OS: A Holi Case,Pt2 Pg2,Pt 3 pg3 Completed

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well this is for you Aliya, as per your request😉

Broken into three parts, all up by tomorrow

And finally only a case, and for the first time no Riya, meaning only on the actual persons working in ETF Arjun, Aisha, Rathore, Shree and Chotu...

Part 1:

A lady was walking down the road after having bought everything she needed from the supermarket. She was happily stroking her belly and talking to it, while pushing her trolley till the place where her vehicle was parked.

"Patta hein baby, aaj holi hein? Papa bhi hein humare saath aaj shyam ko! Hum sab holi khelengein! And next year you'll be here to play holi with us!" she was saying to her belly. Suddenly while she was crossing the parking till her car, a car came very fast at her and hit her, and without even stopping just drove away. A few people who were there at that time rushed to her help...

Half hour later

"What yaar? Today is Holi? And these two are making us work? Hitler kahin ke?" Shree was saying to Chotu. And even Chotu was acknowledging it to him. Both were busy sharing their miseries, while Aisha who sat quite near them was hiding her smile while listening to them. She thanked god that Rathore and Arjun were standing very far and thus couldn't hear these two.

Arjun was standing near a window, watching outside completely lost in his thoughts. Despite everything he couldn't bring himself to forget that today was Holi, and his mind took him back to those Holis he spent with Roshni.

While on the other side, Rathore was standing with a marriage invitation card in his hand. One of his college friends was getting married and he was invited. But he didnt wanna go, so he was thinking how to get out of this without hurting his friend. He was busy devising a plan, when suddenly his phone started to ring.

"Hello, ACP Rathore speaking," he said and listened carefully to the caller for a few minutes, and then finally said, "Yes, Sir, dont worry. We'll start working on it right now!" After cutting the call, he turned to look at his team and said, "We have a new case, it's a hit and run case. A pregnant lady was hit by a car deliberately. She's the daughter-in-law of the commissioner's friend. Hence this case has been given to us!"

Arjun had immediately shifted all his memories of Roshni aside, when he heard Rathore's phone. He turned and waited for Rathore to tell them about the case, and he nearly forgot to breathe when he heard that the victim was a pregnant lady, and he couldn't stop himself from asking, "Is she alive? And the baby?"

Rathore turned to look at Arjun when he asked those questions, he could see the hidden tears in Arjun eyes. He knew why Arjun was asking so many questions, because Roshni had been pregnant when she was killed. And neither Arjun had known about it till the post mortem had been done.

"I dont know, the people who were present at that time have rushed her to the nearest hospital, but i dont have more information about it," Rathore replied in a gentle voice. Then he turned back towards his team and said in a stern voice, "Arjun and Aisha will go to the hospital, while me, shree and chotu will go on the crime scene to interrogate all the persons present!"

About one hour later

Rathore, Shree and Chotu reached the crime scene, where the police had already put barriers where the accident had occurred. Rathore checked around for anything suspicious, when he saw that this parking was under surveillance, it had cameras almost everywhere.

"Shree, there are cameras everywhere, maybe we can get more clues about this crime. Go and have a look at them!" Rathore said, "while me and Chotu will interrogate the people here!"

While at the same time in the hospital

Arjun and Aisha had just reached the hospital and were getting out of the SUV. But Aisha could see the tensed look on Arjun's face, he was also sweating a lot even though the temperature wasn't hot at all.

"Sir, are you ok?" she asked a bit unwillingly, because she knew Arjun hated when people showed any sympathy or concern towards him.

Arjun was shocked at Aisha's question, turned to look at her with fire in his eyes, "Do i look unwell to you! Maybe you have forgotten, but let me remind you that we have a case here to solve, so let's not waste time in chitchat!" and he entered the hospital without waiting for her.

"Khadoos kahin ka!" she said angry at herself for even asking that question to him, but then before he came back and scolded her, she rushed in the hospital after him.


PM only when i complete this OS😉, meaning most probably tomorrow😳


part 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79131768

Final Part:

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devildiva21 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum start...!!!
omg rosh had been pregnant when she was killed...!!😲😭 and the case reminding this to arjun...!!! feeling bad for him...!!!😭
continue soon...!!
happy holi in advance...!!
wow me first to comment...!!🥳
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola di
happy wali holi di yay...
superb start
aww rosh!!
my bro ..
jaldi update krna di
lov u
tc..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start... that lady nd Her Kid s safe na???? why someone wan to kill her????
oh no Rosh ws pregnant when she ws killed😭😭
Rathore understood Arjun's worries...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good start Tina
Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great start. What a twist. Can't wait to read the rest.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tina tum ne rula diya yaar..roshni was pregnant..poor arjun..i feel like crying for him😭
Super start hui hai yaar case ki.
Agar holi ke din case hota toh shree aur chotu humare hotties ko hitler he bolte😆
arjun aisha ka scene mast tha..i just love to c their cold wars😆
awesome hai yaar!
Please continue soon.
Mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki i am watching arjun show aur itne interesting time pe break aagaya
i am eagerly waiting to know arjun's reaction..when is going see that lady..i'm loving ds case.
Last but the least thank u soo much for writing this os tina..love for this OS🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Roshni pregnant..at that tym..
Case reminding Arjun of Roshni..
Nice start..
Continue Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Aisha followed him till the receptionist where Arjun asked where that lady was staying, and both went to see how Mrs. Mahi was doing. When they reached near the door of her room, they could hear a lady shouting and screaming in pain. As they got inside, they could see that a lady was struggling on a bed, with some nurses trying to hold her down and calm her, and a doctor giving her an injection. Next to her, there was an elderly lady standing and a young man. They waited for some time, till they saw Mrs Mahi calming down and dozing off to ask any question to the other members of the family. They needn't ask anything to know that Mrs Mahi had lost her baby.

