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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Sameer: Rawte cares for Riya...

Riya: You care for me...

Arjun: I care for u...

Me: I care for all of u... meri baat bhi to... Suno na suno na, sunlo na!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
awesome update
yes he does care for her so much😳
we do care for both & etf😆
riya is riya i liked arjun's comment abt bacteria🤣
liked her bubbliness & innocence
miss her so much in show
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
nice update :) loved it
shree to riya tera computer sirf arjun sir ka signal pakadta hai.. 😆
poor riya was so shocked when she heared arjun's reply
finally arjun realized that riya is ignoring him because of what he said in jungle
arjun does care for her :)
love how he gave her cookies to eat and gave her mineral water and medicines :)
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: fatima15

nice update :) loved it
shree to riyatera computer sirf arjun sir ka signal pakadta hai..😆
poor riya was so shocked when she heared arjun's reply
finally arjun realized that riya is ignoring him because of what he said in jungle
arjun does care for her :)
love how he gave her cookies to eat and gave her mineral water and medicines :)
continue soon



thank u for the long cmmnt.
I really loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: devildiva21

yayy me first to comment...!!!🥳
wow awsum update yr...!!!
loved it...!!!
yayyy yes he do care for her🥳
love the way he was worried for her and got her mineral water and cookies to eat...!!!
eagerly waiting for the next story...!!!
continue soon...!!!



yiieepee
thank u fr cmmnt first.
U cmmnt really made me happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: rocking_gal

wow!!!!just wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hayeee he cares...!!!!!!!
loved it...!
his concern was visible when he got her mineral water and cookies to eat!!!
loved the ending part!!!!
for u👏



thank u dear
agar riya hoti toh kamse kam ek smile toh hota usk face pe
jaise uss waqt jab cute riya ne usse coffee pilaya tha..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: life93

<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Amazing os ...👏👏👏...nice idea n perfect execution👏👏👏...i really wanted to see riya in that scene...once again brilliant work dear...</font>



hey
thank u
i love the font color n commnt too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Hey guys i m back..
Sorry fr late updating...
Read this one,
its all abt the epi when rathod n arjun was fighting...


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he can only see the blood... His hand, n the name written on tht ..
He wish to erase the cut mark on it not only just keep the name safe both on his hand and his heart...but also he want to free from the pain he felt everytime seeing tht mark...
He was not able to save his life..his roshni...
The intense look in her eyes the reflects only love for him even at the time of her last breath... She took her last breath by taking her arjun's name...


This scream ..he never slept after tht.. Everytime , every minute of his life he is dying ...


Here in the crime scene..
Shree-riya-chotu-talking.
Shree- ye arjun sir ab tak kyun nahi aaye..
Riya- haan wo toh hamesha jadli aate hai...
Shree-tu phone try karna..
Wo toh tujhse hi acche se baat karte hain..
Riya- shut up shree!


Riya dialed his number...he didn't pick the call..riya seems tensed..
Rathod come near her..
Rathod- riya..kise phone laga rahi ho..
Riya- wo sir..arjun sir ko..abhi tak aaye hi nahi..
Rathod- usse bulane ki koi jarurat nahi... Hum akele case solve kar lenge...ussk bina..
Riya- bt sir..
Rathod- par war kuch nhi riya..jao waha se evidence collect karo...order hai mera...


Riya left the place in a sad face..
Shree comes to her,
shree- kya hua rii..pareshan lag rahi hi..
Riya- haan yaar...dekho na ye arjun sir phone nhi utha rahe hain n rathod sir , wo kuch jada hi gussa hai..
Par aaj hai kya..
Mujhe badi chinta ho rahi hai...


At the same time arjun enters the crime spot...keep his glass at its usual place...n comes to the body.
Now riya ws happy...he looked at her...she flashed her dimples smile , bt no reaction...he got more angry n turned his face...it hurts her more...


Shree comes to her, hey kya hua?
Riya- pata nhi yaar ye dono aaj kuch jada hi ajeeb behave kar rahe hai...
They both looked at arjun n rathod who r giving deadly looks to each other...
Shree n riya get scared..
Riya just prayed her god to keep everything good...




Etf conf room..

They got one name ..the girl latika..
The thief..
They goes to the concert where latika ws performing...
Chotu was super excited to meet latika..


Latika comes to shree n danced around him..then she moves to riya...riya ddn't pay ny attention..
Then she moved towards chotu from rathod...
She snakes her hand around his neck n pulled him on herself..
Chotu seems lost in her..


The concert was finished. Wen they try to catch latika...people found their watch nd ring from shree nd chotu...all the people looked them in a deadly way..


Here latika was tryig to escape bt arjun caught her...
Latika starts flirting with him..


In the interrogation room:

riya n rathod was there with latika nd arjun was outside with shree n chotu...

Rathod asked her some question bt she was not intrested to give the answers... Well she was busy in drooling over arjun..
It made riya more angry...
Latika said she want arjun for her interrogation... N that shocks shree n chotu...
After that riya comes out fuming in anger..
Chotu n shree can sence tht what would happen next...


