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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
the update was so emotional 😭 loved it
missing riya so much after reading this :(
very well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hey guys i m back again
this OS would be on the painter murder case.


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crime scene -

the etf members are on the crime spot. Arjun n rathod r trying to get motive of the killer..
Arjun- iss painting ko repaint kiya gaya hai..aur color abhi gila hai..

Riya- iska matlab iss painting k saath jisne bhi ched chad ki hai wo killer ho sakta hai

arjun- ho bi sakta hai n nahi bhi..
Kyun ki iss painting se ye pata chalta hai k jisne bhi kiya hai wo ek painter hoga...bt killer..keh nahi sakte...
Par sawal hai kyun??? Wo khud bhi toh ye kar sakta hai..
Ab samjhi ya samjhaun...

Rathod- i think riya sahi keh rahi hai... Iss body ki poustre se toh yahi lagta hai k kliier koi painter hi hoga...
Par ye hume bata na kya chahati hai...

Rathod- riya tum victim k sare info pata karo..
Kis k saath kaise relation the..

Riya- ok sir

riya goes out. But shree n chotu stopped her..

Riya- guys mujhe jane do warna...
Shree- warna tera samjhe ya samjhaun naraz ho jayega..

Chotu- haan riya..arjun sir k hi asar hai..
Tum investigation n field mai kitna accha kaam kar leti ho...kyun shree

riya- guys bakwas band karo ..arjun sir aate hi honge..
Shree- haan ab tu unhi k gun gayegi na...

Arjun's voice came from behind-
agar tum logon ki bakwas khatam ho gayi hai toh chale riya..

Riya- ye...ye .yes sir.

They both sat in SUV n headed towards the victim's friend's college.

They met the prof. Arjun n riya both noticed that something was fishy..
But they didn't express..
Riya- ah sir aap k haat ko kya hua
she asked to the prof
arjun glared at her n she shut her mouth up..
arjun thought ' har kisi k personal life interfear karti hai..'

bt to their surprise he didn't answered them.

Arjun bahar aane k baad...
Kuch toh chut raha hai riya...


Then rathod n arjun goes to the assistant. They found some fake paintings..

They arrested him.
Arjun- kala insan ki pehchan aur chahat hai.. Par tum jaise kuch lalchi log iska apmaan karte ho..



In victim's house-
arjun,shree n riya was there.
Arjun- yaha jo bhi hai jaisa bhi hai
iske hone ka koi na koi wajah jaroor hai..
Ye position humare liye ek messege hai..

Riya- but sir iss angle se toh kuch bhi nahi pata chal raha hai..

Arjun- isse dekhne k liye sahi angle hone ki jarurat hai.

Shree goes to touch the stone
arjun- shree...ye kya hai..
Shree- oh sorry sir.. Gloves bhul gaya tha..
Riya started giggling.

But stopped by the stunt glare of arjun n shree..

Arjun finally got the answer .
Shree iss angle se dekho..
Shree dekta hai..
Riya bhi dekhti hai..
N un sab ko sab kuch samajh aata hai..

Wo victim k dushre dost k ghar mai jate hai.. ...

TBC

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Hey bella(don mind me calling u so...)... I have read all ua stories...they are actually good... Most of d tym i read ua stories n start laughing n my parents think ive gone crazy...
Oki coming to dis story, its really nice to c riya's involvement n perspective, care towards arjun.. Now i really miss her...
Guide goin gal...
Hume hasaate raho...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
very nice...

please aise continue karthe raho.. kamse kam we will feel like riya is in the episode..

n please try to write more n more epi's
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
awsum update...
thanx for writing episodes with riya in it... missing her...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awesome part... u make me wish riya was alive
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
firstly👍🏼
secondly🤗
thanking for bring Riya back in our world!!!!!!!!!
great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continued-
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arjun n shree are in the car.
Here rathod n riya is in conf room..
Arjun called riya for gather the information regarding the case .

Riya- hello sir!
Arjun- riya pata karo ki uss artist ka koi case ya crminal record hai ya nahi..
Riya- sir...sir wo..
Arjun cut the call..

Rathod- kya kaha uss ne?
Riya- sir ye arjun sir ki problem kya hai? Bina baat sune phone kaat diya.. Huh..
Aap toh unhe acchi se jante hai na

rathod- nahi..
Riya- sir jitna aap unhe jante hai sayad koi aur kabhi utna nahi janta hoga unk bare main.

Rathd ko apna purana din yaad aa jata hai..
Rathod- nahi..nahi jata hoon mai usse...koi nahi janta usse .

Rathod- kya puch raha tha wo
riya- wo rajesh( the killer) ki koi purane case k bare mai pata karne k liye phone kiya tha..
Rathod- chalo hume nikalna chahiye..
Riya- uski koi jarurat nahi..

