OS- If riya would be there./upd pg-43.*imp note-pg47*sorry - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

307

Views

108.1k

Users

67

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

BitterBerry thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#61
OS - you really don't care



A group of students have arrived at the forest office for a camp in the forest. They wrer all aruond the bornfire. Suddenly they heard gun shot. They get scared.
The asst of the forest officer goes to call the forest off.'s wife then with the help of one of the student, kishore( asst.) enters to the jungle.
There they found the deadbody.
It was the forest off Anand.


Next mrng:

ETF team arrived there n started investigate the case. The main suspect , they found was the jr. Off
kunal.
Rathod asked him some question.
Rathod- tumhe usne andar kyun band kar diya tha.
Kunal- sir mujhe nahi pata..

Rathod- tumhare kapde kaise gande hue?
Kunal- wo mai jungle se jaa raha the , raste mai paani peene gaya tha n pair phisal gaya toh ye mitti lagi..

By the time riya enters the tent n observed kunal.
Arjun looked at her while she was busy with observing kunal.

Kunal left.
Riya- sir ye jhut bol raha hai..
Aise kapde toh sirf gande hote hai jab kisik saath hatafai ho ya fir ye jab ye ped pe chada ho iss laas ko tangte waqt.

Rathod- haan mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai..

Riya goes out of the club before just glancing at arjun once.

They called kishore there.
Rathod- tum uss jungle mai gaye the..tumhe kaise pata ki wo kaha tha.
Kishore- sir goli sunne ki awaz aayi toh maine hisab laga kar waha paucha..
Mujhe lagta hai aatma ne maara hoga..
Arjun- agar aatma ne kiya hota toh wo uss lakdi se kyun jalata uski aakhe , aag toh apne aap jal jati..
Jao yaha se..

Chotu found some blood traces n he called team to follow the blood drop.

They found a tiger was hanging on the tree.
Arjun- jaroor ye kaam poachers kar rahe honge. Smuggling karne k liye.
Riya- yes sir..
Aankdo k hisab se India mai 56 % wild life animals ki hatya kiya jata hai smuggling k liye..

After hearing her words he thought finally riya was back. Coz after that bacteria incident she never spoke about any statisyical data..
He looked at her. Her facial expression tells that she very upset with the murder of this tiger.
After that they get back to the camp.


Here shree was busy with finding his network of his tablet.
Chotu comes to him n asked kya shree ye faltu k cheezon mai laga hua hai..
Riya- haan tera network yaha nahi milega..
Shree- tu chinta mat kar ri..tera computer sirf arjun sir ka signal pakadta hai..

Riya- tum log phir shuru ho gaye..
Chotu- hum kya kuch keh rahe hai..dekhna arjun sir abhi aa kar tumhe bulange..
Kyun shree..

Shree- in arjun's style.-
riya agar tumhari bakwas khatam ho gayi hogi toh chale victim ki wife se minle

chotu- in riya's style- ye..ye..yes sir..

They heard arjun's voice-
riya agar tumhari bakwas khatam ho gayi hai toh uss victim ki wife se milne chale.

Riya turned around -
ye..ye..yes sir..

She left with arjun after shoting a glare to giggling shree n chotu.

At anand's house-
his wife was crying. Riya goes to her to console her.

Arjun asked her fr water. She indicates the way of kitchen.
Arjun enters the kitchen n found the medicine of pregnency.

Arjun comes out n left wid riya.
Arjun- kuch toh chut raha hai riya.

Then they returned to the camp.

Then rathod n riya went to jungle, after getting the right map.
Rathod n riya found the poacher.
Riya- sir wo hamare nisane pe hai..shoot karun.

Rathod- wo hamare nishane pe nahi hum unk nishane pe hai..

Then the poachers tied them with the rope with the trees.

Here shree was still finding signal.
Shree- yes ..signal mil gaya..
He then saw rathod n riya in tht condition.

He runs to inform arjun.

Shree- sir wo... Rathod sir..
Wo riya ..waha..
Arjun- kya hua riya ko?

Then arjun left to the jungle with shree n chotu.

