OS: A Holi Case,Pt2 Pg2,Pt 3 pg3 Completed- Page 6

Originally posted by: haruhi26

Aunty you mean the concept of my story is very harsh or you mean my writing is very horrible😳?

yep i dont know why but i always wanted to write such a story before, hence got a perfect opportunity for it for a Holi Case, where good triumphs over bad, while in this case a mother-in-law is playing Holi with the blood of her own grandchild just because the foetus was a girl😭

and you are quite right, now if Arti is unable to have any baby, the mother will gladly force his son to divorce her and marry someone else😭

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Tina,

The story is quite horrible, and that is really a compliment.

A sad fact of life is that the problems of women in their families are mostly due to other women, who see their standing in the family as directly dependent on, first, their having a son, and then keeping a tight hold on him even after his marriage. The next thing Ajay's mother would have done would have been to try and force him to divorce his childless wife and then marry again.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Tina. you are a naughty girl, for you are now fishing quite openly! 😉

No, I did NOT mean that your writing was horrible, did I not add that it was really a compliment? - but I don't believe for an instant that you really thought so!. However, it was a very depressing story, that too for a gay and light-hearted occasion like Holi.

Never mind, it came off very well. In general,however, I begin to think that you have a penchant for grim stuff. You start off with such delightful bubbly stories like in While you were sleeping, of The Challenge,. but somehow halfway you veer off in a different direction and dive into a serious track. It is not that the second track does not turn out well - it does - but the special, frothy quality of the beginning is lost. I hope you do not do that with your latest with Gia and Riya.

Shyamala Aunty