Mehrya SS:When will you confess Mr. Khadoos kumar? Last Part Upd.15/10 - Page 3

Ok ok...this is something i am throughly enjoying to the core...

i love this please continue soon.

wowww love it

kaash sach me serial pe hesa kuch ho ...

yaar keep continue and update soon...

Hahahaha... Jala bhuna Karela... Loved it ... Please continue soon ... Can't wait ... Thanks

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

Ok ok...this is something i am throughly enjoying to the core...

Its damn awesome...

I was smiling...smiling and smiling...especially while reading the second part.

Jealousy!! Even i was thinking about writing a piece on this...but i guess u r doing a great job...nd kahin meri story tumhari stry ke saamne pheke na pad jaaye...

Loved the way of writing...so all the credit goes to Mohit.. for indirectly giving an awesome idea to Mehek to woo her lover to confess his feelings for her.

So both love each other...nd Mr.Dumb Shaurya Khanna is not ready to accept it...

Jab baat kisi aur tak pohonchi...tab batti jal gaya..

He is already feeling jealous...aur agar kisi ko Mehek ke saath dekha na...tho jealousy at its peak...aur pata nahi uss bande ki saath kya hoga...

Well superbly written...shaurya fighting with his innerself...

Fantastic one...

Continue sooon.

Love Sharmi

Shristi i hope you are not thinking of giving up. I have noticed that a lot of writers on IF get discouraged by a lack of likes and comments, so i hope that is not where your mind is. Trust me the readers will come especially with such a good story as this, plus there are a lot of silent readers who will follow a story but never respond...so please dont let a lack of response deter you. Update as soon as time allows...

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Shristi i hope you are not thinking of giving up. I have noticed that a lot of writers on IF get discouraged by a lack of likes and comments, so i hope that is not where your mind is. Trust me the readers will come especially with such a good story as this, plus there are a lot of silent readers who will follow a story but never respond...so please dont let a lack of response deter you. Update as soon as time allows...

And if I totally misunderstood what you meant...ah yes sorry about that, and again please just update... I and others I am sure are anxious to see what happens next😊

Kelly

Cute...

Nice update. I am loving jealous Shaurya and he hasn't even seen Mehak interacting with a guy yet. Just the thought of her with another guy is driving him crazy. I wish to see the same thing on the show. I would love to see Shaurya going crazy thinking Mehak likes some other guy both in your OS and on the show. Waiting for the next part.