NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24

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viratluvmannu

@viratluvmannu

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

hi such an excellent story...was onle able to read till chap 2...plz pm me the blog link plz plz...i dont want to miss any part...one dobt...is it mainly about sikinder or arjun

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

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@KG : thanks kuchu..atya story is still left to unfold..wait for that...glad you liked it..keep reading..

@nikita : thanks dear..glad you liked..keep reading..

@skrafty : thanks dear...yep the past is painful...but still a lot of parts left..wait for them..thanks for reading..

@gold: thanks gold..dilawar abhi tak siki nehi bana...usse siki baane main abhi bohot waqt baki hain..keep reading..

@neha : thanks neha..glad you liked...you liked the twist?? well always expect the unexpected from me..keep reading..

@viratluvmannu : thanks dear...glad you liked..sent you invite..read a few parts..you will come to know..hope to get comments from you..

okay i have covered 6 chapters and yet i havent given a face to the new characters i have introduced..😛
So finally took the time to get the faces sorted and here you go..😊😊
You already know the rest of the characters so only giving the ones that are new..😊
A proper and complete CS will be added after a few more chapters..when almost all the central characters have been introduced..😳

Characters

Young Dilawar Khan :

Aman...

Little Atya :

Naazneen :

Baba :

Rest of the characters you already know...and the ones who would be introduced soon, will be given along with the specific chapters...
Hope now it becomes easy to connect to the story better..😳
do leave your feedbacks on this too..😃

update will be posted on the blog..pms will be sent soon..😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

res 😊 / UNRES

First let me dance YAAH ME FIRST 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

HMM BEAUTIFUL CS RIMI

specially Siki 😆😉

well sanas pic was well chosen

waiting for next chapter 😃

NOW COMING TO UPDATE *****

loved it rimi

awesome update

I must say what a part & what an execution

I just loved every bit of it

dilawars weakness & atiyas helplessness all were beautifully potrayed

this was the first time dilwar changing into ruthless sikiander & experiencing the power of guns

even if it was just to protect his sister

but he experienced the beast inside him

which was already set fre in his brothers

poor atiya had suffered the most

& yes now sikander is scared of those pure eyes who could sense the best inside him

well what ever happened was really heart wrenching

but what ever path he choose was not justified too

lets see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon

Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Unresed for CS on pafe 10 😊

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Awwwsssmmm Update n CS
Loved it
Amazingly Written
Continue Sooon
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

wow

amazing part

love it

cs is nice

thanks for pm

update soon

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sonai

@rajeeviansonai

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

di eto darun ekta story lukhcho jantei parini di.amar xam cholche di plz tumi amak pm pathio.ami february porjonto busy thakbo ami time kore rply dia debo di

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Awesome update

loved it

The past

well I have no words

Dilawar killed everyone but looks like this scared Atiya out of her wits

So Dilawar to tell the next part of his story to Aman

interesting

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

To be honest with you Rimi, everytime I get the pm of this story something in me binds inside.

No I am not blaming you

You have written it so well ke sabkuch bohot feel hotha hai

Dilawar ka past was rough for sure, he even took the wrong path

But couldnt agree more to waht he said, or rather what you said.

If he hadnt taken it, life was not going to be anything better.

Atya's pain was scary. But what happened to her now?

And how did Arjun end up there?

waiting for it

update soon and wonderful work indeed.

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

the story is heading to it's apex...3 chapters and Dilawar 's misery was narrated, how much that boy suffered , his first step in order to save his little angel...and first killing...his first day with fire arms, the first betrayal...that too from his own brothers... and atiya... can't imagine her misery... she faced too much! (you are becoming professional psycopath day by day..)

pathan's with their bacground story seemed interesting... looking forward to see the game is about to start... nazneen vs pathan vs sik... and R-R behind the curtains

but the breathtaking part was Rathod Dilawar meet... it was too good to my expectations... sober words...but sharper than knives...

atiya is with arjun...why I'm not surprised?

do continue...

thanks a lot for update pms... and extremely sorry for being too late.