--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: monamie111
aww...i just finished reading last two parts...thanks a lot for the PM ritzi otherwise i would have missed it! 😛...gr8t going...sweet updates...loved it! 😳...will wait for ur next update! 😃

thanks a lot mona ya will pm u surely !! again !!!

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Khusi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

😆..good...waiting for more

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MercurialMedusa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Ritzi when r u updating yaar??? jaldi se update karo..

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mbloves

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

omg😲! WRITER RITZI GUPTA! s here😆.i read & believe me it's very good! ur 1 attempt s really appreciated..👏👏keep ri8tng m&m!😉my undage baby🤣 only4 u🤗🤗

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

@sou well i havent even typed a single word yet my plot is still underconstruction in my head sorry to disappoint but tumhari baatoan ne mujhe lazzy banne ke baachaye Its time for action i will update in 2 days promise

@Saru I am 😲reading ur comment u commented wow thanx a ton it means a lot 😃

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mbloves

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ritzi12
@sou well i havent even typed a single word yet my plot is still underconstruction in my head sorry to disappoint but tumhari baatoan ne mujhe lazzy banne ke baachaye Its time for action i will update in 2 days promise

@Saru I am 😲reading ur comment u commented wow thanx a ton it means a lot 😃

.....omg! ur welcome😳 so my undge writer baby!when'll u ri84 csam😆m waiting!😉

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

i cant write for csam i have lost interest in it !!!

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

SHIV STAY AT HAVELI---Part ||

Next morning ...

Anandi wakes up ,her body is aching and so is her head she remebrs last night's incident and thinks that yesterday was an eventful and tragic day ...She gets ready and sits in front of mirror thinking...

Pata nahin kitna nuksaan ho gaya hain kaise sab gaon waale wapas guzaraa karenge iss baarish ke karan so musibaat aayi hain yeh aage na ho isska bandobast karna hoga phele main

bahar jakar dekhti hun ..

She walks out of her room and is astonished to see that she has woken up very late its already 10 o clock !!! She sees DS ,bhairon sitting in hall worried she descends down the stairs..

DS on seeing anandi says "Uth gaayi chodi thado tabiyat kaise lag rahi hain zyada kamzoori toh na ho raahi niche aane ka kya zaroorat tha kuch chahiye tha toh awaaz laga deti "

"naahin dadisa main thik hun pata nahin itni deri kaise ho gaayi uthne mein par aap log itne pareshan kyun hain ??kal ki baarish ke wajah se kya kaafi nuksaan hua hain ??"

"arre nahin anandi beta woh collector saab hain na unko kaafi tez bukhar ho gaya hain lagta hain kal bheeg jaane ke karan aisa huya hain kaafi kamzoor ho gaaye hain "said bhairon .

" accha unhen bhi dawaai le leni chahiye thi zukahm ki toh aisa nahin hota unhein toh aise bhi naksid ki bemaari hain iss karan aur khatra ho gaya "replied anandi worried

"Anandi lal singh ka phone nahin lag raha hain main jaake doc saab ko lata hun isse phele zyada der ho Masa"said bhairon

'haan bhairoon tu jaa 'DS

"par tausa kahan hain woh naahin gaaye doc saab ko laane aur nazar bhi nahin aa rahe "aske Anandi

"Arre beta woh kisi sarkari kaam ke karan savere hi nikal gaya "Bhairon

"Jaa beta tu bhi jaake Shiv ko dekh le usse aacha lagega woh toh devi maiyya ki kripa thi jo woh samay pe pahuch gaya warna na jaane tu kis haal mein hoti laakh laakh shukr hain "DS

"haan dadisa apne thik kaha maine toh unhe dhanya waad bhi nahin kaha main collectorsaab ko dekh kar aati hoon "replied Anandi and went away!!

She goes to Shiv's room and sees there Shiv sleeping with his eyes closed she enters the room and stares at him she lightly touches his forehead and feels its burning

arre inhe toh kaafi tez bukhar ho rakha hain inhe patti lagani chahiye taisa se kheti hun ..

and she turns to leave

"AAAnandiii"

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From this Point i will post two different plots and all of u have to like neone the Plot which will get more likes will win !!