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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

loved it Rimi

Awesome update as always

So the 2nd meet of Nazneen & Siki was really interesting 👏

& loved how the meeting was sketched

Song you chosen was fab dear 😊

& one of my fav too...

Specialty of this song is that it contains a kind of peace & attraction 😊

well Pathan Lala the right hand or business partner of siki

nice sketch of his to 👏

Back story was interesting & heart touching too

yes at times kids like this have a great impact & same happened with him too

So his reaction & character is justified 👏

well Arjun came to meet siki

& now his all restlessness & remorse is taking a toll on him

as you sow you shall reap this is quite true

& same happened with siki too 😊

thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊😊

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Awwwsssmmm Update
Just Loved it
As always Supperbly Written...
Pathan Lala's back story was interesting...
Loved Sikander n Nazneen's 2nd meet...
Arjun had come to meet Dilawar...
Amazing Update
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Edited by _Nikita_ - 11 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Hey Rimi

I am late

Second meeting of Sik and Nazneem

Beautifully etched plot yaar

Pathan's back story

Wow after a long time reading a back story who was just a name again like Sik

And then here he comes.

Arjun rawte himself

Waiting for the meeting

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Awesome Chapter...

Hehe... zyaada likhne ka waqr nahi hai... so can just say that I loved it!!!

It was perfect to the T!

Trust me... I love the way you portray Sikki 😳

Ah... finally waiting for "that" moment!

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Finally i am here...after a long time, almost a month...sorry for getting so late...but finally..😊

thank you so much everyone who had read the update and commented...😃

i am not replying to everyone individually this time...but i have read all your comments...the comments are always encouraging...do keep them coming...

here comes the next part...its updated in the blog...😊

Anyone with any issues about the blog...please do pm me...ill try to get back to you soon..😊

trailer for the update...😊

'Atya ke bare mein janna chahte ho?' he suddenly asked and turned back to me, analyzing my reaction. The fading smile on my face vanished instantly and I looked up at him.

Did he knew?

'I wonder what had led to this destruction or should I call it your destiny dilawar?' he mouthed the words which buried me deeper into the quicksand of my past.

*****

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

An excellent part dear

the way you portrayed this 2 men and their aged version was very good

so it was Rathod who came to meet him

And Atya's story is indeed terrible

but those last part... that shook me

Arjun is with her??

wow that was a twist I never expected

waiting for more

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Wonderfully Written
Rathod had come to meet Dilawar
Flashback was painful
Arjun is with Atya...???
Continue Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Awesome update

loved it

So it was Rathod who came to meet Dilawar

The way u potrayed aged Rathod was nice

The past was indeed painful especially the last part

that shook me

aise Bhai ho to dushmano ki kya jaroorat

Arjun with Atiya?????

now thats interesting

This twist was indeed unexpected

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

loved it Rimi

awesome update

Dilawar turning into Sikandar.. 👏

the biggest reason was his family itself

I really felt bad reading his family condition

poor Atiya she is really in big trouble now 🤢

ye bhai hai ya kasai.. 😡

his weakness & helplessness gave him new power to save his sister from those beasts 👏

& so now it was sikis first step into the world of crime 🤢

sameers & dilawars meet was really good ⭐️

Atiya is with arjun 😲

thats really interesting

Thanks for the PM

Continue Soon 😊

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Awesome update Di

loved it

it was Sam who came to meet Siki..

it was beautifully written

Sam's description from siki's POV was very nice!

fb.. Atiya n Ammi were being sent to Khala's place.. but Amil n Afsal came there.. how colud they do such a thing?? so disgusting..

Dilawar went to police station.. n treatened them.. got Atiya's location.. he shot the constable into his arm.. much expected one!

looking forward to how he saved Atiya n what he did to that officer!

well now.. this twist.. really intriguing.. Atiya with Arjun.. an unexpected one!!

why doesn't he want to meet Atiya?

do continu soon

Thanks for pm

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