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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

the end was done beautifully, absolutely wonderful, loved the OS👏

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Dsudipa

@Dsudipa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

read all parts in one go, its fantastic, last 2 parts was very emotional, perfect ending, thx 4 PM

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Hi sanjuuu

hope you are doing well

I wanted to tell you sorry for reading and comemnting late

but as you dont like it

Im not telling it 😆

coming to update

That was really emotional

and veryw ell penned down

You know what

The tit bit where Ram seen priyas restlessness and fear of not being her Mr.Kapoor was

Gossh just mind blowing

I loved it ..

and pehu is so cute

and kush was eqaully given importance here as His beloved child

And their love grwos stronger and depper and they have met again

super good story

Thank you for writing it down

👏👏👏

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

aweee di when i saw ur commnets i was almost faint..i love each and every bit of ur comments di .. so insiring .. first ...i did a lil things for u ..and u deserve a lot ..so no thank u .. i am ur lil sis .. so tight huggiee its better but no thank u ..and yes i read about r promotion on SIrf tum hi ho thread ..i comntd there too.. i am so happy di for u .. with lots of hurdles u did .its the greatest achievement for u ..and for all of us as we love u so much ...

aweee for update ..lovely commnets di ..u made my day sorry night ..lol ..and also ..inspired me too.. yes for us raya is greatest couple most adorable..and i wanted there this part like that way ..but cv never showed ..and thank u for the commnts of all os ..and yup di next part i will try a bit romantic but .. it must be continuation of this part and .. like this way ..thank u again

di ..its superb and so swt of u that u said .. jo bhi aapki dil me aya u wrote thats only one thing i want .. what our heart speaks its true .. and u did .. so it made me more happy..and but poor my jiju that he had to wait..
Love u so much . i mean it.

Oyeee hayeee

Thank you so muhc

Im glad you liked it

and yes im really very vey happy that day

and you made it more beautiful ..

and its sirf Meri Ho not sirf tum hi ho 😆

And was very happy that atlast i got it ki

Ok yah I know you are romantic parts isiliye mai poocha

But in this 3rd part also the way story progressed you showed the romance also same as well

Loved it

yes dear ,Hugs tight wali ,whatever just came into my brain i just put it down in my words

Love you tooo

yah As my hubby gave a treat to me on that day ,he had to wait until i typed a comment for you 😆

will be waiting for more works from you

P.s:Is late reply ko sorry bolna padega

sorry 😆

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: .pia_12.
Superb, awesome, fab...
Last part was blend of all the emotions that raya have 4 each other😊
Loved it❤️
Thanks 4 pm!!!

thank u dear

I am glad that u like it

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: anupam_dil
very nice ending
thank you for pm😛

thank u dear

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: youandme272000
Good update... 😊

thank u Vidhi

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: rosinagoor
Last Part is really very emotional,
what i except from u, you fulfill that in last part.
I love each & every lines.
This the perfect ending for this story
Always RaYa scenes are magical
Thanks for the Wonderful OS 👏
Thanks For the PM 😃

thank u dear

i am glad that u liked it so much

yup i prefer all time simplicity ...and some how i missed it in balh

thank u