NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
his my dear Vamp was the best update till now.
Sikander surrendered himself to Arjun may be that is the reason Arjun vanished. May be he was feeling guilty that He couldn't avenge his wife's death on his own. *Confused*
Sikander knows Arjun's weakness. He indeed is a smart player.
Aman reminds me of Arjun. *Wink*
The best part was FB.
Sikander's story is really interesting & painful.
He was a good kill who was wronged by some idiot police officers.
If his brothers wouldn't have gotten involved in illegal shenanigans he would have been spending his life peacefully with his family.
Atiya. Somewhat she reminded me of my childhood. While reading Dilawar & atiya scene I was imaging me & my brothers, As you know I was born after 4 brothers, I was the most pampered child.
"She was growing and eventually put through a lot of constraints. I looked on as she struggled to adjust herself with them. I would hear Ammi scold her, teach her different stuffs and she would adhere to her silently sometimes with a frustrated pout, while sometimes with a happy smile."...Totally my story. It feels like I am reading the story of my life. *Smile*
Thank you vamp for writing Atiya's character so beautifully. *Big hug*

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Awesome update Di
loved it
Siki wants to meet Arjun.. n Aman is doubtful!
where is Arjun??
Sameer.. will he tell where's Arjun??
Atiya.. really sweet!
Dilawar to Sikander..waiting to know the reason for the transformation.. though I've guessed it but still !!
the flashback was written beautifully!!
do continu soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Brilliantly written...
Arjun vanished after Sounder got arrested...
The glimps of Sikander's childhood was written Awwssmmly...
Cont Sooon
Waiting for the next part
Thanks fpr the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
WOW
You already know I am into this story
loved every part
Sik ka past seems like chalk and cheese from the present
The chara description was bang on re
couldnt help but say that I do feel for that old man...in that jail
It is a hard truth for sure
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
For me Sikander is the main lead of this story
Very well written update
The childhood os Sikander was the best part of this update
And ven Arjuna,s portion is also a treat to read
But Aman a doubtful character
Waiting for more
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Fantastic update
aman is still doubtful abt sik intentions.
Arjun is vanished after sik arrest.
Aman truly said,sik knows the weakpoint of everyone.
Sameer is retired,jaroor use arjun ke bareme pata hoga.
Sik childhood is nicely described.
I think atiya was the reason for the birth of sik through dilawar.
Cont soon n thnks fr pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
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@goldie : thank you so much goldie..had you not forced i would not have uploaded here...thanks for forcing me...glad you liked the story...keep reading..

@Areesha : thanks areesha...lots of questions...but answers will come with the gradual progress of the story..keep reading..

@sneha : thanks...padhte raho sweet heart...

@skrafty : thanks dear..glad you liked this story...keep reading..

@laila : copy paste comment ke liye no reply..he he he he he...

@neha : thanks dear..you guessed it?? pm me...lets see if we match in our thoughts..keep reading..

@nikita: thanks dear...keep reading..

@kuchu : thanks KG..you pity siki..not a good sign KG..keep reading..

@shivani: thanks dear...glad you read and liked it..keep reading..

@savali: thanks..keep reading..


Note

just as i had mentioned earlier..this story has very less readers...so i have shifted it completely to blog..those who have sent their email addresses i have added them...😃

anyone else interested please pm me your email address...😊

about others...the next part is waiting at the blog..will send you the pm in a couple of seconds..

one more important confession...i have forgotten to mention in the earlier updates...but its late than never so...

this story isnt only my work...my devil has helped me a lot with the stuff...

Thank you so much..for taking all my questions patiently...🤗


thanks for reading...

rimi..


Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Res / unres
YAAH me First 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Now coming to update ***
Loved it Rimi
awesome sketch
I just loved this heart touching story
a process of turning a noral main into a devil an Emperror of dark
reasons are quite convincing & well explained
really feel bad for atiya an innocent soul here
& nanznen story seems to be interesting
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon

Edited by GOLD.A - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

It was a very interesting chapter.

flashback was very beautifully written. The scene at police station was disgusting but also a reality. I have encountered these kinds of incidents many times where a boy would shamelessly check me out with his lusty eyes & my brother would lose his control. I can imagine what dilawar must be going through. I guess it was the most significant part of Dilawar's life. This incident planted the seeds of rage and not-so-good feelings in innocent dilawar's life, and that seed later took a shape of grown and healthy plant after Nazneen watered and treated it with betrayal.

Aman & sikander's scenes are treat to read. They share a unique relationship which always left in awe.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awwwsssmmmly Written
Loved it
Flashbacks were written Beautifully...
Nazneen's character is Interesting... Looking forward to know more...
Loved Aman n Sikander's relationship...
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM

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