Journey of Abhira (FF) Author's Note (13th Jun) - Page 16

Wowoooooowww superb beautifully written ❤️❤️❤️

I cant believe Akshara is willing to forgive Kalyani and is asking Abhi to do the same... its okay to be good and forgiving... but Kalyani doesnt deserve this compassion... she tried to make Akshara infertile and it almost killed her in the process... I hope Abhi teaches Kalayni a lesson without letting anyone else know..... also I hope to see more romantic time with Abhi and Akshu... that would really drive Kalyani up the wall and when Akshu finally becomes pregnant... that would be the icing on the cake....Please update soon...

Originally posted by: chremma

How could akshu be so forgiving man...that woman literaly tried to make her infertile..and she is expecting her husband to forgive her..like what is wromg with her...she forgive ahhi bcz he was her husband and also bcz he made efforts to win her back..but this kalynai lady, she is a pest who needs to be eradicated

i know doesn't seem right but this is our Akshu and for her family before everything. She hasn't forgiven but for Nimisha she has kept quite.

Originally posted by: surbharati

Yes did not understand, how Akshara can be so forgiving and others who know .........how can they be so quiet...........or is it they are still not able to come that Kalyani can do this....................Please update soon and hope all good happens soon...........

nobody knows the truth except Abhira.

Originally posted by: Zenab78

She forgave her but she shouldn't do this... It might have ruined her whole life

I hope Abhimanyu deals with it in his own way without letting anyone know about it. He can't risk her life.

Superb update... Continue soon❤

Abhi will deal with it later but for now he has given it up for Nimisha as abhi loves his brother too

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

I cant believe Akshara is willing to forgive Kalyani and is asking Abhi to do the same... its okay to be good and forgiving... but Kalyani doesnt deserve this compassion... she tried to make Akshara infertile and it almost killed her in the process... I hope Abhi teaches Kalayni a lesson without letting anyone else know..... also I hope to see more romantic time with Abhi and Akshu... that would really drive Kalyani up the wall and when Akshu finally becomes pregnant... that would be the icing on the cake....Please update soon...

This compassion isn't for Kalyani its for her family, precisely for Nimisha as she is pregnant. Abhi will loose his cool thats for sure🤣...

@bold: love your imgination❤️

Loved the update! Can’t wait for Abhimanyu to throw Kalyani out of the Birla mansion😳

Chapter 16

Next morning Akshara wakes up and sees Abhimanyu is not in the bed. She thinks he might be in the washroom but then sees that it’s early for his office. He then comes with the breakfast.

Abhimanyu: you are awake? Now go freshen up.

Akshara: what’s the matter? You are up so early.

Abhimanyu: now that I am your personal chef so I wanted everything to be perfect. Ok go now else I will be late for office.

Akshara comes and sits on the bed.

Abhimanyu: here, take your coffee

Akshara: where is yours? Wait i will get it for you.

Abhimanyu: stop. I will have the same.

Akshara: what?

Abhimanyu: yes because last time I realized the coffee that you drank first tasted better and winks

Akshara: blushes, kya aap bhi.

Abhimanyu: seriously... ok now have your breakfast, then you have to take medicine as well.

They both have breakfast. Abhimanyu goes to get ready and Akshara gives him his clothes. Now Akshara is making him wear the tie.

Abhimanyu: Akshara please take care of yourself. Take your medicine on time and do not go in her vicinity. You know who i am talking about.

Akshara: please Abhimanyu, we already decided that we will let go off this.

Abhimanyu: no you decided I didn't. It might be easy for you but sorry i can never forgive her. The moment I think what could have happened with you I am terrified.

Akshara(hugshim): shhh relax. Dont spoil your mood early morning.

Abhimanyu: bye. Tk care. And kisses her forehead.

Akshara: bye and She follows him.

Abhimanyu: where are you going?

Akshara: downstairs. Now i can't stay in the room the entire day.

Abhimanyu: you saw yesterday how much you were panting when you climbed the stairs. I will ask everyone to sit here with you.

Akshara: please. I feel as if I am locked up in a cell.

Abhimanyu: no means no.

Akshara: Abhimanyu please its just a matter of one staircase I can manage and she turns away from him.

Abhimanyu: ok fine. There is no need to make that puppy face. Come.

Akshara(excited): really and hugs him and kisses on his cheek. (She bites her tongue).Sorry wo excitement main hogaya.

Abhimanyu: btw I like this excitement and pulls her cheek.

She starts moving out of the room but he stops her.

Akshara: now what. Just now you said i can go.

Abhimanyu: so when did I say you can't go but not on your own.

Akshara: what do....

Before she could complete Abhimanyu scoops her of the floor and carries her down the stairs

Akshara: what are you doing? Somebody will see us and hides her face in his chest.