They hide themselves behind the rock.
Ramesh comes to rathod n asked him..
Tum log hume pakad ne aaye ho na..
He goes to riya..
He then took out her gun from the hostler .
Ramesh- itni badiya maal hai..
He then put the arrow on he cheek.
Rathod- haat mat lagana usse..

Arjun gritted his teeth.
Chotu couldn't control himself.
He runs towards them.
They started fighting.
Suddenly an arrow is about hit arjun..
Riya- arjun sir...
Arjun stopped in mid n hold the arrow in the right time..

Ramesh goes to riya n put the gun on her head..
Ramesh- isse bachana chahate ho toh gun niche rakho..

Arjun- ye sirf meri ek team member hai.. Usk bina mai jee sakta hoon.
Par tum apne bheje k bina nahi jee sakte..

Riya was so shocked to his reply.
Her eyes get moist. Bit she kept herself in control n didn't let fell the tear drop.

Then ramesh put the gun down.
An arrow is about to hit riya .. Rathod saved her..that arrow hits rathod's lef.
Riya removed the arrow.

Riya - sir u r ok.
Ra- haan..
After all the poachers get in hold
arjun comes to rathod n riya..

Arjun- tum dono thick ho.
Rathod- haan
bt riya just nodded without looking at him.
Riya- shree first aid leke aao..
She left without even looking at arjun

Arjun thought isse kya hua..



Pre-
ra- tumhe kya farq padta hai raute koi jeeye ya mare..
Wo toh sirf ek team memb..Hai
BitterBerry thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#62
After that during the whole case she was avoiding him.. Which was more annoying him.

They solved the case his wife arrested by etf.

Arjun- ek maa ki mamta ko toh samajh gayi lekin ek pati patni k rishte ko nahi..

At that time riya looked into his eyes n thought nahi mai kabhi inki takleef door nahi kar paungi..
Inhe toh koi farq hi nahi padta mai jeeun ya maru..
Kya ye itna gussa hai mujh par..

Flashback-

it was that night when arjun was lost in roshni's thought n riya was looking at him outside his cabin.
She then goes inside his cabin..

Riya- sir aap abhi tak gaye nahi..matlab raat bahaut ho ayi hai..

Arjun's beautiful memories are intruppted by riya
he screamed- roshniii..

Riya- sir..aap thick toh hai na..

Arjun- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho..
He comes to her n said
aakhiri baar bol raha hoon door raho mujhse ... ..
Mujhe tumhari humdardi ki koi jarurat nnahi.

Get out of here..
She holds herself..she just don't want to cry ..atleast not in front of him..
Coz she knows that he couldn't see her crying.
She got out of the cabin.
Here arjun punched the table n hurt his hand... Bcoz he hurt riya..

Riya was on the way she saw rathod.
Rathod- riya tum yaha.. Ghar nahi gayi..
Riya- wo arjun sir..
Ghar nahi gaye abhi tak
rarhod- yahi soch rahi ho na ye ghar kab jata hai sota kab hai..

Rathod told her that - kuch log iss liye nahi sote kyun k unhe nind nahi aati..aur kuch log..
Khabon k dar se sona nahi chahate..

Riya just looked at the different rathod.
Rathod- chalo mai tumhe drop kar dunga...

Flashback ends-


shree comes to her n she came out of her trance..
Shree- ri chalo khana nahi khana kya..
Riya- mujhe bhuk nahi hai..
She left towards the room.


Here rathod was waiting fr shree n riya.
Shree comes n told tathod that riya is nt coming..
Arjun heard that..
Arjun- kyun?

Rathod- tumhe kya farq padta hai raute wo khaye ya na khaye..
Jee ye ya mare..
Wo toh sirf tumhari ek team member hai..

Arjun thought..
Oh shit ye baat hai...maine jungle mai jo kaha tha..
Oh riya ..pagal ladki..

He didn't have dinner n left.


Here riya was searching for water..
Riya is riya , jitna bhi upset kyun na ho ... Mineral water peene k liye chahiye..

She goes to the mathka n looked at the glass..
Riya- yyuukkk
kitna ganda hai..

