NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

*going through your diet charts*

*going through your water bottles*

*searching your tiffin boxes*

*get caught!*

yikes... umm... hihi... no.. nott..nothing...

I was just wandering ki kya khaa ya peeke yeh likha!

Till now I just knew how much you loved the man who never existed...

And the way you have written about him...

It just explained it...

Unique... this word is too less for me to say that how different your story is...

And I must say... that I love you... for this beautiful story!

Cause even I like this guy the most!

One of the most worthy villains ever eh?

Would like to see how the "meet" happens... truly...

His relationship with Aman... excellent... I just loved it!

True... after having spent a year more than quarter of a century... such a relation does exist...

Now coming to his introspection... it was excellent...

The best thing was that you made it realistic...

Not a saint just come from Himalayas... but rather a guilty man...

really loved this part... it was just perfectly balanced...

Love ya loads...

~ Shree

P.S : I may contact you soonish for a wee bit help in Sikki's stuff... hihi... it might be after a week or so 😳

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

I know I've made a grave mistake!!

prologue ke peeche 3rd chapter ka comment chipka dia!!

kya karoon aajkal dimaag aur haath ka connection kuch thik nehi hain na...

Anyways, though I'm reading the first chapter for the 4th time...it's still feels awesome like the 1st time.

Sik...his long days of penalty let him think over his life, look behind and see his deeds..and now he feels guilty...

Aman...a honest policeman with a melancholic past... but still he remains strong... and he shares a nameless bonding with his oldest prisoner... should I call it bittersweet?? coz I found everything except sweet!!

Sik want's to meet Arjun!! now that's a surprise...why he want's to meet his biggest enemy? aab iss umar main baitke purane chasewali din yaad karega ya ek-do round Chess khelne ka irada hain??

Do continue...& thanks for PM..

& sorry for the blunder.

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

sik wants to meet arjun..

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 33

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

wow!! Awesome story di

loved it

beautiful start!!

Sikander's autobiography!!

really interesting to read

beautifully written!

Aman.. really an honest officer!

loved sik-Aman's bonding!

now Sikander is feeling..hurt..pain.. he's waiting for his death..

Arni's pain.. no words to describe it!

now sik wanna meet Arjun..

what next??

waiting to read it

do continu soon

n pm me the updates!!

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

khola hi hai to comment kar hi deti hu...
this is a marvellous piece...
Sik's story..Sik's lyf... itna acha idea apke alawa koi nehi soch sakta...

Well... mne phle cmmnt kia tha... Mujhe pm karte rho..

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rimi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Res unres

YAAH ME FIRST 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

NOW coming to update:

Awesome rimi dear

really good

the glimpse of sikis childhood is really interesting

I just loved how you had portrayed atiya his sister

Now giving a face to a faceless character is really different & tough

& you are doing it brilliantly dear👏

I just wanted a good confrontation of arjun & siki

lets see what happens next

I have very less to say as already read

will properly see after Part 3 😊

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 10 years ago

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

wow
amazing part
arjun vanished after capturing sikander
sikander's m.v about family, seems like he was an honest and innocent boy back there, then what happen?
What happen to atiya?
Was she the cause of today's sikandar's birth?
So many questions
for answer have to wait till next part
update soon
waiting

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Awesome update...

Aman & Sikander knows each other very well...😃😃😃
But Aman still not trust Sikander...
Why Sikander wants to meet Arjun now???😕😕😕
Where is Arjun???😕😕😕
What did it mean that he was not captured by Arjun???😕😕😕
Sikander is waiting for his death...
Sikander's childhood description was good...😃😃😃
I think that Sikander's brothers & Atiya's life led him to become Sikander from Dilawar...🤢🤢🤢

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...