zaya ff: is confessing that difficult?COMPLETD(LAST PRT UPDATED PG 14)

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Tamihna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

This story is amazing! Just wonderful! Keep up the great work! 😊

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Geeta singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Awwiee

no need to say sorry sweet

completely understand

love the update

ZaYa in t-shirt and jeans

Ab Zain ne stare toh karna hi tha

oh no

Zeeshan is back

I am sure kuch na kuch interesting zarur hoga

can't wait to read more

so do continue soon

Take care

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago

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Nandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Awwiee
no need to say sorry sweet
completely understand
love the update
ZaYa in t-shirt and jeans
Ab Zain ne stare toh karna hi tha
oh no
Zeeshan is back
I am sure kuch na kuch interesting zarur hoga
can't wait to read more
so do continue soon
Take care

Geet

thank you sooo much geet...
i knew u would understand...
yeah i haven't planned anything yet...
but i will make it really nice...
thank you sooo much...🤗

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Nandini

@cupcaked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

HEYA PEOPLE I AM BACK...
THIS ONE'S A LITTLE LONG...
AND HERE'S MY DUKHBHARI KAHANI...
today because of the storm my set top box is not working... and i won't be able to watch beintehaa... pls give ur sympathy guys... and i don't think i would be able to watch it tomorrow also... i really apologize for this thing as i know u didnt wanna read this junk... but i am soo sad...
so here you go with the next part...

PART-6

zain and aaliya looked ar zeeshan... then they looked at each other... he smiled and then walked up to them...
zeeshan: hi...
they both remained silent...
zeeshan: kya hua?
zain felt bad for aaliya as she was too scared... he didn't really know that what is the thing to be scared... zeeshan is also a person although... not a ghost... but still was angry because of the claims he put on aaliya at the time of nikaah...
zain: tum yaha kya kr rhe ho?
zeeshan: zain usman abdullah... yeh tumhara akele ka hotel nhi hai... mei bhi yaha aa skta hoon... oh... hi aaliya...
she looked at zeeshan who was smiling... zain looked at aaliya who had gone angry by now...
aaliya: zeeshan ahmed... tumhare mamu ko abhi bhi kisi pe bhi umli uthane ki aadat hai ya woh chutt gyi... nikaah toh ho hi gya hoga tumhara...
zeeshan's smile vanished... zain looked at aaliya kinda proud of her... not like a father i tell u...
zeeshan: nhi mei abhi bhi single hoon...
aaliya: pta hi tha... tumhare jaise ullu se nikaah konsi pagal ladki karegi...
zeeshan: mind ur language...
aaliya: huh... tum jaise toh single hi theek hai... nhi toh woh bechari ladki jiske palle tum padh gye... aur u listen... mei bahaut khush ho ki mera nikaah tumse nhi hua... aur ki tumhare mamu ne soccha ki zain aur mere beech mei koi rishta hai... aur pta hai ek rishta hai bhi... jo agar hum dono ka nikaah na bhi hota na toh bhi rehta... aur woh pta hai kya hai... pyaar ka rishta... jo tum jaise log kabhi nhi samajh payenge... kyunki jinn logo ke paas dil nhi hota na woh kabhi pyaar nhi kr skte...
saying this she glared into zeeshan's eyes who was fuming with anger... she took zain's hand as they walked out to the cafeteria... zain didnt really know why.. but he was feeling like the luckiest person on earth... so maybe aaliya was the girl... the girl who he had dream of... the girl who he thought would be exactly like him... aaliya was exactly like him...
together they sat on the table and then odered food... while aaliya started on food... zain kept staring her.. he was yet too stunned to be able to take in the shock... aaliya noticed that he wasn't eating anything so she picked up some in a spoon and placed it before his mouth and signalled him to eat it... he was first shocked but then took in the bite... aaliya took back her hand and smiled... after zain had finished he decided to cover his curiousity...
zain: woh kya tha?
aaliya: kya kya tha?
zain: wohi jo tumne andhar zeeshan se bola..
aaliya: ohh woh... ek aaliya zain abdullah ke dwaara likhi gyi speech thi.. ek copy chahiye?
zain was shocked... he hadn't seen this aaliya anytime.. this confident aaliya... but he kinda liked this aaliya more...
zain: nhi... par tumne zeeshan se kaha ki hum dono ki beech ek rishta hai?
he said wide a smirk on his lips...
aaliya: zain abdullah mei toh tumhe idiot samajhti thi.. lekin tum toh maha idiot nikle...
zain frowned...
aaliya: nikaah krne se rishta hi toh bnta hai... pta nhi tha tumhe? lagta hai girlfriends aur parties ke alava kissi aur cheez pe dhyan nhi diya aaj tak...
zain got angry... but he wasn't gonna step back...
zain: pyaar ka rishta...
aaliya dropped her spoon...
zain: tumne kaha tha ki hum dono ki beech mei pyaar ka rishta hai...
aaliya was out of words... but gathering all the courage that was left in her she spoke...
aaliya: zain main-
he cut her between her words...
zain: i love u...
aaliya was shocked...
aaliya: what??
zain: i love u... itna bhi samajh nhi aata...
she got up from her seat and hugged zain as tightly as she could...
aaliya: i love u too...
zain was soo happy... she loved him back... he still teased her...
zain: mamu ki bhanji kya kr rhi ho... logo ko pta chal jayega ki tum pagal ho...
aaliya playfully punched zain while he giggled...
aaliya: shut up zain... u r ruining the moment...
zain then hugged her back...