Arjun saw her n her facial expression too..
N thought ..oh ye ladki..
Bacteria ka pura ball nigal gayi..
Ab bechare glass k bacteria se dushmani nikal rahi hai...

When she turned around she saw arjun was standig there with mineral water..
He handed her that..
She took that n drank the water..
Riya looked at him.
Riya- thank you sir..
Arjun- wo suv mai tha..
Riya just nodded..

She turned n started to go..
Arjun- riya..
She stops in mid bt didn't turn..
Arjun- riya tumne khana nahi khaya..
Riya- bhuk nahi thi..

Walked to her n stood in front of him. He holds her hand n leads her the suv.

Riya was even more shocked than before..

He opened the door of front seat n told her to sit.
She does that as he said.

He goes to back door n opened the door.
Then he comes to riya n handed her some healthy cookies n dry fruits..
Which was always there in the suv under chotu's seat..
(U know how much enegry he need..)

Riya- mujhe bhuk nahi hai..
Arjun didn't listened to her n opened the wraper n took one cookie n held that infront of her mouth..

She looked into his eyes..she can see only care in those eyes..the care n concern which seen when she was shoted in the godown or then when she was on his lap struggling for life..
His words echoing in her ears
'' riya chup raho..'' kuch nahi hoga tumhe''..

She opened her mouth n he feed her..then she took the packet n started eating.
Arjun gave her medicine to her..
N then he walked away..

Riya- in low voice- yes he do care for me..

But it was enough to reach arjun's ears ..

Arjun told himself..
Tumse iss liye door nahi hoon riya kyun ki tumhari nazdeeki pasand nahi..balki iss liye kyun ki kahi tum hamesha k liye mujhse door na ho jao..

Arjun turned n looked at her..
In the mean time she looked up as her heart heard those words..
Arjun broke the eyelock n turned n walked away..


But all those things were noticed by rathod who was looking at thm fr a long time.
A small smile crept on his face..

He told himself-
yes raute u do care fr her

riya in the suv-
yes he do care fr me..

Mid way arjun-
yes i do care fr u.


Finished guys..
If u do care fr vampire pls hit the like buttons..


Thank u.
Sorry if ny mistake
devildiva21 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#63
yayy me first to comment...!!!🥳
wow awsum update yr...!!!
loved it...!!!
yayyy yes he do care for her🥳
love the way he was worried for her and got her mineral water and cookies to eat...!!!
eagerly waiting for the next story...!!!
continue soon...!!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
Mrs.JamesBarne thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Nice part . Just loved this one . Please continue soon:)
Queen.Bee thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#65
woaaawww... he do care!!!!!!!!!!!!1

loved it...kash riya hota toh kuch aisa hi ho jata!!!!
rocking_gal thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#66
wow!!!!just wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hayeee he cares...!!!!!!!
loved it...!
his concern was visible when he got her mineral water and cookies to eat!!!
loved the ending part!!!!
for u👏
life93 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Amazing os ...👏👏👏...nice idea n perfect execution👏👏👏...i really wanted to see riya in that scene...once again brilliant work dear...
DivineDarkness thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
#68
even we do care so the comments... Nice part...
856040 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Amazing,tumne toh sach mein hamare liya un sare cases mein riya ki kami puri kardi
plz continue soon and thanx for such an awesome story
love-arhi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#70

awesome...

really miss riya nd her chemistry with Arjun and rest of ETF members...

Related Topics

Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

4 months ago

Riya/Ariya FF: Aakhri Umeed {A/N on p.1 | Update 14}

⚠️ Statutory Warning ⚠️ This story is going to be an emotional rollercoaster 🎢. If you have a sensitive heart 💔, proceed with caution. There...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

4 months ago

Arjun and Riya saga: Veil

Sooo...this is also a long ass story in case someone into binge reading. 61000 words to be exact Writing this gave me a closure i didnt know i...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: Serialbestfan

1 years ago

ArIya TS :- Storm of Life updated Note - pg 6

Hello everyone..... Hi it's your Shweta/sweetipiemeghaa... I know I am not updating my old story but guys I forget the plot.... So I didn't...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".