Rathod- matlab
riya- mujhe pata hai.

She dialed his num.
Arjun picked up.
Arjun- policestation ka pata puchne phone kiya hai kya?
Riya- jee nahi? Mujhe pehele se pata tha?
Arjun- kya?
Riya- yahi ki 20 saal pehele rajesh ne ek FIR darj karwaya tha, alok n bikask (the victim) k naam pe..
Ussne rajesh k haath ko patthar se kuchal diya tha... Aur
Arjun- aur kya?
Riya- aur wo case band ho gaya alok k gawahi se. Usne ye kaha ki rajesh jhoot bol raha hai.

Arjun- iska matlab?...
Riya- yes sir..agla target alok hai..
Arjun cut the call.

Now in alok's house:

arjun n rarthod are standing there holding their gun.
But rajesh sprayed the liquor at alok's body n took out the lighter .

Arjun tells rathod to go out. He goes out .
But he have no idea that riya was inside...

Suddenly a voice spoke-
deko , tum hamare hath se nahi bach sakte..

Arjun- turned n saw riya was standing there..holding her gun..

Arjun- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho riya?
Riya- sir aapki madad kar rah...
Arrjun- ye ladki samajti kyun nahi...
Rathod saw riya inside..

Arjun- jao yaha se , bahar jao riya..
Riya - kyun ? Aapko phir se kehene ka mauka mil jayega ki mai field job nahi kar sakti! Research desk wapas chali jaao...

Arjun- riya ye behes karne ka waqt nahi hai..
Riya- pehele bhi kaha tha n ab bhi keh rahi hoon
aurat k kabiliat pe kabhi shak nahi karni chahiye..

Arjun- tum samajh nahi rahi ho riya ? Ye dangerous hai

riya- mujhe koi daar nahi hai..
Mai apni duty k waqt apni jaan de bhi sakti hoon..
And i mean it! U knw that...

Arjun thought for while that this girl is right n what she said is she mean it.
He remember the day when she shallowed the bacteria..
In that moment her eyes met to his.. No there was no fear..
She just don't want give up ..


Here riya thought
no sir main jo bhi karun bt mai aap ko kabhi haarne nahi dungi..

Riya- jada se jada kya hoga ? Mai mar jaungi na?

Arjun- RIYAAA!!
Ye kya keh rahi ho tum..

Riya - sir hum case pe dhyaan de.

For a short period of time his heart skipped a bit as if he is in the verge of losing someone again.

He kicked the book shelf which contain the chemicals..
N some how managed to stop him . But the smoke filled the room .
Riya started coughing.
Arjun stop rajesh n took the lighter from him.

In the end he got his hand.

But he found that riya was lying there unconcious..

He knew that her body is chemical sensetive. Her treatment doesn't allow her to contact with any chemical like this..

He called her name..
Arjun- riya..riya.. Aakhe kholo..

And then he slowly raised her arm n picked up in his arms and comes out of the house holding her..
Her head rested on his shoulder..

He called- chotu..
Chotu comes there n pick riya from his arm n put her on the back of the SUV..

Arjun hurriedly went to the SUV n scanned for her bag.
He found that.

Here riya gaining her conciousness.
She slowly sat up...
The word first come from her mouth is ' arjun sir'

but arjun was so angry at her..
Arjun- laparwahi ki bhi had hoti hai ria ! Kya jaryrat thi waha jane?

But his anger reflects how he cares for her..

Riya didn'y answer.
He came to back seat n give her the medicine..
She silently takes them..
He left without any word .

1 hour later..
Shree - riya tumhe uss case k bare main pata kaise chala?
Riya - mai nahi shree meri curiosity ..mujhe pehele hi pata tha k rajjesh kuch toh gadbad hai..

Shree- wow riya..
Arjun was listening to their convo..

Riya - looking at arjun-

kabhi kabhi curiosity bhi case solve kar sakti hai.. Samje ya...

When arjun glared at her she stops in mid..

Arjun goes to rajesh ..

Arjun- kala insaniyat ki pehchan hai insan ko khatam karne ki wajah nahi...

He walked out of the place as always leaving a questioning riya...




Hey guys its done
pls share ur views...

N thanks for previous likes n comments..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
HAILA,LOVED RIYA AND ARJUN'S CONCERN FOR EACH OTHER AND RIYA'S SAMJHAY YA...
AWESOME
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_pari

Hey bella(don mind me calling u so...)... I have read all ua stories...they are actually good... Most of d tym i read ua stories n start laughing n my parents think ive gone crazy...
Oki coming to dis story, its really nice to c riya's involvement n perspective, care towards arjun.. Now i really miss her...
Guide goin gal...
Hume hasaate raho...



oh its ok.
I won't mind to be called as EDWARD's bella..

He he he ..
Thanks

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