Journey of Abhira (FF) Author's Note (13th Jun) - Page 7

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I like to see this Abhimanyu sufferingđŸ€Ș

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It’s sweet how Abhi is dependent on her. But I hope that it’s just not this that he wants to give his relationship a chance

I love stubborn Akshu


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I am totally loving it đŸ˜đŸ˜đŸ„°đŸ˜ can't wait for abi to realise his feelings 😍😍😍

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Total loved it ............such a cute update...............loved it to core............I am not writer.....so cannot express well but superb............We want more and more of this.........request you to please update as soon as possible

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I love how Abhi is missing Akshara.

I just hope that this separation brings them closer

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People say things are valued when you don't have them

It's true in their case specially Abhi

He is realising how dependent he is on Akshara

Superb update Shay❀

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When can we get the next update...........can we expect tomorrow if not today..........eagerly waiting for next update

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I think Akshara was in love with him even before marriage or maybe during rituals of marriage she fall in love and by seeing his indifferent behaviour she stayed away

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Originally posted by: surbharati

Total loved it ............such a cute update...............loved it to core............I am not writer.....so cannot express well but superb............We want more and more of this.........request you to please update as soon as possible


thankyou so much,,,

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Chapter 7


Next morning Akshara wakes up and sees Abhimanyu sitting on her bed.

Akshara: you? What are you doing here early morning?

Abhimanyu: why, can't I come here to meet my wife?

Akshara: what did you say? You have come to meet me?

Abhimanyu: actually I have come to take you back.

Akshara: I don't believe that I became this important for you in a single day.

Suddenly water falls on her face forcefully and she wakes up only to see Aarohi in front of her and realizes it was just a dream.

Aarohi: di its 11 o clock already and you are still sleeping. Dreaming about jiju.

Akshara(still sleepy): how do you know? Sorry I didn't mean that.

Aarohi: its ok di. You were dreaming about your husband only not someone else's.


Birla House

Nimisha: maa bhaiya seems to be so lost. He didn't have coffee today also and left like that to office. I think you should bring Akshara di back now.

Manjari: nimi, she is his wife, he will see what he has to do. I did whatever I though twas right for Akshara. Rest is their choice.

Meanwhile Abhimanyu is in a restaurant in a meeting. Once he finishes it he leaves the restaurant. He sees Akshara on the other side of road walking alone talking on phone. He crosses the road and sees a group of boys staring her and passing comments. This angers him so much and one of the boys passing a flying kiss to her. Bas that was it.

Abhimanyu holds his collar slaps him so hard and shouts at him "how dare you"and a punch on the face. Grabs the second boy this is what your parents have taught you. He beats all of them and they run away. Turns to Akshara and says are you fine?

Akshara(turning towards him): thank you so much bhaiya.

Abhimanyu is shocked and sees it’s not Akshara but some other girl.

Abhimanyu: it's ok. Take care.

Abhimanyu starts thinking was he just imagining her? He was not understanding what was wrong with him. He concludes ye sab Nimi ki baaton ka asar hai. He thinks is Akshara fine. He decides to call her. As he takes out his phone it starts ringing. It's Akshara's father.

Abhimanyu: hello, papa how are you?

Papa: haan damadji I am fine. How are you?

Abhimanyu: I am also fine. How many times I have asked you to call me beta?

Papa: acha beta theek hai. I was thinking if you are not busy can you come over for dinner. Post marriage you never did.

Abhimanyu: ok papa I will come.


Papa:see Akshara did I not tell you that Abhimanyu will come. You only were saying that he will deny.

Abhimanyu hears this as the phone is still connected and thinks why would she think I would say no to her father. Whatever it is today I will talk to her and disconnects the call

Akshara is sitting on her bed thinking. She calls somebody.

Akshara: yaar what should I do now. He is coming over for dinner.

Caller:you are worried as if he isn't your husband but some guy who is coming to see you.

Akshara: shut up. Do you think it's some kind of joke?

Caller: ok relax. Tell me what’s the problem?

Akshara: I don’t want to face him. You know na we had a fight post our anniversary.

Caller: yes but you weren't wrong.

Akshara: I know it was Abhimanyu’s mistake but I was too rude.

Caller: awww what did you say just now.

Akshara: what????

Caller: Abhimanyu, it sounds so cool from your mouth.When was the last time you have called him by his name? I am feeling so good,how good will he feel.

Akshara: (thinks I actually don't call him by name strange). Leave all this. I don’t want to talk to him right now. You know na I am a calm person but when I am angry I completely loose it and I gave him a glimpse on anniversary. But not now, then I myself don't feel good.

Caller: ok come to my place.

Akshara: seriously I love you. Pooja you are the best.

Akshara tells her father that Pooja called her and she is going to her place.

Papa:but Akshara, Abhimanyu is coming. If you are not here how will he feel?

Akshara: papa he is coming to meet you and you know I can never say no to Pooja. And she leaves.


In evening Abhimanyu comes for dinner. He takes blessings from his in laws and sits on the sofa. He started looking around but couldn't see her.

Aarohi: di is not here.

Abhimanyu(worried): why, I mean where is she? It’s too late.

Aarohi: dont worry. She has gone to meet Pooja di.

Papa:yes, Akshara was here only but then Pooja called her and she left. When it comes to Pooja she doesn't see anything.

Aarohi: papa they are childhood friends.

Abhimanyu: Aarohi how was she feeling? Is she better?

Aarohi: yes jiju she is perfectly fine.

Papa:come let’s have dinner.

Abhimanyu:ok

Abhimanyu leaves from their post dinner. In his room he thinks why is he feeling bad if she was not there. Why did he feel the need to see her?

His Conscience (HC): because you are missing her.

Abhimanyu turns and comes face to face with his conscience.

Abhimanyu: what nonsense is this? Why would I miss her now when I never have before?

HC: because she has never left you alone like this before, so how would you miss her. You took her for granted Abhimanyu Birla. And it vanishes.

Abhimanyu: no I haven't taken her for granted, I care for her. Are you listening?

And with this thought he sleeps.

End Of Day 2 Away From Each Other

Love Shay,

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Chapter 8

Edited by shaylini - 3 years ago

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