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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jineejiggs

its beautiful, very touchy 👏


thank u dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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3rd part of this OS Broken Heart..and I guess this is the last part of the os..

It started with the request of my Choti.. but second one was for Neel di ..and in the 3rd part I am trying to conclude Many one's request... 1st of course my Choti as she all time wants Romantic OS.Neel di too, Amrit, Deepu, and of course My DI...so here it is hope all of u will enjoy ..other wise all time bricks welcome..

Happy Reading ...

Priya's sleep breaks... broken with sudden but unknown ringtone of cell.. yes it is unknown..coz RAM's cell buzzs...

With sleepy eyes..rubbing one of them she tries to find out the owner of the cell but ...he is in deep slumber on the Couch ..After five years ..the cutest side does not allow to disturb him ...

With hesitation she picks up...

Hello Papa...aap kahahai ..kal se ek baar bhi ph nehi ki ..aapne...Khush is Missing u Papa...

Papa word was enough to break her all sleepy state...

Only with soft Voice she utters ...Hello...

From the otherside...this time a female Voice comes..as the little one gets frighten with a lady's voice so he ..passes the cell ...

IS that Ayesha ? RAM bhappa hai kya tumhare sath...?

Suddenly with a jolt Ram takes the cell from her...

Hello Saumya ..

No...

I don't know where she is...

No Not even I seen her here ...

Hmmm... I am lil busy...

Ok..I will call u ... Later ...Say hello to Khush.and also Say Papa missing him too...

Priya quietly listen all one side talk...when she heard ...Papa again from RAM...she leaves the room ith out making any sound...

With a disturbed mind ...She is trying to concentrate .her mind in Coffee..hope Her Mr.Kapoor ..will take it ..Her Seriously ...Still RAM is hers????...Who is Khush.. really he moved on in his life ? ..then why still he is here ...For Peehu ...does he snatch Peehu from her ? with lots of Questions...Priya trying to make herself busy...

Priya I need to talk with u ..

Hmmm,,Mr .Kapoor aapki Coffee..aap Coffee to pite hai na abhi bhi?? With a hurt tone she asks him...

Without paying attention on her words RAM says ... Priya ...Wo ..Khush...Khush is my SON...

Her back was facing towards him...and still it makes him unaware that already so many lone tears ,Priya is shedding ...She cant say anything..may be she is waiting for more...

Don't u wanna know who is his Mother ????????

Ayesha...Ayesha is Khush's mother...with so much pain .. Ram speaks out..it seems..RAM did it purposely to show his Condition.. to take some revenge...to feel her jealous...

Ouuccchhh...

Only a feeble female voice he heard...and of course it came from Priya as..she burns her finger ...

Within a second..he clutches her hand..pagal ho gaye ho tum..dekh kar kam nehi kar sakte ho.. ek bachi ki maa ban gayi ho..phir bhi akal nehi ayi tumhari...agar hat jal jati to...

Priya looks at him. Still her Caring man...her RAM...who cant see her pain..for a single bit of sec ..but again the current situation gives her pain..a the lonely tear kisses her cheek..

Trying to move from him...nehi wo...main.. aap chodiye...main..

Kya main main..kar rehe ho...

Bringing some ice cubes.. he places those on her effected hands...

Kabhi mere ..fullbatein bhi sun liya karo..with a compose tone ..First Time Ram says...

Priya still giving him a puzzle look...

U have to listen carefully be patience Priya..

With all the sudden jolts ...First Time Priya ..says ..with a high pitch ..

Be patience ...carefully ..Do u really think Mr.Kapoor I can..Any woman.any wife can..

Some boy is addressing her husband Papa... and I don't know who is he..U r my husband...

And You,...

Clutching her arms..strongly ..with a keen looks..Ram asks..its tough na Priya ..to imagine something and accept something...Pain ho rehi hai ..Hurt ho.. why...u wanted something like that na.. so I moved on...u must be happy now ..why not ..u ...

