--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
ss gang & mika's 😉 effect😆 , good ritzi keep writing!my baby ! growing 😆😆very super fast🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like plot 2 better! I think Anandi seems nicer. lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
I like the bijli gull part 😊
Bijli gull karwa di hai to ab aage bhi jaldi badho 😉
An thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Hey I liked both😆 but 2nd is better😳 No lights and AnSh alone!!!! What more can I ask for😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Ritziii first of all BIG 🤗 to u for updating ek nahin balke do plots 😃 I know I am late to read & comment Sowwieee... I absolutely loved both versions of the story.. but as its impossible to have both in the story I choose the 2nd plot.. abhi please update soon sweets..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
haha everyone loved second part even me too !! thanks Khusi kavita sou 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ritziii when r u updating it sweets??? jaldi update karo 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ansh --Lights out

Shiv thinks tat is he dreaming or is the moment or present situtation is really true he was lost nw in his thoughts that he is in haveli ANandi ji infront of him no one here and no light also all alone him and She ...his heart skipped
Nahin mujhe kuch zyada nahin sochna chahiye anandi ji pareshan hain and hw can i be happy !!

Anandi meanwhile trying to call from her cell to DS but network is not working !!SHe goes to landline and calls finally it got connected
"hello dadisa ap kab aayengi kitne der lagegi yahan bijli chali gaayi hain makkan kaka bhi pata nahin kahan hain "said Anandi worried .Shiv staring his princess !!
"arre chodi hum mein bhi thodi der ho gaayi tu ghar se bahar an nikalio Shiv hain na udhar samabahl ke rehna !!"said DS
"Ji collector saab hain par aap log jaldi aayie!!"said anandi and kept the phone
Shiv comes out of his lala land !!
"Aheem !!Anandi ji kab aayengi dadiji ??"asked SHiv trying to sound serious !!
"abhi toh unhone kaha hain aane mein der ho jayegi bola hain bahar naa jaane baas bijli aa jaaye jald se !"said anadi very much tensed

ANd she left from there Shiv asked "aap kahan jaa raahi hain ??"
"Khana banae aap ne bhi kuch khaya nahin hoga savere se sirf soup hi piya hain !!"replied Anandi and went to kitchen .
Shiv sits for a while trying to read but cant all words swim before his eyes ..
He goes to kitchen and stands at door and asks "Ji kya mujhe anadar aane ki izajat mil sakti hain ??"he aske wid his cunning smile .
Anandi "arre aap yahan kya kar raahe hain appki tabyat kharab hain na app baithiye main bas laati hun !!"she said stirring vegetables .
Shiv "ji main baithe baithe bore ho raha hun aise bhi mujhe app kaafi better feel kar raha hain !!"
he enters and smells "Wow khusboo kaafi aachi hain waise app halwa nahin bana raahi hain maaf kijiye aap mere liye itna kuch kar rahi hain aur main fir bhi farmmaish kiya jaa raha hoon !!"

Anandi smiles and says "Thoda sabar kijiye main yeh sabzi banae ke baad halwa banae hi waali thi appko kaafi pasand hain na app hain itne kadak par shauk mitha ka hain hehe"she giggles and Shiv too laughs


He then helps Anandi to make halwa and then comes out of Kitchen carrying bowLs to dinning table ..
As he keeps the bowls on table he notices a Shadow moving behind the sofa and then hears a sound of footsteps !!
Anandi too comes taking plate and wen she was about to say something Shiv grabs her arm and signals to be quietand den Points towards the shadow
she is confused and den shiv grabs a stick from behind the door of one room and moves stealthily towards sofa he lifts his arm is about to hit the intruder but just then he is slashed with knife
on right forearm ..Anandi is shocked Shiv overpowers the man and finally throws the knife Anandi is shouting "Chor !!Shiv sambhalke "
Shiv tells "tum jaise logon ki jagah jail mein hain abhi tumhe saahi jagah pahuchata hun !!"He grabs the collar of man and drags him just then lights come

And infront of them is a weak haggard looking old man with tattered clothes ..
he is crying and pleads"maaf kijiye saab ji par maine aapko jaan buchke nahin maara woh main ghara gaya tha aapko laathi ke saath dekh ke aur na jaane kaise darr ke maare haath chal gaya main toh bas socha tha kuch khane ko mil jaata toh chala jaata main chor nahin "

Shiv asks "agar chor nahin ho toh chupe hue kyun the aur khana hi chahiye tha toh maan glete hum de dete "
"Maine kaai gharoon mein maanga par sab gusse se muh par darwaza baandh kar dete isliye socha khana churana hi padega galati ho gaayi maaf kar dijiye !!"said the old man
Shiv was relented seeing the old man and gave him some money and card of his office asking him to contact for some work and help and lets him go !!
Meanwhile Shiv's kurta is stained red anandi says "Appka ka toh kaafi khun nikal raha hain aap baithey main aabhi patti lati hun !!"
She hurries away inside and comes with first aid box then she pulls up his sleeve cleans the wound and applies ointment and then ties patti and all this time Shivu dearest is busy staring lovingly at Anandi


