--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14

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Kurup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

woww...ur first attempt is really appreciated. keep continuing.

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Nazneen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Very nice, but too short... need more!

Also, mouth-to-mouth resuscitation!!! 😳 😳 😳 😍

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dixie123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Good one Ritzi !

Anandi ko abhi pata nahin hai ! Kya hoga Shiv ka, jab pata chale ga Anandi ko ! Another blasting session 😭

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Nehal

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Posted: 13 years ago

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It's really gud...I was thinking that u must have wrote more...but after reading that this was the. First time u wrote it...believe me it's really gud...keep it up..n I wish to read more of ur ff...fabulous ...CVs need to read this n needs to hire u guys for their creative writing becoz many of their concepts suck and just bore us for no reason...anyways great work 👏

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: cosmogirl77
wow Ritzi, good job 👏

Mouth to mouth resuscitation? Collector and Sarpanch? 😆

wow kaas u back hws u i mimi and saru all missed u so much !!! am so glad to see u tat too commenting on my OS!!

Thank u !! waise what had happened to u r u ok nw ??

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: dixie123
Good one Ritzi !
Anandi ko abhi pata nahin hai ! Kya hoga Shiv ka, jab pata chale ga Anandi ko ! Another blasting session 😭

yaa yeh toh i frgt ki wen anadi knws wat happened will she be shocked or angry😲😆

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: neh91
It's really gud...I was thinking that u must have wrote more...but after reading that this was the. First time u wrote it...believe me it's really gud...keep it up..n I wish to read more of ur ff...fabulous ...CVs need to read this n needs to hire u guys for their creative writing becoz many of their concepts suck and just bore us for no reason...anyways great work 👏

thank i really appreciate it

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

PART || : Lonely Night !!

kya bolu main ki ..."Anandi ji Aap behosh ho gaayi thi aur Dadisa ne mujhe kaha app yahan akele hi aa gaayi thi aap aisi laparwahi kaise kar sakti hain app koi superwoman toh nahin hain na ...GRRR'' Roof caving in !!

'' chaliye hum mein yahan se nikalna chahiye iss phele aur khatra baadhe '' Anandi tries to wade but she cant the water is too deep for her !!

Shiv lifts her up '' app yeh main ...''anadi tries to say but Shiv cuts in ''Dekhiye jhagda baad mein kijiyega phele yahan se nikalna hamari priority hain maaf kijiye ''

And Shiv wades in water to reach his jeep ..he tries to start the jeep but engines fail to ignite

''kya hua collector saab ??''ask anandi

''lagta hain paani guss jane ke kaaran gaadi ki engine start nahin ho rahi hain!!''

''Ab hum log kya kare ''

'' lagta hain aaj raat yahan aass paass gujarna padega !!

par itne baarish mein yahan koi jagah nahin haain ..''

''Udhar ek ucchi jaagah hain wahin jana padega !!''

And shiv and Anandi go to nearby place situated at a height an old ruin is there they take shelter there !!

Shiv opens his coat and hangs it anandi is shivering in cold the clouds continue to gather and play on their incessant rains !! Aaj mausam bhi ek saazish raach raha hain !!

''mera phone nahin mill raha hain lagta hain school mein hi gir gaya '' said anandi worriedly!!

''Lijiye aap mera phone istamaal kar lijiye '' he hands her the cell..Anandi tries to call but in such heavy rain the networks not working in Jaitsar District !!

''signal nahin pakkad raha hain ''said anandi tensed

''aur yeh baarish rukne ka naam nahin le raahi kaafi nuksaan ho raha hain gaon ka !!pata nahin yeh paani kab thamega ''Said Shiv thinking Chalo is baarish ne mera ek fayda toh kiya kaamse kaam mujhe anandiji ka bharosa paane mein aur unke paas rehaneka mauka toh milla !!

He sits down and anandi keeps standing looking at him confused ... then she goes away to find something Shiv looks on thinking yeh anandiji dundh kya raahi hain mujhe jaake unse puchna chahiye aur unki maadat karni chahiye !!

He walks upto her near trees and asks ''maaf kijiye par aap kya dundh raahi hain main aapki kuch maa..-''

''main aag jalane ke liye lakdiyaa dundh rahi hoon''

''arre aap mujhe bol deti main le aata aapki tabiyaat thik nahin hain aap plz baithiye''

''nahin main thik hoon ''

''dekhiye agar app ko kuch ho gaya toh main dadisa aur baaki sabko kya jawaab dunga aap meri zimmedaari hain plz nibhane dijiye''

she finally melts and goes down to sit while Shiv becomes lakkad hada 🤣🤣 !!

Atlast after 15 mins he comes gathering woods

Edited by ritzi12 - 13 years ago