Mehrya SS:When will you confess Mr. Khadoos kumar? Last Part Upd.15/10 - Page 2

Hey..shristi...!

Originally posted by: Waida1234

Hey..shristi...!

Lovely start...! Although...I didn't understand the hindi dialogues quite fully...I love the concept of this jealousy track...! Shall love to know with whom and what strategies Mehek will make use of...to make Shaurya jealous and confess his attraction/love for her...! 😊

I never really thought as far as to who Mehek would use to make Shaurya jealous but make it someone hot shristi.lol I honestly would love to see a jealous Shaurya on the show. I would love if the guy was equally handsome and nice and he was flirty with Mehak. Could you imagine Shaurya's reaction? His head would blow.

Hi Shristi great beginning here. As an English speaking fan I sometimes have difficulty following some of the stories on here, but yours must have had the perfect mix as it was easier for me to follow😊. That being said it was awesome. I would love to see a full blown jealousy track and look forward to seeing what you come up with. Can't wait to read the next update😊

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Hi Shristi great beginning here. As an English speaking fan I sometimes have difficulty following some of the stories on here, but yours must have had the perfect mix as it was easier for me to follow😊. That being said it was awesome. I would love to see a full blown jealousy track and look forward to seeing what you come up with. Can't wait to read the next update😊

Here is the second part of the OS...a little long update and Shaurya's entry too...Please leave your comments...like I said before, criticism welcomed...Hope you guys like it😉

Part 2:

Mehak woke up early in the morning and started searching her cupboard for something to wear that will make her Khadoos Kumar notice her...haaye she wanted to see his reaction...but she didn't have anything great to wear.

Mehak: Suit toh roz hi pehenti hoon..agar who hi pehnungi toh notice kya karega...should I borrow some short dress from Nehal...naah...usmein toh main jaa bhi na paao...soch Mehak kuch toh soch...

She started searching again...but kuch nahi...She realized that she hadn't shopped for anything in a long time..Ever since she started working at the Hotel, there was hardly any time left for her. Half of the day she worked at the hotel and the other half she spent on thinking about him...what to do?

Kaanta chachi had woken up to take milk from the milkman when she saw Mehak's room's light on. A worried soul that she is she rushed to her room.

Kaanta chachi: Mehak ...what is it? Is everything alright? Why are you up so early?

Mehak was lost in her thoughts when Kaanta chachi walked in. She was startled when she heard her.

Mehak :...ahh...nahi kuch nahi...chachi...kuch bhi nahi..bas yuh hi...ab inhe kaise batao?

Chachi looked at her and was surprised.

Kaanta chachi asked: Sure koi baat nahi?

Mehak: Yes chachi aap chinta mat karo...I m absolutely fine..bas aise hi neend khul gayi.

After she was convinced that Mehak was fine, she left the room. While leaving the room, she remembered to tell Mehak about Sarla bua's daughter's engagement.

Kaanta chachi: Arre Mehak main toh tujhe batana bhul hi gayi...Agle Sunday ko Nisha ki engagement hai..beta tum Saree pehen na..the new one jo humne pichle mahine khareedi thi..Saree main tu bahut pyaari lagti hai...I have kept it in ur cupboard press karke..

Bingo...Mehak couldn't believe it...her Kaanta chachi had given her the best idea...maine pehle kyun nahi socha...

Mehak thought: Haaye Maata Rani thank you so much...aaj aapne itna brilliant idea Kaanta chachi se mujhe dilwa diya...Mehak's joy knew no bounds..

Mehak : Thank you chachi...love u..love uuu

Chachi: itni choti si baat k liye itna pyaar...

Mehak hugged her chachi and said: Bas aise hi..u are the best!!!!!in fact bestest se bhi best..

Mehak started looking for a saree in her cupboard. She had few in her wardrobe which she rarely wore..only for some special occasions like weddings or engagement..Earlier, she would get conscious wearing them but ever since she had participated in Shaurya's cooking contest, her confidence level had boosted up. At times, the production house would style them in various outfits for their episodes and she had worn sarees twice in those episodes. She had realized then that size doesn't matter if you carry yourself in your attire.

So saree it is...She wore a silk pink saree with subtle makeup..not too loud not too garish...

Mehak thought n smiled to herself: Shaurya ko jealous karana hai...darana nahi...

She continued giving final touches to her makeup and gave herself a last check in the mirror and God, she was looking gorgeous as ever...

Mehak prayed: Maata Rani.. ..ab plan ko anjaam dena hai...To make him feel jealous, I have to flirt with a guy. How about Karan? Yeah that will be very easy...waise bhi he has a reputation at the hotel...Most of the girls at the hotel think of him as a charmer.

But she was worried about one thing and that was flirting with some guy.

"Flirting" would definitely not come easy to her...She hadn't done it ever and she knew that this wasn't her cup of tea...She wasn't someone like Nehal who was smart and outgoing..She had seen how her younger sister commanded attention from the guys in her Chandni Chowk. But if she had to make him jealous, she had to take matters in her hand. If she left everything to Maata Rani and her Khadoos Kumar, she would forever remain single and unmarried and she couldn't take that chance.

Mehak : No Mehak you cant let this happen...Have you forgotten what all he did to tarnish your reputation. He had done all of that on his own.

That was all Mehak's past now and she had long forgotten about those horrid memories. In fact, Shaurya's changed attitude had helped her forget all dat. So if she had to come out of her comfort zone and do something, she would indeed do it.

When she came for breakfast, everyone were seated at the dining table.

Mehak : Good morning ...

PD, Nehal n Mohit looked at her...Dadaji was shocked seeing her in saree...He was still having issues with her. He wouldn't acknowledge but she looked a mirror image of her mother. He smiled thinking about it and then hid it fearing that someone would notice it.