[Meanwhile In Collector sahab's office Bheem singh receives a call ...]
Bheem Singh :Hello Jaitsar collector's office ..
Woman :Ji Shivraj Shekhar ji se baat ho sakti hain ??
Bheem :Ji woh office nahin aaye hain apko koi message hain toh bol dijiye waise app kaun bol rahi hain ??
Woman :Ji main Shivraj ki maa bol raahi hun uska mobile nahin lag raha naahin uske ghar ka phone koi utha raha hain !!usse kheye ga ki hum log usse Milne jaitsar aa rahe hain !!MR.singh
Bheem singh is speechless he tries to say something but fumbles and the call gets disconnected ..

PART ||

AT HAVELI ...

Shiv thanks Anandi and Just then DS and ghena enters along wid bhairon who is accompanied by LAL singh
Shiv gets up and touches DS feet .
DS asks "Yeh kya hua Choda haath pe kaise laga ?"
Bhairon too is shocked .Anandi explains everything and both DS and bhairon thanks SHiv telling if he had not been here
then anandi would have been really unsafe .Shiv says its nothing .
Lal Singh "Chaliye aapka check up kar lete hain "
Shiv is a bit scared and says "arre check up ki kya zarurat hain main abhi thik hoon bukhar bhi chala gaya hain !!"and tries to avoid
Anandi "App thik hain toh doc sab ek baar check up karke tasali kar lenge app chaliye ghabrane ki koi baat nahin ."
Shiv tries to reason but bhairon DS and ghena all force him and they go upstairs .

Shiv lies down on bed and Lal singh does his job all looks on .

After sometime ...
Lal singh says "Dekhiye bukhar abhi nahin hain par jald hi wappas aa jayegi kyunki yeh viral fever hain is liye bhukhar aati hain aur jaati rehti hain cyclic manner mein inhe ek injection de dene se yeh kaafi jald thik ho jayega aur main kuch dawai bhi likh deta---"
Shiv cuts in between "Kya injection doc sab sirf dawai likh dijiye injection ki kya zarurat hain main thik ho jaunga mera immune system kaafi aacha hain !!"
Lal singh "Injection dene ke baad bhi inhe apne sehat ka kaafi dhyaan rakhna hoga ho sakta hain raat mein inka tapmaan bad jaaye toh paati lagwaani pad sakti hain "
and then he takes out injection from his breifcast prepares it and fills in medicine..
Seeing all this Shiv gets hyper but doesnt says anything ..Anandi notices it and says "Aap ghabraye nahin aapko pata bhi nahin chalega kab injection lag gaya !!"and smiles
Lal singh then injects the medicine and Shiv looks away and closes his eyes his hands grab the edge of bed and he also grabs Anandi's wrist .Anandi becomes conscious but doesnt removes her hand
"Lijiye ho gaya yeh raha dawai ki parchi aap jald hi mangawa ke de dijiye ga time pe aacha thik hain toh main aata hoon "and lal singh goes out along wid bahiron and Ds .

Shiv then realises he had been holding anandi's hand and feels awkward and leaves .
Anandi says "app aram kijiye "and leaves too .

bhairon was talking on phone and then asks Anandi "Shiv kya so rahe hain ??"
Anandi says "Ji haan baapusa woh aaram kar rahe hain "
then bhairon replies to someone on phone "abhi toh woh so rahe hain jab uthenge tab baat karne ke liye bol dunga thik hain main rakhta hun "
Anandi enquires "Kya hua Baapusa kiska phone tha sab thik toh hain na ??"
Bhairon says "arre nahin Shiv ke jo quarter hain circuit house wahan bijli paani ki samasya ho gaayi hain bheem singh ne kaha aur usse koi zaruri baat bhi karni thi par Shiv so rahe the toh maine kaha baad mein baat karwa dunga .Ab shiv ki tabiyaat bhi thik nahin hain aur uska akela circuit house mein rehna thnk na hoga kuch dino ke liye yahan haveli mein hi rehna chahiye jab tak sab thik nahin ho jata "
Anandi is worried and thinks collector saab yahan rahenge "Haan baapusa aap thik khe rahe hain !!"
Bhairon goes away ..
Anandi is left wondering how many days will he stay here but i shouldnt think like this unhone itni madat ki hain ab unhe hamari madat ki zarurrat hain .

Edited by ritzi12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
oye stll updating karke daat nikalna chod aur pura kar.. nahi to.. 😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
thanks actually kisine comment nahin kiya toh i got discouraged !!

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