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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 17
sikander aur dilawar dono ek hi hai...dunia k liye jo sikander hai
wo nazneen k saamne dilawar ban jata hai...
tv pr roshni k murder ki khabar dekh kr nazneen pareshan ho uthi
sikander ne kuch notice bhi kia...pr dilawar k dil ne use side kr dia
sultan sikander se gusse me hai...sultan ne socha nhi tha k sikander aisa kuch karega
sultan ne sahi kaha...sher ko chahe kahin bhi rakho wo sher hi rehta hai
but sikander ko khud pr confidence hai k usne jo kia sahi kia
nazneen se nikal ki baat ne sultan ko gussa aur badha dia aur usne
sikander aur nazneez ko jaan se marne ki dhamki tak de di
sikander bhi janta hai k sultan aisa kr skta hai...
interesting part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 15
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Nazneen was a very smart player
Sultan got his gut feeling that something is wrong with Nazneen
Sikander first doubt in her but after background checking he didn't pay heed to it
Dilawar was coming back
He realized his feelings for Nazneen
Sikander attached on Arjun's weakness Roshni
Amazingly Written
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 16
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Brilliantly Written
Roshni's death was so painful
Sikander was ruthless and heartless his egoistic self cruel nature every emotion you described perfectly
What did he do with Riya...???
Last lline was confusing " My unseen little star Nayab' What's that...???
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 17
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Arjun's state after Roshni's death can't imagine it was so painful
Sikander didn't want to face Naazneen after killing Roshni
Sultan-Sikander convo was nicely written
Sikander's ego was getting higher n Sultan was angry
He wanna marry Naazneen but Sultan refused his wish
He doesn't want to loss Naazneen
Naazneen have full faith that Sam will caught the murderer
Ayesha come to the picture
What did Sikander do with her...??? Eagerly Wait to know
Loved the way Aman said " so what did I miss?' his curiosity will never end
Amazing update
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi
just found your story
really liked
can i have the link for your blog plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know dear I'm super duper late
But finally today I finished reading all the msgs
This being the last as I wanted to read it in peace
Sorry once again for being late
Anyway
Coming back to the update
Awesome update dear
loved it
So true
Sik ka ghamand uski har ka karan hai
Loved the way you described all the emotions
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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