--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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areey wah..u r like BV cvs..u will give options..like them..they did...3 option for 3 diff Anandis😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
ya i saw tat in paper 3 anandi and i must say i liked prats coz she was bengali n cute!!

oh god but i hate BV cvs they drag so much !! haha but looks like am gng dere path 😆
Edited by ritzi12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ritzi12

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From this Point i will post two different plots and all of u have to like neone the Plot which will get more likes will win !!

Haha, sorry, just have to say... that reminds me of those Goosebumps books where at the end of every page you get to choose what happens next 😆 I like having choice, though! 😃
Anyway, back on topic... I'm enjoying this! Anandi walking in on Shiv in a half-worn kurta, eh? Nice, nice... 😃 😳 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SiriuslySujal

Haha, sorry, just have to say... that reminds me of those Goosebumps books where at the end of every page you get to choose what happens next 😆 I like having choice, though! 😃
Anyway, back on topic... I'm enjoying this! Anandi walking in on Shiv in a half-worn kurta, eh? Nice, nice... 😃 😳 😳



wow haha everyone noticing this only strangely wen i wrote this i never noticed it as a writer i become so serious tat i almost forget to njoy wat am writing 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww Bechara Shiv... hopefully Anandi will take good care of him.. waiting for Ansh moments 😍 chota update tha ritzi 😔 but yaar loved it.. continue soon as I hate cliff-hangers 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I will surely Do Sou it was just a teaser !! agle update mein u will get two stories back to back and have to choose one !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Read my ff i need u alll ppl views!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68


PLOT 1
anandi turns shocked she thought he was asleep !!
"Anandi ji aap kaisi hain ??"asked SHiv weakly
"Yeh sawaal toh mujhe aapse karni chahiye aapki tabiat kaafi kharab hogi hain woh bhi mere wajah se mujhe appko kal dawaai de deni chahiye thi par diya nahin ,apko kaafi tez bukhar ho gaya hain main abhi taisa se bolkar apko patti laane ke liye bolti hun !!"says Anandi and hurries away
before SHiv cud say nething !!

Shiv gets up and sits thinking yeh main kya soch raha hun ...mujhe yahan se jald jana chahiye par dil toh karta hain yehi rahun Anandi ji ke pass shukr hain woh bilkul thik hain ...
Anandi goes to kitchen and sees its empty she turns and finds DS "ki hua chodi kuch chahiye tha ??"
"woh Taisa ko dundh rahi thi hain kahan woh ??"said Anandi
"aree woh puccho mat phone aaya the uske ghar se jana pada kal ke baarish ne kaafi uddham kardi ab shamko hi aaawegi tujhe kya kaam tha ??"
"woh maine socho collector saab ke liye patti agar woh le jaati toh accha hota bukhar kaafi haad tak kaam hota !!"
" haan chodi tune yeh saahi kaha phele dhyaan awehi nahin !! Ja tu patti le ja jaldi "Said DS and went away ..

Anandi thinking haan ab toh mujhe hi le jana parega itna toh kar sakti hun ab iska woh koi naya matlab na nikal le uff!!
Irritated Anandi goes tO Shiv's room taking the bowl of water and cloth seeing her at door Shiv is delighted but hides his happiness !!
ANandi puts the tray and sits on a stool and den wets the cloth "let jaayi main yeh patti laga deti hun "
Shiv stares for a moment and den lies down anandi puts the cloth on his forehead

[BG music aadha hain , adha ho jayega nanana i dnt knw rest]

Anandi tries to avoid eye contact and does her work and goes away .Shiv touches the patti takes it and kisses it ..

Maakkan comes and says to anandi ki cowshed mein kaafi paano bhar gaya hain kuch kijiye chhat se paani leak ho raha hain !!
The servant tried to stop it but he is nt able to reach the roof and no one is nearby to take help
Anandi gets worried and thinks baapusa tausa koi nahin hain DS comes to knw abt This and is also worried ..
Anandi tries to go to Cowshed but DS says "Nahin choddi tu kahin nahin jawegi abhi itni baadi musibaat se nikalkar aayi hain ab firse daabaang baanene ki kono jarurat nahin "
"Par dadisa sab gaaye baachde ki halat kaafi buri ho jayegi !"
At that moment shiv comes down from stairs and sees DS and anandi worried and anxious ,, he asks "Kya hua Dadiji aap sab itne pareshaan hain !!"
"Arre choda tu niche aa gaya tharo ko aaram karni chahiye "said DS stictly
"Naahin dadiji main abhi thik hun woh Anandiji ne jo patti lagaayi uske baad main thik ho gaya ..i mean..bukhar kaam gaya "replied Shiv
Anandi glances back listening to this and says "Udhar tabele mein kaafi paani bhar raha hain chhat mein koi leak ho gaayi hain usse thik karni hogi par madat ke liye koi nahin hain aur dadisa mujhe jaane nahin de raahi hain "
"Aur saahi hi toh hain dadiji aapko jaana bhi nahin chahiye abhii apki sehaht thik hui hain aur aap firse chal padi mera matlab aap kisi aur se kahiye "said Shiv
"Koi aur hain nahin main bilkul thik hun tabiyat aapki kharab hain mujhe jaan hi hoga dadisa "replied Anandi
"Naahin chodi tu jaake bhi kya kar legi Koi [Super woman] toh hain nahin !!"said DS
"Chaliye Anandiji main bhi aapke saath chalta hun "said Shiv
"Par aap aabhi bemaar hain "said Anandi
"Insaan bemaar dimaag se hota hain agar woh sochega ki woh bemaar hain toh kabhie thik nahin ho pyega sab soch pe nirbhar hain warna mera bukhar kam gaya hain !!"said Shiv
Anandi simultaneously touched his forehead and told "haan phele se kaafi kaam gaya hain warna phele aapka sar toh jaal raha tha "said Anandi innocently
Shiv lost in her eyes n Anandi suddenly realises n removes her hand ..
"Thik hain jaldi jaan chahiye kaafi der ho chuki hain sab janwar ko kaafi taaklif ho raahi hogi !!"replied Anandi and hurried away



Edited by ritzi12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! lovely update ritzi...

shiv called her at the end? 😛...will wait for ur next update..and sry for commenting so late 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
patti ko kiss kar raha hai🤣
awesome ritzi!!

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