more scaring for zain... he didn't wanna see his princess in this condition... he couldn't see her tensed...

AT NIGHT...
zain was sleeping with his hand over aaliya while she was facing the other side... zain was sleeping peacefully while aaliya was lost in deep thoughts...
barkat ne esi shakal kyun bana li... usne mir khan ki bail kyun karai jabki mir khan ne hi usko kidnap kiya tha... barkat krna kya chahti hai? uss din meine usse jab pucha toh usne zain ko mere khilaf badhkhane ki koshish kyun ki? kya woh mujhse isliye itni nafrat krti hai ki mir khan mere chachu the? nahi nahi... phir woh bail kyun karati? kuch toh gadbad hai... ya allah... mei kya karu... mei zain ko bhi nahi bta skti... woh apni behan pe andha vishwa krta hai... phirse humare beech mei koi misunderstanding na ho jaye... allah mere parivaar ki ifazat kriega...
zain woke up and saw that aaliya was still awake... he got scared... he raised his head...
zain: kya hua princess?
she turned her head around...
aaliya: ohh sorry... meine tumhe utha diya hoga... tum so jao... good night...
she went back to her position... he turned her around...
zain: kya hua hai princess... tum itni tensed kyun ho?
aaliya: kuch nhi hua hai zain...
zain: tumne hi woh vada kiya tha ki tum mujhse kuch nhi chupaogi... vada todh rhi ho? mujhpe itna bhi vishwas nhi krti? batado... mann halka ho jayega..
aaliya: zain... barkat..
zain: kya hua barkat ko?
aaliya: zain mujhe lagta hai ki barkat kuch galat kr rhi hai...
zain: galat kr rhi hai? matlab?
aaliya: zain uss din barkat ne mir khan ki bel kraiyi thi... woh bahaut strange behave kr rhi hai... uske baad usne mujhe aur tumhe alag krne ki koshish ki... zain meine sacch mei usse nafisa bhabhi aur shazia bhabhi se baat krte dekha... aur uss din jab tum mujhse ghussa the ki meine barkat se woh sab kaha aur woh apni kalaiyi katne lagi thi... woh apni kalayi katne ka natak kr rhi thi... woh hass rhi thi... aur phir tum waha pahauch gye...
by this she started crying... zain felt bad... she grabbed her closer and hugged her... she went deep into his embrace...
zain: i am soo sorry princess... par tumhara matlab kya hai?
aaliya: zain i think ki woh batwara krana chahti hai.. i think she is not barkat...
zain got shocked...
aaliya: zain mujhe pta hai ki tum mujhe vishwas nhi karoge par-
zain; i trust you...
aaliya: huh?
zain: mujhe pta hai ki meri princess mujhse kabhi jhut nhi bolti...
aaliya smiled... he smiled too...
zain: i love you...
aaliya: i love you too...
they both smiled...
zain: ab so jao... good night...
aaliya: good night...
they both slept peacefully...
TO BE CONTINUED...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
HUGE SUPPORT...
NEXT PART BY TOMORROW...
THANKS :)

Quote

katmaan

@katmaan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Awesome part ...and do update soon ...

Quote

Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Hey dear
First of all toh very sorry for not commenting on last part
Wahi storm n all
So electicity prob thi
Read both the parts in one go
Me just loved it
So finally ZaYa confessed
Love thier confession
The way Aliya gave answer to that zeeshan
Mazza aa gaya

ZaYa romance at its best
Me loving it

Thank god Aliya and zain se apna doubt share kar liya abt that barkat
And zain also trust his princess
So sweet of him

I so hope show mein bhi asia hi ho

So want to read more
So do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

Quote

suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Just now read last too updates too good dear 😊
Wow sweet and cute confession loved it 😳
Zeeshan part was good
I love this zain he trusts aliya in barkats issue 😲 😛
Thanks for quick updates dear
Beautiful updates 😊

Quote

1 ... 4 5 6 7 8 ... 11

zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14) - Page 6

Related Topics

Explore Topics