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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
beautiful OS
u made it totally differently and thank god no Ayesha

Ram anger at the beginning, then melting then love everything is perfect.

dialogues are good.

loved it...nice end

thanks for PM...but No PM for the last part😭

sorry for late

aweee u done

Sorry yaar must be i skipped

pakka next time i will do pakka promise

thank u .. that u completed ..

no i can tease u more 😉

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: zeylanica
Beautiful OS ... Loved it ...
Thanks for d PM :)

thank u dear

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leena

@leena04

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

part 1
OMG this is so gud Sanju I wish CV's was went with this & didn't dugged their reunion much long in show then the story was much more batter then it was but neve mind ab dhuk karne se koi fayda bhi nahi well I just loved the way u showed all the emotions of Ram too gud... & I m loving this OS moving for next pat to read...

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leena

@leena04

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

part 2
awww u discibed each & every pain of RaYa so well I m so loving it its really thouchy to read... RaYa were in so much pain but can't do anything but they can now... Peehu's insecurity is so genuin would love to read more in this so moving for next...

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leena

@leena04

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

part 3
full & final instalment u paid dear wow what an awesome update can't tell u how much I loved this one its really too gud stoy u had thought & very beautifully u discribed too... so gud to read one of the master piece by u its too gud... waiting for more do write soon...

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: leena04

part 1
OMG this is so gud Sanju I wish CV's was went with this & didn't dugged their reunion much long in show then the story was much more batter then it was but neve mind ab dhuk karne se koi fayda bhi nahi well I just loved the way u showed all the emotions of Ram too gud... & I m loving this OS moving for next pat to read...

aweee..

at last u read ...

yippe too good..

and i forgot what i wrote but yes will try to write further

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