--ANSH LIGHTS out --Part 2 Updated pg -14

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anushka

@anushka2112

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

HI Ritika m Anushka...I like ur OS...do update...U all guys are extreme writers ...I can only imagine but not have words to write so enjoying reading all FFs and OS...being a silent reader ...but couldn't resists myself to praise u all and ur works...😊

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: anushka2112
HI Ritika m Anushka...I like ur OS...do update...U all guys are extreme writers ...I can only imagine but not have words to write so enjoying reading all FFs and OS...being a silent reader ...but couldn't resists myself to praise u all and ur works...😊

Thanks a lot Anushka i appreciate it !!😳

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CosmoGirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Arreee Oh Ritika... Good work. Keep on writing more 😉

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Monamie

@monamie111

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

awww...fire and AnSh 😍

can't wait for the next part...

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itsRitzi

@itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: cosmogirl77
Arreee Oh Ritika... Good work. Keep on writing more 😉

thanks sanju !!

and

MONA😃

Edited by ritzi12 - 13 years ago

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Atlast after 15 mins he comes gathering woods and lays them down in front of anandi .he says looking worried''par maachis nahin hain hum log isse jalyenge kaise '' Anandi makes face and gets up caries two stones and starts the old technique ji gaon mein hum log bina maachis ki tilli se hi aag jala lete hain collector saab app ko shayad na pat hoga!!

ANd Sparks flies and a small flame starts Shiv looks on like a lost lorn lover .finally Anandi blows the flame and fire is lightened Shiv continues to stare and is lost in anandi's beauty in the flickering flame of fire ..

Anandi looks up and feels awkward and then she starts shivering as her clothes are all wet ..Shiv comes out of his lost world wen he sees anandi shivering

He then goes on to fetch his coat which he had hung to dry and slowly puts it around Anandi's shoulder .He sits down opposite to her and looks down towards the fire

SHIV [thinking]:Pata nain baarish kab rukegi mann toh chahta hain ki kabhie na ruke aur main aapke paas isi tarah baitha raahon par mujhe maalum hain apko yeh bilkul bhi pasand nahin aa raha hain

aap toh mujhse abhi bhi naraaz hain par main kaise bolun ki mujhe aap se pyaar ho gaya hain .. aap bhale hi mujhse pyaar nahin karti par main karne laga hoon .

ANANDI[thinking]:kitna nuksaan ho gaya goan ke log ke liye baadi musibaat aa gaayi upar se yahan Shivji ke saath attak gaayi pata nahin paani kab kamega baapusa kaise aayenge puri raat yahan kaise guzarungi

Shiv and Anandi stare inot each others eyes !!

Ringgg!!

Shiv realises his mobile is ringing he picks up

''haan boliye''

''Shiv main anadi ka baapusa woh hum loog tumhe dundhte hue skul aaye hain idhar itna paani hain tum log kahan ho kahin dikhayi nahin de rahe ??''

''ji hum log pass ek khandhar main hain yahan paani nahin hain is liye hum dono yaha thaire hain ''

''accha anandi toh thik hain na ??''

''ji haan woh bilkul thik hain ''

''thik hain hum log aa rahe hain ''

Shiv tells anandi tat baapusa is coming to take them Anandi heaves a sigh of relief and Shiv is sadenned !!

finally they see bhairon and tausa they take them in a jeep and reach haveli !!!.

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CosmoGirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

What? Ritzi... 😡
I thought Shiv will somehow manofy Anandi before the rain stops... 😍

Even you are dragging like BV Cvs...😆 Are you gonna add a filler of Jagya & Gauri? 🤣

Hmmm Let's see what happens in the haveli... I hope more romance.
But good job. Continue 👏

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

what is this yaar ye bapusa ko bhi ahi anna tha.. ..nice update

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itsRitzi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: cosmogirl77
What? Ritzi... 😡
I thought Shiv will somehow manofy Anandi before the rain stops... 😍

Even you are dragging like BV Cvs...😆 Are you gonna add a filler of Jagya & Gauri? 🤣

Hmmm Let's see what happens in the haveli... I hope more romance.
But good job. Continue 👏

arreee noo mujhe baaksh do i can never add gauri jagiya filler 😲

well i thought i mught show a long whole noght romance initially but i ran out of ideas u see am not romantic writer 😆 moreover i got bored of this plot which i myself dragged i thought to abandon it and start afresh but u all said to plz continue ..so i did ab sab itna jaldi thodi hoga actually mujhe bhi thoda drag karna padega but not like BV many ppl have written of ansh marraige and romance so i thought itna jaldi waahan pahucna will be repeating !!

JUST WAIT IN HAVELI AMNY THINGS ARE TO COME 😉