OS- If riya would be there./upd pg-43.*imp note-pg47*sorry - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Hey nice part dear. Please continue soon:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
superb ... hahaha jealous riya 😈.. lost arjun 😒 gussa rathore 😡 confused shree 😕 excited chotu lol lovely combo...

nice... hahaha.. riya was relieved!!! 😆 choree lost a chance to tease her...hmmm poor riya phir wohi dialogue.. door raho mujhse.. so rathod saab didnt see her...
Edited by Queen.Bee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Really nice part dear please cont soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
bechari riya latikai ko mar dalti shayaad
Aut woh farak padne wala dialogue was so touching
amazing do continue writing more
Edited by Christeee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Woo vampu i read part 3
painter case it
was suppub..
u totaly change..
i realy like it..
trio gossip was god..
hehhee riya is riya..
grate part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
A BIG THANK TO YOU DEAR...
TUMNE APNA NAAM GALT RAKHA HAI DEAR...VAMPIRE NAHI TUMHE ANGEL RAKHNA CHAHIYE THA APNA NAAM...⭐️

ITS A BRILLIANT IDEA HAR CASE MAI RIYA KO ADD KARNA ...👏🤗
M V.HAPPY😊
JO DIL AISE 💔 AADHA AADHA HO CHUKA THA TUMNE USE FIR SE ❤️ PURA KAR DIYA...
ARIYA ROCKSSS...

ONE REQUSET CHAHE JO BHI HO PR PLZZZ DNT DTOP WRITTNG DIS UNTILL THE SERIAL ENDS...

EVRYDAY AND NIGHHT MA HEART WISH KI RIYA/SANA WAPAS AA JAYE BT AB AISA NAHI HO SAKTA,LEKIN TUMHARI IS STORY ME HAMESHA RIYA RAHEGI OR ARIYA BHI😊 PLZZ KEEP WRITTING..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
waooo part b to supub mast haiii...
riya also inside with arjun..
n arjun effected by her word..
case us solve..
arjun picked her in his arms..
very nice n cute update dr..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

OS- I won't leave u in any condition...




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They all are in the jungle...
Beside the body...
Rathod was there ...rathod n riya are discussing about the murder..
They local people told that the nahin have done this becoz the people killed her.. naag.


Riya was already scared for this naag n nagin n all that...


Arjun enters the crime scene...n again he was in-front of rathod..
They are facing each other... Rathod clenged his fist..
Riya came in between them ...
She could understand what was the condition of their heart..
So to control the situation she spoke up..

Wo ..wo .sir hume uss resort k malik se bhi mina hai na...
Toh..
Rathod- tum chalo mai aata hoon..


Riya turned to go n arjun was looking at her..
The words said by her last time still echoing in his ears...
N from that time he was ignoring those words...
He thought- mujhe kyun farq padta hai , why??


At night they are all in the jungle insearching of the so called naag n naagin..
Riya was so scared due to the jungle n night n that to the snakes also..


But chotu was also scared..
He also kept a bin in his bag tht it wil help to catch the naagin..


Riya was shivering in fear... Arjun looked at her... Is tht the girl who said those things to him the day before ... Unpredictable girl..




Arjun slowly walked up to her...by seeing him she took back steps as she reminded those wosds...



Suddenly they heard a sound and riya loose her balance n fell on the ground...she felt as if someone biten her..but shr thought it was the spines of any plant.. So she ignored...
Arjun runs to her to help her...


'' Aaahh'' screamed arjun ..
Riya - sir kya hua ..aap thick toh hai na..
Arjun- yes riya..bt mere pair pe..kuch..
Riya - comes to him..she bent down on her knees...
Took out her tourch...


She told arjun to sit down..

Arjun sat down.
Riya slides up his pant till his knees .. Flashes the torch..

Oh ! Shit! Sir its a snake bite...
Oh god ab hum kya karenge...it needs treatment ..sir ..

Arjun- riya ..calm down..
Riya- calm down..how ..ye dekhiye..

Riya took out her hanky n tied it around his leg..

Then she remembered something..
Riya- sir mai abhi aati hoon...

Riya goes n searchs her bag.. For hee good ness there was a single siringe of anti-venom.

She got up..her head seems spinning , bt she ignored...
She runs to arjun ..
Riya- sir ye anti-venom hai...

Arjun- tumhare paas kaise..
Riya- wo chodiye...
Then riya injected the anti-venom to his body...


By the time she felt dizzy, her head is heavy... N she get unconcious on his lap..
White substances coming out from her mouth..


Arjun was hell shocked by this ...
He got up ..picked up her in his arma n runs as possible as to reach the hospital..


Arjun reached there..
He started shouting at the wordboys..


Riya was admitted in hospital n now she was in OT..

Arjun was outside the ot.
He cursed himself..how he couldnot noticed her wound.
And the girl...
Mujhe bachane k liye... Khud..
Anti-venom hote hue bhi..


By the time rathod-shre-chotu arrived there..
Shree- kya hua ree ko..

Doctor comes out.
The four of them rushes to him..
Arjun- doctor , riya kaise hai ..
Shree- wo thick toh hai na?
Rathod- koi problem to nahi hai na doc..
Chotu- usse kuch hoga toh nahi na..


Doc- dekhiye..unki halat bahaut kharab hai.. Thodi aur der ho jati toh..sayad wo..


Arjun grabbed his collar..

'' wo thick hai- usse kuch nahi hona chahiye''

this behavior made rathod more angry..
Rathod- raute chodo unhe..

Aur waise bhi tumhe kya farq padta hai..

Shree-chotu- haan sir..


Arjun- i don't know!! Par mujhe farq padta hai...samjhe ya samjhaun...

By saying this he sprinted out of the corridoor..


Pre-
Next case n ariya also..


Tell me guys how is it..

Thank you..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
wuhuuu 🥳ye update super se bahut uper tha ... hope riya will b fine.. dont kill her like gorky...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
You are just rocking . Love u a lot for this one . Please don't stop this one ever . Thanks a lot for this os :-)

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