Anisha: OMG mom am i dreaming. Look there.

Manjari: hyyy kitne pyaare lag rahe hain dono. Kisi ki nazar na lage.

Anisha(takes her phone): bhaiya bhAbhi and they both look at her and she clicks a picture. Perfect.

Kalyani is fuming with anger seeing all this and says to herself enough of her drama now.

Abhimanyu(placing Akshara on sofa): Anisha take care of your Bahbhi and make sure she doesn't go upstairs. Yesterday also when she came upstairs she was out of breath. And give me a call if you need anything. Ok bye I will leave

Manjari: I think I should head Haridwar now. Now all my children are happy. I was worried about Akshara but now my Abhimanyu is a changed man.

Nimi: yes mom you are right. Bhaiya has changed totally as if he is an altogether different personality.

Anisha: Akshara bhAbhi do you really think bhai has changed.

Akshara: no, not at all. He is the same Abhimanyu just that now he expresses himself more.

Kalyani storms off to her room fuming in anger.

Kalyani: before things get perfectly normal between these two, i will have to do something. Else nimisha and her kids will be left out like that. Nimisha doesn't understand a thing, she can't see anything beyond this Akshara. I think its time to call that person. She takes her phone to call somebody but...

Nimisha: mummy come have your lunch.

Kalyani: yes beta i am coming

Neil:BTW bhabhi tell me one thing. How come bhai is so calm after everything?

Akshara: now that i am fine what was the need to create an unnecessary ruckus.

Kalyani is sweating and Nimisha notices this.

Anisha(onphone): yes bhai we are having lunch. Bhabhi,bhai is asking where is your phone.

Akshara: I guess its upstairs in my room.

Anisha: bhai its in her room

Abhimanyu: ok Anisha you know which medicine you have to give her.

Anisha: yes bhai i know everything.

Abhimanyu: ok. Now pass the phone to Akshara.

Anisha: now you can't even stay without talking to her for few hours and laughs giving the phone to Akshara.

Akshara: haan hello.

Abhimanyu: feeling better. Have your medicine without any tantrums.

Akshara: ok. Bye

Abhimanyu: bye.

Post lunch Akshara sleeps in Manjari's room. Nimisha goes to Kalyani to talk to her.

Nimi: mummy tell me honestly you had no role in whatever happened with Di.

Kalyani: are you out of your mind? I agree I dont like Akshara but that doesn't mean i will stoop so low.

Nimisha: sorry i didnt mean that. And leaves.

Anisha: Akshara bhAbhi your phone is ringing since quite sometime.

Akshara: who is it?

Anisha: dont know. Its some number.

Akshara: hello

Caller: hello Mrs. Birla how are you? Myself Mrs.Oberoi (Mrs.O)

Akshara: I am fine how are you?

Mrs.O: i guess you didn’t recognize me. But my husband and your husband are business partners.

Akshara: ohhh. Ok. Is everything fine? You called so suddenly.

Mrs.O: actually we have a small party at our house in the evening. You both have to come and please don't say no.

Akshara: thats so nice of you. We will come definitely. Bye.

Mrs.O: bye

Akshara calls Abhimanyu.

Akshara: hello

Abhimanyu: what happened? All ok?

Akshara:will you let me speak. Mrs.Oberoi was calling. They have organized a party and invited both of us.

Abhimanyu: you said no to her? Right?

Akshara: no. Why would i do that? She invited us with so much love. I said we will come.

Abhimanyu: but you are still recovering.

Akshara: I am much better now Abhimanyu and I am taking my medicine also. Now I can't be home always.

Abhimanyu: fine do whatever you want to do. Who am I? Nobody listens to me and puts the phone down.

Mr.Oberoi calls Abhimanyu.

Mr.O: Mr.Birla you would have received the invitation. I will be waiting please do come.

Without hearing Abhimanyu's reply he puts the phone down. Abhimanyu thinks he shouted too much at Akshara and thinks he will now have to pacify her. He calls his assistant.

Abhimanyu: are there any documents pending that need my signatures.

Assistant:no sir, we are done for the day.

Abhimanyu: ok then I am leaving.

He arrives home and goes straight to his room and then comes back to look for Akshara. He spots her in the kitchen alone. He holds her hand and takes her along to the room.

Akshara: what are you doing?

Abhimanyu: I am sorry. I know I scolded you too much on the phone. You know I don't like it when you are in pain. But I understand you haven't been anywhere since quite some time. So i am sorry.

Akshara: it's ok you don't need to explain so much. I understand your point of view as well. What's this on the bed.

Abhimanyu :now we are attending a party together for the first time, so I thought I should get you something nice.

Akshara: really.