Do u know the reality ..Do u have any idea what is going on ur surrounding... .Rajat ..Rajat likes u...

He has a soft corner for u ...do u know what I was feeling when last night he was addressing u as u r his... It killed Priya the way .. u r feeling now , after knowing that ...I have a son...Khush is my son..

With out the reality check..u r showing ur pain...but I could not ..last night ..ur presence made me numb..Shocked...but to the the World still u r my wife.. so why its effecting u...Who is khush and ..

Mr.Kapoor ..How can I ..u r only mine..I cant live without..Simply I cant...

Its same for me too..Priya but ...from past 5 years I am living ..living for the world...living for all.. and yes I could...Coz khush was there only the lil kid who was the source of my life after u ..and do u know why ..I adores him so much ...because..kahin na kahin..uski presence mere life me ye satisfaction dilate raha k..yes I could complete ur wish..actual na sahi virtually ..main kisiko life de diya...yes virtually ...Coz..he is not my flesh...he is adopted son..and I adopted him only to fulfill ur wish..." k Mr.Kapoor main kisiko jindegi dena chahti hu" I was clueless then.. about what u talking...and even in these five years too...

And when I see Khush..it was giving me a happiness..that at least main meri Priya ko bacha na saka par uski..last wish to...what u did..now I got to know Rajat...

This time priya loudly shouts Mr.Kapoor...aap..

Mumma aap papa ko dant kyun rehe ho?

Papa bhi kya .kheer kha rehe hai ..chodi karke...

Papa don't do this ..Mumma ..bohut gussa ho jati hai...

We cant handle her papa..with a cute voice Peehu .expresses her depression about her mumma's anger ..

His lil Rockstar all time reminds him their past days ..how he was feeling scary with his hitler wife..and tried to do all best things to please her ..in all aspect with each and every lil antics of him..

Lifting her in his arms..with a good morning kiss RAM says ..no baby ..Mumma jo kehti hai wo ache k liye kehti hai...

Tum fresh hokar aajao tab tak ..mumma and papa break fast ..arrange karte hai ..ok...

with Peehu's fading figure..Ram rests his hands..on Priya's shoulder..already who is broken .his life...

Priya u have to listen me first...this was the worst period of my life ..so many happenings.. but ..UR RAM..UR Mr.Kapoor is only urs..

Khush is Sid ..and Ayesha's son..i adopted him...and also ..gave my Surname to Ayesha...

Another Shock was waiting for Priya..she looks at him...

Yes .Priya u heard right ...Sid left Ayesha..and that time there was no other way to give her my surname..and most importantly it was a deal...to rescue u ..ur respect..is so important for me...It was a deal with Ayesha nothing more ..as she was the only one person who was well known about Sid and his where about ...when Sid left her ..she wanted to help me for u .. for ur respect ... For ur family ..i gave her the right to use my surname..

And more over, main meri jindegi me ..sirf ek hi ladki ko pyar kiya hai...kisi aur k bade me main soch bhi nehi sakta hu kabhi ..AS I loved her ..love her ..and I will love her only...still my last ...

Priya keeps her hand on his lips...I LOVE YOU Mr.KApoor...

Forgetting all his anger .all pain. All hurt .. takes Priya in his tight hug..just cursing her in his embrace...

Resting his chin on her shoulder..Ram trying to open his heart...

Priya five years..,it's a long time..we were away from each other .. I cant..just cant more ..now I can see ..i can feel ..please Priya don't do this to me again..

With Sobbing. Some wetness Ram can feel on his shirt...

Mr.Kapoor.I cant live without u ..its just impossible for me...panch saal me har pal sirf ..main aapke bade me hi sochti thi.. ...meri har khayalo me sirf aapki hi yaad...

Mumma papa..aap log Peehu ko chod kar hi huggie kar rehe ho...

Then hum kaise Family No 1. Ho sakte hai..

