--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i have posted it in two thread but thought of posting it seperately plz ignore typo mistake there r many 😃


Here is MY FF guide




Anandi in trouble

''Anandi !!anandi utho utho anandi plz plz!!!''cried Shiv While patting Anandi's wet face !!

It had been raining heavily in jaitsar and surrounding areas for past one week !! so much rain was never seen for so many years ..Most of the village got flooded and immense loss of property!!Today the sky had cleared up briefly and Anandi had gone to her school to check what was the condition there !! She had been trying to save the school from much damage .. Although DS told not to go alone she went alone and nw its almost late evening and rains have again started pouring Heavily ...
DS being worried that anandi hasnt returned yet and even her phone wasnt responding .Being worried DS decided to call Shiv and Informed him about the situation ..

Shiv quickly hurried to the school using his jeep when he reached there he saw the area was heavily flooded he left his jeep and waded through knee deep water and entered the school premises !! Their he saw Anandi floating in water and unconsious the school roof has got damaged and water was pouring in ...

Cut to present :

He had learnt mouth to mouth resuscitation and was thinking whether he should do it or not he was in great dilemma !! but no it was about someone's life and no thinking about wat everyone else will think i have to save Anandi ab jo hoga woh dekha jayega !! and he proceeded putting his lips above hers and blowing in air !! Common anadi wake up plz tumhe jagna hi hoga !!

''Cough coughhh!! ''
''Anandi tum thik ho na thank god anandi ek pal ke liye mujhe laga i will loose u forever ''said Shiv and hugged her out of happiness..
''Collector saab app yahan mujhe kya hua tha mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahin aa raha''

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Specially dedicated to anjana for her superb OS
This is my very first fiction writing in IF hope u Guys liked it i know its not that good But i tried my best
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Keep writing dear... as you know practice makes perfect :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks noureen but no one commented 😭
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Originally posted by: funky_junkie

Awesome...wish it happens😃

thank u 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice Ritzi ... !


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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one ritzi.hope it happens in reality.plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG!! ridti...awesome 👏

i want the CVs to show it in the show too.. 😛
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OMG!! ridti...awesome 👏

i want the CVs to show it in the show too.. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THANK U ALL U ALL LIKED IT THATS ENOUGH FOR ME am getting emotional nw !!🤔 i will try my best to to write one better next time !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow Ritzi, good job 👏

Mouth to mouth resuscitation? Collector and Sarpanch? 😆

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