PD: Arre bacche yeh kya...aaj kuch special hai kya? Aaj saree main.

Mehak lied : Nahi PD bas aise hi...sochha aaj pehen loo..kuch aur tha nahi..

Mohit: Haaye Mehak tu toh aaj kamaal lag rahi hai by god...Waah

The other chachi (sorry I don't know her name): Mehak...haaye meri bacchi toh bahut sundar lag rahi hai...She came forward and put a black tikka behind her ears...nazar na lage meri bacchi ko.

Mehak: Thank you chachi.

Kaanta chachi: Meri bacchi humesha khush rahe...

Mehak: Thank you chachi...Bye ...I m leaving warna main late ho jaaungi.

Mehak left for her work on her scooty. Throughout her journey, she was only thinking about what would be Shaurya's reaction.

Mehak thought: Kya kahega...Acchi dikh rahi ho Mehak...naah...You r looking beautiful...Tumse accha koi nahi...I love you...I m going gaga seeing u in this saree...and so on and on...

Finally, she reached the hotel and parked her scooty. With a smile, she entered the hotel dying to only see his face.

The first person she met was Rajeev Sir and he was pleasantly surprised seeing her in saree.

Rajeev: Morning Mehak...kya baat hai...u r looking beautiful...koi khaas baat hai aaj?

Mehak: Morning Rajeev Sir, Thank you. Nahi bas aise hi...koi special baat nahi

Rajeev Sir: Anyways, acchi lag rahi ho...see you later.

On the way, she met Kunal and Vinay, her co-chefs. All three shared a great connect with each other ever since they started working together at the hotel. They knew each other's cooking strengths and helped each others to overcome their weaknesses.

Kunal: Oh ho...Mehak... (whistling playfully) tum toh aaj different lag rahi ho...but bahut beautiful lag rahi ho...

Vinay: Yes Mehak you r looking gorgeous...I mean Ms India, nahi Ms. Earth, no no Ms World...nahi nahi Ms. Universe lag rahi ho...

Mehak: Ha bas bas...Itni bhi tareef mat karo...It doesn't suit you... Mehak said smilingly.

Vinay: No yaar Mehak I seriously mean it...you r looking gorgeous...aaj toh har koi tumpe fida ho jaayega...

Mehak: Ya ya right...now bye...I gotta go...have to start work. Bye.

Mehak turned and went inside the hotel. Just then Shaurya's car had entered the hotel premises. They both didn't see each other.

It was a normal working day for Shaurya. He got down from his car and was checking his mails on his phone when he heard Kunal and Vinay talking to each other.

Kunal: What is with Mehak today? No doubt she was looking pretty in the saree but yaar isse ho kya gaya hai...

Vinay: Even I have been noticing her since few days, akele smile karti rehti hai, kuch sochti rehti hai, sings for no reason...n mind you romantic songs...something is fishy...

Shaurya stopped in his tracks... pretty, smile, romantic songs' these words hit him hard.

Shaurya thought: Mehak aaj saree main...but why...She has never worn saree here at the hotel n now suddenly...He was still thinking when Vinay screamed.

Kunal: What is wrong with you? Chilla kyun raha hai...

Vinay: Don't you know when girls behave like that you moron?

Even Shaurya started thinking now... When do girls do that? Is Mehak ill? Kunal voiced exactly what Shaurya was thinking.

Kunal: Is Mehak not well?

Vinay: No u idiot...She is in love...cant u see dat...This is how girls behave when they r in love with someone...n I think she likes someone...may b she is going today to meet him...

Shaurya couldn't take it anymore...Mehak in love with someone and she is going to meet him...Everything was blank in front of him...How did this happen? This couldn't be...his Mehak in love...'His Mehak'...when did she become his? What was wrong with him?

He started walking in anger thinking about the conversation that those two fools were having. At times, he never understood the camaraderie that these two shared with Mehak but he knew that these two adored Mehak as their own sister...As their sister' was fine with him...Jealous Shaurya on the way...

He went straight to his cabin and threw his waist coat. Shaurya started pacing his room.

Shaurya: How is it possible? I mean I didn't know that she had someone in her life...I thought I was the only one ...what was he thinking? Why m I thinking about myself? If she has a boyfriend, so what?

Just then Shaurya's inner self thought that it was time for him to come out and give a piece of mind to my other dumb half.

Shaurya's inner self: Relax Shaurya... you r right... what if she has a boyfriend? I mean how does it matter to u?

Shaurya: Of course it matters to me...I get angry when I see any guy being too friendly with her...

Shaurya's inner self :Haan toh wohi main keh raha hoon...U remember you had got so pissed off when she got along so well with Kunal and Vinay...u used to call them devils...

Shaurya: Haan toh I hated it...The day when I saw Mehak tying raakhi to those two idiots thts when I cooled down and realized that I had nothing to worry about.

Shaurya's inner self: Are you not realizing anything Shaurya?

Shaurya: Of course, I realize...

Shaurya's inner self: N what is dat?

Shaurya: That some shit, dumb **** guy is in love with Mehak and I am gonna kill him...

Shaurya's inner self: N why would you kill him?

Shaurya: Coz HE IS NOT GOOD FOR HER...N I HATE HIM

Shaurya's inner self understood that there was no point in making his other half realize his true feelings for Mehak...he ll have to figure them out on his own... Mehak was right about him all along...Khadoos Kumar had no brains...He left Shaurya on his own.

To be continued...😉😳😃

Absolutely awesome J Shaurya was funny in his own way .. Mazaa aa Gaya ''

Too good I loved it so much.

I loved part 2...keep writing... Want to know ab jealous Shaurya kya karega? 😉

Thank you guys for your lovely comments...I m writing the third part and might write the fourth too...coz weekend is the only time when i can indulge in my FF ramblings...