OS- Broken heart last part on page 11 - Page 10

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

After the call Priya was so hurt to know the truth about kush
she was in pain that Ram has moved on in his life but he made her understand that he has adopted him so that he can fulfill her last wish
Love whenever Ram call her as hitler she is also so possesive about him the little convo of the peehu with her parents was so sweet
thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thanks for the PM.

wow happy ending , ram n princess peehu alltime favourtie aloo paranthe with extra butter😆😆 soemthings in life never change😆😆.

well , raya and their jealous ,craving, insecurities and never fading feelings, endless love , eternal belongingness superbly described.

good job sanju

Originally posted by: jodude

nice update..
happy ending...😊

Originally posted by: akilagoud2

superb ending
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: contactcharu

nice update!!! :)

Originally posted by: jineejiggs

the end was done beautifully, absolutely wonderful, loved the OS👏

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Hi sanjuuu

hope you are doing well

I wanted to tell you sorry for reading and comemnting late

but as you dont like it

Im not telling it 😆

coming to update

That was really emotional

and veryw ell penned down

You know what

The tit bit where Ram seen priyas restlessness and fear of not being her Mr.Kapoor was

Gossh just mind blowing

I loved it ..

and pehu is so cute

and kush was eqaully given importance here as His beloved child

And their love grwos stronger and depper and they have met again

super good story

Thank you for writing it down

👏👏👏

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Oyeee hayeee

Thank you so muhc

Im glad you liked it

and yes im really very vey happy that day

and you made it more beautiful ..

and its sirf Meri Ho not sirf tum hi ho 😆

And was very happy that atlast i got it ki

Ok yah I know you are romantic parts isiliye mai poocha

But in this 3rd part also the way story progressed you showed the romance also same as well

Loved it

yes dear ,Hugs tight wali ,whatever just came into my brain i just put it down in my words

Love you tooo

yah As my hubby gave a treat to me on that day ,he had to wait until i typed a comment for you 😆

will be waiting for more works from you

P.s:Is late reply ko sorry bolna padega

sorry 😆