NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Finally!

It's a different & unique concept.

For the first time I am looking forward to read the story on a villain.
Once the cruel & heartless criminal is now nothing...i am guessing this will be a classic story of Karma.
continue soon

PS. I told you it's a masterpiece, see everyone is loving it

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

YAY!!!!!!
me first

this story is one of a kind
Awesome update
Loved it
I really have no words
the way u have humanized the character of Sikander is amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago

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savali

@savali

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

res/unres
Mindblowing,fantastic start.
Aman Mathur is really one of dedicated off towards his duty n mation.
I respect his decision to remain unmarried n
his reason behind it.
I respect his father alot for
suporting amans mother regarding her religion.
Situation,condition n time has ability to
bring changes in anyones life and Aman is example of it.
I like the nameless bond which aman n sik r sharing.
Chalo ye janke khushi hui ki sik ko bhi dar lagta hai.
Sik state when he get that cut ,his thoughts when he killed rosh,
arni's pain, the way u potrayed it was speechless.
So now sik want to meet arjun,waiting for it.
Thanks alot for pm.

Edited by savali - 11 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Thanks Dear Rimi for the update

A unique start 👏

Some thing out of the box to read

Loved expression of a Devil from his own mouth

How from a normal human being he became Emperor of the dark

I am loving it

Well I already read the parts aur coment bhi kar chuki hoon Blog pe

What to write here I am really clueless

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Interesting update Vamp.

Sikander-aman unnamed relationship was beautifully written. the very first thought that comes in our mind when we think about criminal-officer relationship is "hatred & disgust" but this is different. They both see each other almost everyday...they have spend 2 decades & 6 years far from civilized world their unnamed relationship was bound to start.

Aman's story is the biggest reality of our country.I always used to think why government does not support children of police-officers like they support Armians, or navians. Why such partiality? Well, my question will never be answered but innocence of many children will continue to be snatched away as a result of their ignorant attitude.

Once a great criminal is now reduced to thin flesh only. this is the circle of life. As they say, "Time never stays the same".

He now regret his actions in past. though it always confuses me that why old people become so good & apolitical is it the result of their helplessness that makas them understand "their" misery or is it just that they wanna right their wrongs before their end coz they wanna be in a good book of GOD.

waiting for sikander-Arjun meet.

PS. Your Arjun is going to be an old man na???

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

As you said it is diff from show character but

Still have a glance of that

The terrific characterisation of Sikander Damn amazing

Awesome update

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Among my readers I always heard that I deal with the emotions rather than action

say it that i am an emotional freak but something that hits deep will always take my attention

be it a book, film or rather personal talk

from kudhgarzi story i have seen you dealing with pain and helplessness with such an ease

but what i see now is something i cant label it

the thoughts of a man who was in his later stages

something like opening all those pages that was once buckled up tightly

and that too of a man who had seen more red that blue sky

who had heard screams than smile

maybe there is something beneath that too

you are giving a face to a faceless man

the brush and canvas and colors is in your hand

go ahead, lemme see the magic

But waiting s terrible pain re

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awesome update...

Liked Sikander & Aman relation...😃😃😃
Aman's story was touchy...
Liked this side of Sikander...😃😃😃
He was heartless criminal...
But now he knows what his victims has felt when he was killing them...Now he is feeling sorry...
Now he is scared of his own death...
Roshni's death scene was 😭😭😭
About whom Sikander was talking???😕😕😕
Why he wanted to meet Arjun???

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Awwwsssmmm story
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Brilliant concept...
Loved Aman's character..
His past was painful..
Sikander's character is Amazing...
He is feeling guilty for what he did all this years...
Every emotion is potrayed sooo well...
Now he want to meet Arjun...
Waiting for next part
Cont soon
Plzz PM me

Edited by _Nikita_ - 11 years ago