--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzi12

@prati actually i need time to develop story ahead!!

ok 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i read that..but forgot to comment..so sweet...their as usual dhisum dhisum...keep writing..next part jara bada update karna😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: khusi_*

i read that..but forgot to comment..so sweet...their as usual dhisum dhisum...keep writing..next part jara bada update karna😃


actually am updating this part only i havent finished yet i take breaks in between while typing !!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc start..wish it could hapen😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetcop

nyc start..wish it could hapen😳


me too
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ritika dear😊 I missed your FF😲😲 Its good yaar👏👏
Do try updating longer scenes😉..pata he you are trying to, but phir bi just saying😃 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: katts

Ritika dear😊 I missed your FF😲😲 Its good yaar👏👏

Do try updating longer scenes😉..pata he you are trying to, but phir bi just saying😃 😛


oh its okk ya i will wow someone called me by my name am happy !!u remember it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ritika, super awesome update. Eagerly waiting for next part. Hope you will update soon.

My name is Anna
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: A2ZV

Ritika, super awesome update. Eagerly waiting for next part. Hope you will update soon.

My name is Anna

thank u anna for liking my post !! am humbled!!😳nice to meet u !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shiv opens his coat and hangs it anandi is shivering in cold the clouds continue to gather and play on their incessant rains !! Aaj mausam bhi ek saazish raach raha hain !!

''mera phone nahin mill raha hain lagta hain school mein hi gir gaya '' said anandi worriedly!!

''Lijiye aap mera phone istamaal kar lijiye '' he hands her the cell..Anandi tries to call but in such heavy rain the networks not working in Jaitsar District !!
''signal nahin pakkad raha hain ''said anandi tensed
''aur yeh baarish rukne ka naam nahin le raahi kaafi nuksaan ho raha hain gaon ka !!pata nahin yeh paani kab thamega ''Said Shiv thinking Chalo is baarish ne mera ek fayda toh kiya kaamse kaam mujhe anandiji ka bharosa paane mein aur unke paas rehaneka mauka toh milla !!
He sits down and anandi keeps standing looking at him confused ... then she goes away to find something Shiv looks on thinking yeh anandiji dundh kya raahi hain mujhe jaake unse puchna chahiye aur unki maadat karni chahiye !!

He walks upto her near trees and asks ''maaf kijiye par aap kya dundh raahi hain main aapki kuch maa..-''
''main aag jalane ke liye lakdiyaa dundh rahi hoon''
''arre aap mujhe bol deti main le aata aapki tabiyaat thik nahin hain aap plz baithiye''
''nahin main thik hoon ''
''dekhiye agar app ko kuch ho gaya toh main dadisa aur baaki sabko kya jawaab dunga aap meri zimmedaari hain plz nibhane dijiye''
she finally melts and goes down to sit while Shiv becomeslakkad hada 🤣🤣 !!

Atlast after 15 mins he comes gathering woods and lays them down in front of anandi .he says looking worried''par maachis nahin hain hum log isse jalyenge kaise '' Anandi makes face and gets up caries two stones and starts the old technique ji gaon mein hum log bina maachis ki tilli se hi aag jala lete hain collector saab app ko shayad na pat hoga!!
ANd Sparks flies and a small flame starts Shiv looks on like a lost lorn lover .finally Anandi blows the flame and fire is lightened Shiv continues to stare and is lost in anandi's beauty in the flickering flame of fire ..
Anandi looks up and feels awkward and then she starts shivering as her clothes are all wet ..Shiv comes out of his lost world wen he sees anandi shivering
He then goes on to fetch his coat which he had hung to dry and slowly puts it around Anandi's shoulder .He sits down opposite to her and looks down towards the fire
SHIV [thinking]:Pata nain baarish kab rukegi mann toh chahta hain ki kabhie na ruke aur main aapke paas isi tarah baitha raahon par mujhe maalum hain apko yeh bilkul bhi pasand nahin aa raha hain
aap toh mujhse abhi bhi naraaz hain par main kaise bolun ki mujhe aap se pyaar ho gaya hain .. aap bhale hi mujhse pyaar nahin karti par main karne laga hoon ..

Edited by ritzi12 - 13 years ago

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