Abhimanyu: yes. Now get ready. I will freshen up.

Akshara takes out the saree and she likes it. It a navy blue shimmery saree. She first puts his clothes on the bed and then gets ready herself. She struggles with the blouse so she calls Anisha.

Akshara: hello Anisha please come here but fast.

Anisha: wow Bhabhi. This is such a beautiful saree. I haven't seen this before.

Akshara: your brother got it just now for the party.

Anisha: ok but why did you call me.

Akshara: please help me with this blouse.

Anisha: why did you call me? You should have asked bhai and winks.

Akshara: he is in the washroom and we are already late.

Anisha: ok fine. Turn around.

Just then Abhimanyu comes out of the washroom in a trouser and vest. He looks at Akshara and is rooted to his spot. Anisha hears the door opening.

Anisha: ok now bhai is here, he will help you. I have some work with Nimi bhabhi. And runs out of the room.

Akshara: Anisha listen to me but she's gone.

When Akshara shouts for Anisha Abhimanyu comes back to his senses and heads to bolt the door. Akshara has her back towards the cupboard.

Abhimanyu(putting the towel on bed): may I. If only you are comfortable.

Akshara nods and Abhimanyu turns her around. He puts her hair to one side but his hands are trembling and she has her eyes closed. Water is dripping from his wet hair and as he moves closer to her one water droplet falls on her back and she stiffens. He with a trembling thumb wipes that droplet and she shivers under his touch. He looks at her through the mirror. In the meantime he has tied one knot. He starts to tie the second knot and water is continuously dripping from his hair on to her back and she is shivering under his touch. Unable to control, Abhimanyu while tying the second knot bends forward and kisses her clean of all the water droplets and in the meantime he is done with all the 4 knots. Akshara puts her head back on his chest while he proceeds further to kiss her neck. Abhimanyu turns her around and pushes her hair backwards and kisses her on the other side of neck.

Anisha(knocking on the door): bhaiya your phone is ringing since quite sometime.

Akshara(holds his shoulder): Abhimanyu, Anisha is here.

Abhimanyu(ruffling his hair goes to open the door): what is it? Why are you shouting?

Anisha: you aren't ready yet. Are you not going to the party? Oooopss did I disturb you?

Akshara blushes.

Abhimanyu: naughty... Leave now.

Abhimanyu stands behind Akshara.

Abhimanyu: you are looking so beautiful.

Akshara turns towards him and hugs him tight. He gets ready now while Akshara is tying her hair in a bun.

Abhimanyu: Are you done?

Akshara: yes and he holds her hand.

They reach the party and all of Abhimanyu's business partners are present and they congratulate him for his wedding. On the other hand Mrs. O introduces Akshara to other ladies in the party. Though Abhimanyu is talking to people his eyes never leave Akshara. He goes to the counter to have a drink. Adjacent to him two boys are talking.

Boy1: man look at that girl she is so hot.

Boy2: which one?

Boy1: Arre the one in blue saree.

Abhimanyu is alerted, he looks in their direction and sees they are looking at Akshara.

Boy2: look at her figure she is so adorable. Look at her back man.

Boy1: she is driving me crazy. I will just now ask her for a dance.

That was it Abhimanyu stood up but he didn't want to spoil the party so he headed to Akshara.

Abhimanyu: Mrs. Oberoi can I take my wife for sometime.

Mrs.O: sure she is all yours and winks at him.

Akshara:w hat happened?

Abhimanyu puts his hand on her waist and with the other hand opens her hair which falls on her back covering it completely

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Akshara: why did you do this? It had taken me so much time to tie it up

Abhimanyu: you look more beautiful like this.

Akshara notices that the 2 boys are staring her and thinks if she will tell Abhimanyu,he will kill them.

Abhimanyu: what happened? You seem uncomfortable.

Akshara: no I am fine. I will just come.

Abhimanyu: its been 10 minutes since she is gone. Why isn't she back yet. He heads to the washroom.

Akshara: what are you doing here?

Abhimanyu: I was waiting for you and you weren't coming, I was frightened. And hugs her tight. I think we should leave now its quite late.

Akshara: ok. Lets inform Mrs.Oberoi.

In the car

Abhimanyu: why were so uncomfortable in the party.

Akshara: no not at all.

Abhimanyu: did someone say something to you at the party?

Akshara: no actually some boys were staring at me, so that's why.

Abhimanyu: why didn't you tell me?

Akshara: I didn't want the party and your mood to be spoiled. Now please do not argue with me over this.

They reach home. All are sleeping. They too go to their room and sleep.

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Kalyani is so cheap... I hope Abhimanyu is keeping an eye on her moves

Nice update Shay

Romantic ❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰i am sooooo loving it tooooo good plz continue soon