NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24

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_shadesnature_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Buddy I have some issues with my emai id so can't send it you

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Awesome update Di

loved it

so my guess was correct.. Dilawar to Sikander.. iss transformation me Atiya n uski family ke saath jo hua uska haath he!

well.. loved the fb part again!! so nicely written! *claps!!*

Atiya.. she faced so much *hurt!*

Aman-Siki.. just love their bonding n relationship!!

Sam ne nahi bataya Arjun kahan he.. pata tha..!*wink*

Dilawar milna chahta he..SamJun se.. I think iss baar milenge!! *wink* hehe!! ab ye kya connection he?? *me in thinking mode*

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*came back!*

Naazneen.. this girl is interesting..

eagerly waiting to know how she managed to betray siki!!

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

awesome part

sikander's m.v about past and that time when he and his family had to face was horrendous

hmmm dilawar, nice

aman doesn't trust sik

what did sik means, sam will definatly came with arjun after hearing dilawar's name?

thanks for blog access

update soon

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

sorry late hu

The transformation is really visible in each update

What the family went through gives me goosebumps

but why sud Sam and Arjun come to meet him when they here Dilawar's name and not sik

Old ACPs... ahaan

waiting for the meet

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Hey Rimi dear...

AM damn sorry for being late!

Loved the update - that's too less for me to say... trust me...

Coming to the transformation of Dilawar to Sikandar... and seriously hats off to you for that... the way you have portrayed it... kudos...

HIs and Aman's relation... really a relation which is exquisite in its own way... one can't call it friendship... and certainly not enmity... these two men... their bond for me is like lost old friends... and they know each other as their favorite book indeed...

The past... argh... khoon khol raha hai mera... the funniest thing about our Indian Police is that if it has produced officers like Arjun... they are also responsible for the creation of Dilawars...

Trust me... my hands went numb reading Atiya's state... I kept my fingers crossed that nothing should happen... and a sigh left me when her bhaijaan caught her unconscious form...

The way these people have treated them... sigh... especially a young naive Atiya... I know what this feels like... even though in our imaginations we have throttled them to death... in reality one can really do nothing but clench their fists... and bite off their anger...

Misuse of power... sigh... whether you are the hero or the villain... this causes the greatest problem right?

Nazneen... a femme fatale?

Dil se ek ghalti ho gayi... mohabbat...

Aur uss ghalti ka anjaam... sigh...

That's one of the reasons why it's best to stay away from love... to just stay away from this emotion that has been hyped up as the greatest feeling on earth...

Because for me... according to me... this feeling is nothing but a life's gamble...

And I hate gambling... kyunki jua wih khelte hai jisse harne ki fitrat ho...

"Love is like gamble. From the start you know you'll loose everything you have."
Arzum Uzun, Akn 8 Kusuru

sigh... let's see what is to come...

Luv

~ Shree

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awesome update

loved it

that was an emotional update

Atiya's state was heart-wrenching

And the scene at the police station was really disgusting

Loved the way you potrayed Aman and Sik's relation

Nazneen???

interesting

waiting for the next part

continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Part 2..

its awesome..

sik's life story..his sister aliya..

now where is arjun..

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

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@goldie : thanks darling..glad you liked the pace and flow of the story...yep atya and nazneen..they will remain till the end...😉

do keep reading..hope not to disappoint you..😃😃😃

@laila : thanks devil...i liked your comment..and its reality that happens with each and every woman in this world...its pretty disgusting to even think about that gaze..🤢🤢
Aman..my fav character..naazneen ke bare mein kuch maat kaho..wait till i write..😆
keep reading..😛

@nikita: thanks dear..glad you liked...keep reading..😃😃

@natureshivani : oops i am sorry..i shifted the story to blog for lack of readers and offcourse silent readers..i think u understand that..pm me your trouble with the email address...incase i can solve it, ill try to help..😳

@neha : congrats dear..really you were right..yep atya has a major role in this whole story..😳
keep your patience...you will know soon..very soon...trust me..😉

@Areesha: thanks dear..glad you liked..keep reading for the answers..😃

@KG : old ACPs..there is where my eyeballs are stuck..🤣🤣
keep patience dear..everything is on its way to you..😆

@Shree : thanks dear...i guess this is a comment for two parts right..😊⭐️⭐️
love is a gamble...beautiful lines...can i use it somewhere in the story...i dont still know if ill need..but taking the permission for the same..😳

thanks once again for your feedback..keep the coming..😃😃

@skrafty : thanks dear..keep reading 😃

@ariyabestfan : thanks dear..for the blog invite ill require your email address..pm me that...😊

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