After some time, Arjun asked Aisha to ask all the family members to come outside for questions, and both went out of the room not being able to look at Mrs Mahi sleeping body anymore.

The young man came out first to meet them. He looked completely shattered but was doing his best so as not to break down, because he had to give his wife the courage when she awoke.

"Hi, i'm her husband, Ajay Mahi," he said with great pain in his voice.

Arjun was himself completely stressed seeing Ajay like this, despite everything he could relate and feel the pain of the complete stranger standing infront of him. He was too hurt inside to be able to ask Ajay any question, and this Aisha could notice. So she started to ask the questions first.

"Mr. Ajay, is there anyone who could wish you and your wife such harm? Did you have any enemies? Did you people or your wife fight with anyone recently?" Aisha asked gently, and gave Ajay all the time to answer her. After some time, finally when Ajay could compose himself, he answered back, "Arti is such a sweet girl, never fighting with anyone, she was in fact always giving everyone her things, she believed in sharing with those who didnt have anything. It was impossible for anyone to hate her! And for my part, we dont have grudges with lots of people and yep fights too, but i cant actually visualise anyone of them doing this to my Arti!"

"Still Ajay ji, kuch to hoowa hoga? Was she worried lately? Anything?" Aisha persisted.

"I'm sorry nothing coming to my mind!" Ajay replied back a bit angrily though his eyes were teary.

"I'm sorry, this is important! It's the only way we can single out anyone who may have tried to hurt her," Aisha said gently, and knew that they wouldn't get anything more out of Ajay, and asked him to call the elderly lady out.

"You mean my mother?" Ajay asked, "but she doesn't know anything!"

"Still we can't miss anything! Please sir," Aisha said.

Ajay turned to go and call his mother, when Arjun asked him, "How many months? Ladka tha ya ladki?"

Ajay turned to look in Arjun eyes and replied this time being unable to prevent a single tear scroll down his cheek, "5 months, aur i dont know whether it's a boy or girl. Me and Arti had decided that we'd keep it as a surprise and never asked our doctor. We were so happy to be parents, that it was immaterial for us!" and went away.

After sometime Ajay's mother came out with tears in her eyes. She looked as if she couldn't stopped from crying and crying. Aisha went to hold her and comfort her the best she could, and then started to ask her the same questions as Ajay. But like Ajay she replied the same thing.

"it's ok, we'd find the one who did this!" Aisha finally said.

"Yep do find out who killed my granddaughter before her ever coming to this world!" Ajay's mother said and went back in the room crying relentlessly, making both Arjun and Aisha breathed with shock.

While in the supermarket

After hearing out almost everyone in the parking who had seen Mrs Mahi being hit, neither Chotu nor Rathore had any doubt that this wasnt a simple accident, actually it was cold blooded murder. They then went to find out what Shree had found out from the recordings at that time. Shree was sitting in the manager's room, and busy checking each video and cross-checking everything at that instant, when Rathore and Chotu joined him.

"Kuch pata chala? Unfortunately the car was driving too quick, and no one could note down the vehicle's num! The only thing we have was that it was a blue vehicle!" Rathore said angrily.

"It's ok sir, i have enough clues from the cameras! I already have the name of the person's whose vehicle hit that lady! I just got it," Shree said with pride.

Even Rathore and Chotu were very proud of Shree, and Rathore said, "Good job, Shree. Let's all go and find that guy now!"

They were leaving the surpermarket to their SUV, when Rathore received a call.

"Yes Rawte? Kuch pata chala?" Rathore asked and listened to Arjun's side.

"Ok, are you sure? Anyway we are close to that person who was responsible for it! We'll call you back after we get something! Till then stay there itself!" Rathore said and cut the call.

"Let's go team!" Rathore said and all entered the SUV to go and catch the driver who tried to kill Mrs Mahi.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely start...
What!!!
Roshni was pregnant when she was killed by Sikander... :@
iss Sikander ko nark mein bhi jagah na mile.
Aww...
Feeling bad for Arjun.
Interesting case and twist.
Waiting for the next update.

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