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@Wj.mad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

superb update.
U convay very nice msg through ur story.
Thanks for pm nd
Happy holi

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Well i guess it lol
aww ptani kaise log hote h!
dnt knw d importance of lyf...
thank u di
awesum concept
yipee
happy holi di
love u
tc..!!
hugs!!

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Girl child should be saved not killed..
It was a great message which needs to be spread in the society..

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samiya.059

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

amazing...
very beautifully written
thanks for pm..

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sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Tina,

The story is quite horrible, and that is really a compliment.

A sad fact of life is that the problems of women in their families are mostly due to other women, who see their standing in the family as directly dependent on, first, their having a son, and then keeping a tight hold on him even after his marriage. The next thing Ajay's mother would have done would have been to try and force him to divorce his childless wife and then marry again.

Shyamala Aunty

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Tina,

The story is quite horrible, and that is really a compliment.

A sad fact of life is that the problems of women in their families are mostly due to other women, who see their standing in the family as directly dependent on, first, their having a son, and then keeping a tight hold on him even after his marriage. The next thing Ajay's mother would have done would have been to try and force him to divorce his childless wife and then marry again.

Shyamala Aunty

Aunty you mean the concept of my story is very harsh or you mean my writing is very horrible😳?

yep i dont know why but i always wanted to write such a story before, hence got a perfect opportunity for it for a Holi Case, where good triumphs over bad, while in this case a mother-in-law is playing Holi with the blood of her own grandchild just because the foetus was a girl😭

and you are quite right, now if Arti is unable to have any baby, the mother will gladly force his son to divorce her and marry someone else😭

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Tina Ki jawani !!!

Well written case ...and the sad part is that its the reality 😭😭

Happy holi Girl

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awesome story...

yeah its sad...its cruel but its the reality...and reality of life is often harsh and horrible

there are many who believe that only a son can take the family name forward...I really pity on their narrow minded thinking!

We have so many couples craving to have a baby and on the other hand, there are people like this who throw away the bundle of fortune they have got!

Nice message Tina...

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: aliya_begh
superb..loved d msg at the end.."save girl child"
felt really bad for ajay and mahi..
So its her mother in law who did that..how disgusting yaar..how could she do that😡
loved the emotions,investigation,concept..thank you😃
superb writing

Thanks Aliya😳, so happy with your Holi OS request😳