Both look at their bundle of joy...and stretch their arm together...Peehu within a moment join with them...

But they have to break their hug.with the sound of Ringtone...but this time its comes from Priya ...

Peehu looks at the display...Mumma wo khadoos uncle ka Ph hai and giggles ..

Ram looks at her then at Priya as he is clueless..but Priya can sense as its call from Rajat ..knowing about his feelings .. not a single word she wants to speak with him...

Her hesitancy ..un easiness is enough for RAM to guess who the person...

Ram picks the Ph ..keeps it on Speaker he says ...

Hi buddy ..but in firm voice..

yaar tu mujhe ...mere no pe bhi call kar sakta tha...

Nehi ..wo ..i thought ... k..tu hai ya nehi .. Pooja akeli hai .. yaa...

1st She is not Pooja.. Mrs.Priya Ram Kapoor...looking at Priya he says ..with so much stretch on Mrs .Kapoor..and ..main mere patni k sath ..its so natural yaar .. Chod de.. can u help me buddy...

With a low tone .. ha batana kya help chahiye tujhe ?

Wo hotel se.. Mere sare chiz agar .. Priya ki is address pe tu.. he does not need to finish ..it was enough for Rajat ...

Yes no Problem . I am doing right now...

Thank u and bye..

Ram disconnect the call..with a smile looking at Priya...

What ...feeling hungry yaar .. jaldi se breakfast do. ..

Mummaa...we are waiting jaldi se khana do na..mujhe school jana hai..

Ha baba aa rehi hu ..but ..aap school..aap bata rehe the na aaj full day .. Papa k sath Masti ..

Ha woo to main karungi..Papa promised na.. he will not leave so...

Aap hi to kehte ho..mujhe school jana hai..tudy karna hai..mere papa jaise ..bade businessman banna hai mereko..

Ram looks at Priya ...with Peehu's comment ...May be she hides her father's identity from her ..his image ..but each and every moments she shares his all habits..it gives him happiness ..an unknown achievement ..staying far away from him..but her mind, her all words are belong to him only...

Papa.. aap to Aloo Paratha khate nehi ho naa..

Ram looks at his cutie pie..as all time she amazes him with her activities. her maturity...her sense of humor..she is Perfectly their..flesh..Matured like Priya..cuteness. like Ram. business mind like her father ..caring like her mother ...

Ram takes Peehu in his lap..and says baby ..Kya hai na ..Papa ko sirf Mumma k hato ki Aloo paratha hi pasand hai .. but ..itni saal to Mumma mere pass nehi the na ..isliye Papa ..Aloo paratha nehi khate the..

Aaj se mumma aur tum humesha se mere sath rahoge na...so aj se papa ..and Peehu milkar bohut sare Aloo paratha khayenge okiee,,

Peehu in a very happy mood..gives Ram a slopy kiss on his cheek and says ..ha papa extra butter k sath ..and ...aap kahoge to mumma will scold me too.love u Papa...

Koi extra butter nehi milne wale kisiko ..Priya Confirms it..

Hitler ,,,Ram murmurs... Priya rolls her eyes and says Peehu school jana hai to jaldi finish karo...

Within a few minuets ,kady comes to take Peehu to school.. almost its her daily routines..as her College and Peehu's school on the same way .. and today she does not wanna break the chai..though she knows some how its going to be changed .. but still she happily wants to do it ...

Peehu .. with jumping and running as usual starts her journey with her Kady Didi..

And also ...all stuffs of RAM shifts at Priya's flat...

Few minutes later ...finishing all daily works of kitchen ..Priya goes towards the bedroom ...

Mr.Kapoor ..lunch me what u want..anything spe...looking at him she stops..

Tum abhi bhi is book ko padte ho???? ..showing the book Ram asks her ...

Yes its is Bade ache laggte hai ...once RAM gave her as their memory..even said ..he is not Romantic yet ..but .. want to gift a romantic story to his wife,...

