Mehrya SS:When will you confess Mr. Khadoos kumar? Last Part Upd.15/10

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi guys, I m Shristi ...have been a silent member on India-forums but have always read all the posts...To start with i m a huge fan of romantic stories especially when the main leads are smoking hot😉 and share sizzling chemistry...fan of Maaneet n Saruv and now Mehrya...so here I am with my OS on mehrya...do leave your comments ..Criticism welcomed...Will continue the story if you guys like it...Fingers crossed😳😳😳

Mehrya OS: When will you confess Mr. Khadoos Kumar??

Mehak had started working as one of the chefs at "The Grand Extension". A lot had happened by then.

Mehak had won Shaurya's cooking contest where Shaurya was finally impressed with Mehak's cooking skills. He had come to acknowledge the fact that Mehak was indeed talented; in fact she was better than him in cooking various dishes but he would never admit it to her.

Months had passed and both had developed a great professional respect for each other. Shaurya was slowly and steadily getting attracted to her but the proud one that he is would never admit it to her or himself about his feelings. However, this wasn't the case with Mehak. In all these months that she worked under him, she understood the various layers of "The Mr. Shaurya Khanna". She realized that though he never showed his soft side to others but he had one. She had forgiven him for all his faults long time ago when he apologized to her. She saw his honesty when he judged the contest on a fair basis.

She didn't realize herself when she fell for this tough, exterior but gem of a person who was once an egoistic fool. She knew that he loved her too but would never confess to her. He would steal glances at her when she cooked, looked for reasons to talk to her and what not. She would only smile and give him hints that she wanted more. No matter what, he would never understand and she was done with his ego. So, she decided to take matters in her own hand.

Mehak thought, "Agar tum ziddi adiyal ho toh main bhi kam nahi...you ll have to confess that you love me...aur yeh main tumse karva ke rahungi".

Next day:

Mehak had thought of lot of ideas for his confession but none were impressive. While she was sitting inher room thinking about it, Mohit entered in a huff and sat next to her. She had never seen her brother like this before. He did get angry but so frustrated ...naah...she knew something bad had happened.

Mehak: Kya hua Mohit? Is everything alright? Kis baat se itne chidde huye ho?

Mohit got up and started pacing around the room.

Mohit: Puccho mat Mehak...aaj main uski taange tod dunga...What does he think himself? Yaar kuch bhi karega n sab impress ho jaate hai...bewakoof hai pura..N uske liye kyun koi kuch kare? Hai kaun who...

Mehak couldn't understand Mohit at all...he wasn't making sense to her...

Mehak: Tu pehle shaant ho ja and tell me what happened...n u went to meet Riya...You were so happy about it...uska kya hua...

Mohit: Don't ask Mehak...yeh tum ladkiyan kya chahti ho kabhi pata nahi chalta...woh Riya...I thought aaj use keh dunga that I love her, full on plan kiya...but nahi...madam Aman ke saath baithkar zor-zor se has rahi thi...

Mehak: Ha toh tujhe kya hua...she was only talking to him...

Mohit screamed: ONLY TALKING TO HIM...Are you crazy...woh AMAN se baat kar rahi thi...arre everyone knows he is flirt...bas ladkiyon k saamne style maarta hai...des guys like Aman are such an ***...AAAH

Mehak: Oye, bas kar itna gussa...n gaali kyun de raha hai...

Mohit: Galli nahi do toh kya karoo, there are so many like him in this world...ek woh tumhara Shaurya dariyal Khanna...

Mehak liked it when Mohit said "tumhara Shaurya Khanna". Mehak became defensive: Woh aisa nahi hai...

Mohit: Choddo uska humme kya karna...but I hate that Aman...

Mehak teased Mohit: Are you jealous?

Mohit: Of course I m...ab kya likh k do...that I didn't like her talking to him...I have to do something to get her attention...taaki who mujhe notice kare.

Mohit said so and left the room but listening to Mohit's ramblings she realized one thing that Shaurya se pyaar ka izhaar karvaana hai toh Khadoos Kumar ko jealous karana hoga...

So mission "Jealousy starts"...

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To be continued...😉

Part 2 : Pg 3

Part 3 : Pg 5

Part 4 : Pg 8

Part 5 : Pg 12

Part 6 : Pg 13

Part 7 A : Pg 15

Part 7 B : Pg 18

Teaser for Part 8 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143782695

Part 8A: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143974516

Note : Pg 53

Part 8B: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/144211830

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/144405251

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Euphoria_V thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Damn it's superb
But yaar do update asap
Welcome to the forum dear
Amazing os
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much...it means alot...yes sure i ll update soon...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi there! Loved it.. The story looks real fun..waiting to see jealous Shaurya and playful Mehak..
Continue soon.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it. I am a sucker for these jealousy tracks on Indian shows so I love the fact that Mehak is going to make Shaurya jealous to get him to confess his feelings. Please do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the story dearc

Looking forwardv for more

Please continue soon

Wonderful os
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2 on the way...thank you for ur beautiful comments...they r really very encouraging!!!!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Shrishti hi ... Oh I just loved the concept.. Pyar ka izhaar karvaana hai tou jealous feel karvao ... Wow superb idea... Now it will be a treat to see a Jealous Shaurya Khanna... Jaldi update Karna ... Can't wait... Thanks for the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow i just love it
was so lovely and beautifully

i just requested to you update soon ...
aur thora romance zaroor dalna pls

i will wait and send on pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks a ton for all those beautiful comments . . . . Part 2 coming up tomorrow for sure wid our handsome Khadoos kumar kumar ki entry😉😉

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