NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24 - Page 6

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Snehajain thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Awesome update...

First para was superb...amazing & true lines...👏👏👏
Dilawar can't exist in this cruel world that's why came Sikander into existence...
Those police men..aaarrggghhh...I so wanted to kill them...😡😡😡
They wanted Atya against Aafsar & Aaamil...@#&^@(*#...😡😡😡
Naazneen urf Riya...😕😕😕
Cliffhanger...woh bhi ek nahi do do...😡😡😡 😡😡😡

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
When we fly very high with success on our wings, we usually disgrace and dislike the roots that have gone long beneath us. We often feel ashamed to look back at the fallen life, not realizing it was where our wings had started to design for the future flights.

so true, power aur paisa milne ke baad hum apni hi mitti apni jaroon ko bhol jate hain
apne beete hoye kal ko giri hoyi nazar se dekhte hain aur us baat pe sharminda hote hain ke hum kitne chote ilaake se, chote ghar se belong karte thy.. Shame on those people and thier minds


that polic office.. Yuck
aise hi ghatya logon ki wajah se logon ko law aur department pe bharoosa nahi hai
aise hi logon ki wajah se yeh kaha gaya hai

"criminals aren't born, they're made"

dilawar was weak and coward, apni weakness ko chupane ki liye sikander ki jhoti power aur terror ka sahara liya

nazneem urf riya mukherjee

welldone girl you prove that monster,
don't underestimate girls

bohot hi bhayanak update tha di (not bad writer wala, reader ko rulane wala)

thanks for blog link

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it very much...
Brilliantly Written...
Flashback was painful...
Every emotion was described so well
That police officer was so disgusting...!!!!
Nazneen's words still haunt Sikander...
So Nazneen was Riya as undercocer... Loved it
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
The FBs were too scary and emotional yaar
I could feel it creeping under my skin
That prickly words and gaze
ouch..still feel it
You are damn good with the words my dear
Especially the starting paragraphs.
wow that was indeed too deep
well done and I mean it
A line from Nazneen was maing me doubt at her
and the last line proved my doubts
does this also relate to Arjun's exile?
I get a whiff of it
And yes the name Dilawar will make Sam reach Arjun.
I am already adding 2 n 2
pleeez update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Emotional update
Its true that we forget our roots
The FB's were really scary
Poor Atiya
Those Police officers😡
And Nazneen
that line made me doubt and the last line confirmed it
loved the way story is progressing
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
hey can i have ur blog link plz???
thank u:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Hi dear...
I have come to tell you that indeed I have been following every update of yours...

Bas aar time pachi naa amar mon er moton update likha!

Am damn sorry... exams have started na!

Anyways...

in short I wanted to tell you that it was fantabulous indeed...

To good...

Argh... a woman...

She can the be the reason of success of a man...

As well as his downfall...

Anyways... it's beautifully written...

Makes us all the more believe that this man... was once a human...

Superb... continue soon...

Not that soon so as to I have enough time to write my comments per chapter... hehe...

Luv,

Shree
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
thank you each and everyone for the lovely response...
i couldnt thank each one of you individually...please uske liye maaf kar dio..time is restricted at my end..😳

but do read and leave your feedbacks for the update...would love to hear about the update from you..

anyone facing issues with the blog access...please inform me..ill try to resolve as soon as i can..

and those who needs the blog access..please send me your email address...and leave your comment here..so i remember you..😊



Here is a small trailor for the update of

chapter 5

"I was about to turn my gaze back to my subject in front when a red silk caught my attention from the guests around. She walked from behind and reached the platform smiling cordially at the others. She took the seat and adjusted the microphone in front. That's when I saw her face.

It was her, the girl I had seen at the coffee shop and forgotten. But even with all the forgotten memories there was something she had kept back that day. The reason I recognized her at the first gaze. On the first meet I saw her innocence, her simplicity and her cheerfulness, but today she was completely changed except her dimpled smile and her mesmerizing eyes.

Clad in a red backless flowing gown, she was looking like a hot, sassy and sultry seductress who could win and break a man's destiny at a click of her fingers. The sparkling diamonds on her neck and ears, couldn't overdo the sparkle she held in her piercing gaze. Though the face was adorned with a heavy loud make up, the tanned skin beneath the mask remained her utmost identity and there she was sitting like an epitome of a beauty, looking like the goddess of seduction. "


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bring on your weapons..i am prepared to accept them..😆😆
Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
me first
🥳🥳🥳🥳

Coming back
Awesome update
Loved it
it was full of emotions
the way u described his thoughts , his feelings, loneliness was just amazing
Finally Arjun is here
lets see what happens next
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Smaller one is me & taller is you...😡😡😡

Dont know why but I expected cliffhanger in EOD...😡😡😡

Anyways Awesome update...

Sikander get very much disturbed with his family memories...
No one is born to lead a life as a criminal, only situations & surroundings led people to live life in this illegal world......like Dilawar & Pathan...
Sikander lost in Naazneen...😆😆😆
Sikander knew very well about Pathan's gaze...🤢🤢🤢
That day target was Sikander himself...😃😃😃
Sikander is now dead, the person who is behind the bars is only Dilawar who is now remorsing the deeds of Sikander...
Arjun came to meet him...😲😲😲

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 10 years ago

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