Riya was in the conf room-
how dare she flirt with arjun sir n tht to in the interrogation room..
Shree- rii..gussa kyun ho rahi hai...har koi thodi na arjun sir k saath flirt kar sakta hai..
Riya- just shut up , arjun sir was not intrested in her ok..
Shree- wah ! Riya tumhe unk intrest k bare maio bada pata hai.

Riya- whatever! Muje unk liye chai order karni hai...
Riya ordered his chai n took tht to his cabin..
Arjun was lost somewhere...this time riya don't want to disturb him like last time she did..


Arjun can sence her presence bt he choose to ignore her..
Riya slowly comes out without giving him his chai...


Conf room-

''mai waha jaa kar unse baat kar k aata hoon''

'' tum waha nahi jaoge raute''-

arjun- mai waha jaunga..

Riya,shree n chotu r shocked at their behaviour..

Rathod- ye ek team hai n team k hissa ban k raho...

Arjun- kamse kam aaj ka din

rathod- tumne mani thi, aaj k din meri baat...
They both clenged their fists...



Riya- sir...sir..sir..
They both loked at her..she got scared..
Riya- wo..i think hume ek baar chal k dekhna chahiye..
Shree- ye..ye ..yes sir..

Arjun- looked at riya..
Arjun- mai waha jaroor jaunga..koi mera saath de ya na de...


TBC



sorry guys fr late updt. Bt i wll update today the next part..
Pls do comment if u liked it.

I can't pm this till it is finished..so sorry guys..
Pls enjoy ariya..

Thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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They all managed to solve the case. During the latika was busy in drooling over arjun and riya was busy in glaring at latika...

Now the case is over so riya is at peace..finally she is gone..
Shree n chotu can see her face lighten up when she was arrested. They thought to tease her a bit bt one glare of her make them shut their mouth ...


In the evening:


'' roshni aaj sirf aur sirf tumhari wajah se hamare saath nahi hai''

''i wll never forgive you raute never''-

tears brimmed in her eyes as she heard those words from her chief's mouth...
Yeah she was riya..
Riya came there to pray her god to keep her arjun sir safe...yes is in love with him ... She realised this thing when arjun was in danger..


But what she heard here made her shiver...
She hide herself from them that she couldnot being seen by them..



For the first time she was seeing this side of rathod... She couldnot understand why rathod sir was saying this to arjun...n roshni..may be she was arjun sir's wife..
A lot of questions arised in her curious mind ...



One more thing surprised her is that arjun...she was right ..she would never be able to understand his pain...


Riya thought ' itna dard, kaise chupa lete hai sir aap, sahi kaha tha aapne , pyaar ka dard sirf wahi samajh sakta hai jiska pyaar adhura reh gaya ho.. Aur mai ye kabhi nahi samajh sakti... Aap ka saath nahi chod sakti par kaise doon aapka saath... Samajhna chahati hoon aapk dard ko...par kaise ..ye mauka aap mujh ko kabhi nahi denge sir...
Itna bada guilt k saath kaise jee rahe hai, iss ghutan k saath..kash ye ho pata aap ko kahi door le kar chupa loon is sab dard se par ussk liye aap k dil tak pahuchna jaruri hai...aur aap mujhe ye raah kabhi nahi dikhayenge...


She slumped down on the floor ..
But after some time she got up.
She composed her self and took downstair..
Arjun was also taking downstair but lost in his own thoughts..


Riya saw him n also the water on the floor...
She quickly runs to arjun . N before he palced his feet on that step she drags him aside...
But he fell upon her n she was down...she was avoiding eye contact with him..


Arjun looked at her face n he guessed that she was crying.


He got up n riya also..
Arjun was silent...


Riya- wo sorry sir...aap gir ne wale the... Toh..
He didn't let her complete..

Arjun- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho riya... Aur haan mujhe kisike sahare ki koi jarurat nahi hai.. Mujhe koi farq nahi padta
aakri baar keh raha hoon door raho mujh se..

Riya silently listening to him what was he saying...


Riya took 2 steps downstair...arjun was so shocked tht she didn't even bothered to react on his words...


But she turned n looked into his eyes and said
'' sahara nahi de rahi hoon sir, saath dena chahati hoon''
aap chaho ya na chaho''

aur aapki aakhiri bar sayad tab hoga jab mai apni aakhri saanse lungi...

Arjun- riyaaa!!


Riya- farq padta hai sir... Aap mano ya na mano...



She then left the place leaving behind a more confused arjun...
But why he don't know he felt peace of her heart after hearing those words from her mouth..
Yeah it feels really good.. But not that good..

In riya 's language its only 0.01% pain reduced from his heart...


Pre- murder case n the iccha dhari nagin with more ariya scene.
Over guys..
Now leave ur comments
i really need them..
Thank you for liking the previous parts..


Thank you.

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh...
Loved it a lot.
Waiting for the next part,Vampu.

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