Hmmm..I lost ur Gift ..I lost it , for landslide...with a sigh Priya says...

Ram looks at her for once.. slowly goes towards one of his bag ..and ..taking something goes towards her again...Priya still sobbing remembering the day and all her past ...

Priya ..dekho ise...she looks at him and then the particular things , the same book which h gave her five years back..as a gift ...gift from a husband to a wife .. with the self realization that he is not Romantic enough ..but still he is able to give his wife a love story...

Aap k pass. Kaha mila aapko.. landslide k place ..i lost there only ...and after ..

Suddenly she is behaving like a kid who gets her most favorite candy after so many days ...

Yaad hai what u said ..next jab hum milnge,,for ever ..humare love story ka end aise Sad nehi hoga...

All that Priya can do..she throwing herself in Ram's arms...with this sudden action..the book fails from his hand...but Ram does not fail to embrace her in his tight hug ...even so tightly that there is no tomorrow...

Priya ...ha roz main ye book dekhtathat and just questioned myself.. why ..why this happened with me..and every time I was remembering ur Promise..that iss baar jab hum milenge Mr.Kapoor humesa k liye...Priya . I get a chance . we get a chance to live happily ..again..and this time I am promising u..our love story will be end ..with a happy note only .. Tum , Peehu aur .,main..meri khudki family..

I love u Priya ...I love u ..

.after five years..she is experiencing again the magical words from her magic man..only who can heal her all pain..and change it into..lots of happiness..

I Love u ..I love u RAM...

Breaking the hug Ram looks at her ...cupping her face in his palms...Ram asks..firse bolo...

With a shy smile ..Priya nods in negative way...

Priya please..five years ..I was waiting ..all hopes I lost ..sirf ..kahi na kahi .. I felt tum jinda ho..even I kept u alive in my mind..in my heart ...in my all memories..now its time for me..Plz Priya plzz for once ...

Looking directly at his eyes Priya says ...I love U RAM.

Lowering his head..just an inch apart their lips...

I love u Mrs.Kapoor.. stay all time in my world..as my world is only ..u ..

And claims her lips as his own...after a five years ...Priya also savoring the moment ..again finding the new belongingness..more over its their promise. promise for life time..that no matter what ever happen..happen in future ..they will fight together ..save each other .. stay with each other ..and will enjoy each and every moment of life together

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I know last part is the worst one...Sorry please bother it ..as I was confused too...and don't wanna drag..coz I planned for one os..and for all of ur love it becomes 3 ..and what I feel the situation whih my choti gave...its really impossible to complete ya reach in any conclusion in one ya 3 os ..is tough..but hope I did justice with all parts..and hope my Choti is happy ...Love u ... ..for u I can do anything...

Sorry For all mistakes

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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Superb, awesome, fab...
Last part was blend of all the emotions that raya have 4 each other😊
Loved it❤️
Thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice ending
thank you for pm😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Last Part is really very emotional,
what i except from u, you fulfill that in last part.
I love each & every lines.
This the perfect ending for this story
Always RaYa scenes are magical
Thanks for the Wonderful OS 👏
Thanks For the PM 😃
Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Superb ending
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Very very emotional part di really just loved it pls continue soon the next os or ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
After the call Priya was so hurt to know the truth about kush
she was in pain that Ram has moved on in his life but he made her understand that he has adopted him so that he can fulfill her last wish
Love whenever Ram call her as hitler she is also so possesive about him the little convo of the peehu with her parents was so sweet
thanx for the pm
Edited by aanchaltulshan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Thanks for the PM.
wow happy ending , ram n princess peehu alltime favourtie aloo paranthe with extra butter😆😆 soemthings in life never change😆😆.
well , raya and their jealous ,craving, insecurities and never fading feelings, endless love , eternal belongingness superbly described.

good job sanju
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
nice update..
happy ending...😊

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