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Awwweee Sanju darling ...oh my ...My cuty pie This update is for me .

Im surprised and so happy that its for me ..

Love you hugs🤗 tight wali , And you know what Today I got promoted for next level and some other really happy things happened to me ..

And this one was I really didn't expected ,as usual I thought It's for your Choti .

When I saw My name ,Im thrilled s,surprised ,shocked and Blushed bhi ..Lol

Im grinning ear to ear when I read those lines ...Thank you so much for the surprise.

Love you tooo

Im actually jumping jumping all the day now It added to that jumping .

Ok im stopping my bakwas here😆

Coming to the update ,It was actually an emotional update filled with our incredible Raya ,

You have penned perfectly Her POV at the same time his POV bhi , The choti choti things captured very well .I loved it .I loved their out burst so much pain at the same time so much love on eachother .

Perfectly suited for our lovely Raya .and the cute pie Peehu is so innocent and loved her cute antics.

Ha every time ma and beti can do wonders with their childish talk .

I loved it totally and the Dairy part was so awesome .

Every time whenever you write OS I used to see innocence in your stories but this was one of the emotional update and I thought you going to end kya so soon ..

But Thank god yu haven't ended .

And I want romantic update bhi from you ,I know you were not okay with it ,but In life Everything

Happiness or sadness or departing or Romance have equal importance ,so try to add that spice too ,If you are not wiling to write elaborately ,write like in Love is Faith wali small romantic senes I loved them also so much

all in all awesome update re

P.s:I really don't know what i have typed ,Whatevr came in my mind i just put it in my words ,Im really out of mind as from morning onwards im getting surprise one after other

each one is beautiful and cheriched ones ,and im so happy ,and i just opened IF while driving back to home and when i found your os update ,i read it and i so wanted to comment but not happened from mobile ,so after reaching the home i started to type this message ,making my hubby wait 😆

Love you for this special surprise ,frankly didnt expected .😛

Originally posted by: jodude

lovely update..
continue soon..😊

Originally posted by: contactcharu

lovely update!!!

Originally posted by: bishop22

Thanks for the pm.

Lovely. Very emotional.

please continue soon

Originally posted by: luvbalh

Thanks for PM

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

no comments only thanks 😭

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Awwweee Sanju darling ...oh my ...My cuty pie This update is for me .

Im surprised and so happy that its for me ..

Love you hugs🤗 tight wali , And you know what Today I got promoted for next level and some other really happy things happened to me ..

And this one was I really didn't expected ,as usual I thought It's for your Choti .

When I saw My name ,Im thrilled s,surprised ,shocked and Blushed bhi ..Lol

Im grinning ear to ear when I read those lines ...Thank you so much for the surprise.

Love you tooo

Im actually jumping jumping all the day now It added to that jumping .

Ok im stopping my bakwas here😆

Coming to the update ,It was actually an emotional update filled with our incredible Raya ,

You have penned perfectly Her POV at the same time his POV bhi , The choti choti things captured very well .I loved it .I loved their out burst so much pain at the same time so much love on eachother .

Perfectly suited for our lovely Raya .and the cute pie Peehu is so innocent and loved her cute antics.

Ha every time ma and beti can do wonders with their childish talk .

I loved it totally and the Dairy part was so awesome .

Every time whenever you write OS I used to see innocence in your stories but this was one of the emotional update and I thought you going to end kya so soon ..

But Thank god yu haven't ended .

And I want romantic update bhi from you ,I know you were not okay with it ,but In life Everything

Happiness or sadness or departing or Romance have equal importance ,so try to add that spice too ,If you are not wiling to write elaborately ,write like in Love is Faith wali small romantic senes I loved them also so much

all in all awesome update re

P.s:I really don't know what i have typed ,Whatevr came in my mind i just put it in my words ,Im really out of mind as from morning onwards im getting surprise one after other

each one is beautiful and cheriched ones ,and im so happy ,and i just opened IF while driving back to home and when i found your os update ,i read it and i so wanted to comment but not happened from mobile ,so after reaching the home i started to type this message ,making my hubby wait 😆

Love you for this special surprise ,frankly didnt expected .😛