NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24

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rimi

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Posted: 10 years ago

hi everyone,

yes its a new story...though not too new..i have started posting this sometime back in my blog and have a few readers who follow it..😳

they forced me to post it here...claiming its worth a read..(i dont agree to them though 😛)

nways since i have started this thread...here i am posting the prologue...

if anyone is interested please leave a comment..

I will only post first chapter after this..😊

if i dont get suitable comments..ill delete this thread...😳

no pms for this also...abhi post hi kaha kiya hain??😆

Prologue page 1
Chapter 1 page 2
Chapter 2 page 4
Chapter 12 page 17
Chapter 13 page 18
Chapter 14 page 20
Chapter 15 page 21
Chapter 16 page 23
Chapter 17 page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

unres...me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Thank you Thakur for posting this here...🤗🤗🤗

Meine aage ka padha hua hai isliye...🤬🤬🤬

Mujhe PM chahiye...😆😆😆

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savali

@savali

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res/unres
Intrsting and unique topic of story.
Nice prologue.
Sik is old now nd bihind the bars.
Omg He murdered smone at age of 14.
So u r gng to write on criminal aur i say autobiography of sik,that how he turned to most wanted criminal.
Waiting eagrly
plz cont here.

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

I am really glad you went with your friend's words.

This is a great start. You are trying to humanize a faceless character, which is a great compliment. I got this comment from someone spl a long time back and I know how it feels.

I am already plugged in, count me as your reader.

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Bhaktikapasi

@Bhaktikapasi

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey

This is a fabulous piece of work. If u delete this thread then please pm ur blog address cos this is one ff I don't wanna miss.

Pls update soon.

Bhakti

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow nice start Rimi

Very well written

Hope u will post it here cause I can't follow it on blog

But before that give cs

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 10 years ago

Dear Rimi Thanks a lot first

for posting this & keeping my words

You will soon see the impact too 😉

But this is one your most excellent piece of work

thats why i insisted you 😊

Well I have read all the chapters till 3

& all are fab

I will will not spill the beans now but thanks again a big hug 🤗

Continue soon 😊

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

fabulous dear..

want to read it..

hope u post it on forum..

plz continue soon

plz pm me

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

I've found it!!

So posting comment here..hihi...

Again a dive in the sea of memory...and this time another name came out... Najneen! both FBs were nicely sketched...in Rimi's style!!

Dilawar went through a lot...specially he & his family was treated badly by the law enforcement wing...and somhow it flashes on his face when he looks at Aman...

but this Aman amazes me likw he does with Sik..or I say Dilawar?

Rathod would want to meet Dilawar and not sik?? why so?? was Najneen planted by him..or them?

I have so many questions...but still...I don't want all answers right now... I'm just loving this story...

Do continue...& thanks for resnding the invitation.