IN THEIR ROOM...
they walked inside their room and changed their clothes... since they thought it was too late night and the other one is feeling sleepy they decided to sleep... at night they both weren't able to sleep they kept on changing sides to fall asleep... finally when they faced each other they realized that the other one was not feeling sleepy too...
zain: neend nhi aa rhi?
aaliya: no... tumhe?
zain: nah...
they both: mujhe laga tumhe-
they both stopped then giggled... zain raised his hand and kept it on her waist...
zain: toh tumne pehle i love u kyun nhi kaha...
aaliya: kyunki phir mujhe upper hand na milta... jo ki ab mujhe mil chuka hai...
zain: excuse me... agar mei i love u na bolta na toh hum dono abhi bhi chup chap bhete hote...
aaliya: accha yeh batao tumhe dreams aate the... uss ladki ke jisse tum shaadi krna chahte ho... faceless dreams...
zain nodded...
aaliya: sacchi mujhe bhi aate the... lekin tumse milne ke baad unme faces aane lag gye...
zain: kisske?
aaliya: tumhare...
she said as she leaned towards his shoulder and placed her head on it...
zain: accha? lekin mujhe toh abhi tak tumhare faces waale dreams nhi aate...
she raised her head...
zain: mujhe dreams aane ki kya zarurat hai... jab tum mere samne ho...
she smiled and then placed back her head...
aaliya: i love u kitkit...
zain: love u too mkb...
and they both fall asleep...
TO BE CONTINUED...
HOPE YOU ALL LIKED IT...
PLS LEAVE UR COMMENTS AND LIKES...
PLS PLS PLS DO...
ITS REALLY MEANS A LOOOTTT TO MEEE...
THHHAAANNNKKK YOUUU SOOO MMMUUUCCHHH...😃

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow lovely update

Loved it

Very beautifully written

Sweet and cute confession

Continue soon

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

lovelu updates

story is going great

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ZayaShiz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

A veryyy good one!!

Loved it a loot! So sweet!

N poor dear..u didnt watch d epi!! Hope u c t soon!😊

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Nandini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Humzy
Wow lovely update
Loved it
Very beautifully written
Sweet and cute confession
Continue soon

thank you sooo much...
confessions are cute as always...
will surely continue by today...
thanks a lot...😃

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Nandini

@cupcaked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz
A veryyy good one!!
Loved it a loot! So sweet!
N poor dear..u didnt watch d epi!! Hope u c t soon!😊

thanks a ton...
glad to know u liked it...
yeah will see it soon... but the problem is no beintehaa repeats on tv today...
heard that beintehaa yesterday came super duper awesome...
now maybe i will have to watch it on internet...
but u don't worry beintehaa toh mei dekh ke hi rhungi...😆
thank you sooo much...😊