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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good Lord!!! How did I miss this reading this piece...AD!!👏👏👏
One of the best that I have read on this forum...it was all about Aru's diary till now...and u made this interesting one about a page from Mukhi's diary and I just loved the fact that you made Mishri the reader...Woman...I am absolutely in love with this thought. Although, I would not want painful sacrifices and separations between Ar-Mu but if it has to happen...I somehow want this... EXACTLY this in one of the episodes...we all have been waiting for a monologue into Mukhi's thought process...so your version of it would be such a wonderful one.
However, I am also enjoying this diary-less Mukhi...as he is showing a deeper version of himself with every new situation in his life...with every hesitation of Aru...there is a mature Mukhi...for every dream of Aru...there is a supportive Mukhi...for every fear of Aru...there is a re-assuring Mukhi. And the best is Aru gets to see all of it...in the most tender of moments. He is a man of few words but his nobility and ingenuity is to absolutely die for.
I loved reading this AD!! Keep it coming...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Whoa AD! This plot is sooo powerful! You have written very nicely and I am really looking forward to the next part...👏



Awww Jan likhuhgi na aaj meri bhi Dimag ki halat armu pe gayi hai will update it soon darling
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Another wonderful update 👏, thank you and again you're leaving us at the edge. Waiting eagerly for the next update please..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Debashri123

Good Lord!!! How did I miss this reading this piece...AD!!👏👏👏
One of the best that I have read on this forum...it was all about Aru's diary till now...and u made this interesting one about a page from Mukhi's diary and I just loved the fact that you made Mishri the reader...Woman...I am absolutely in love with this thought. Although, I would not want painful sacrifices and separations between Ar-Mu but if it has to happen...I somehow want this... EXACTLY this in one of the episodes...we all have been waiting for a monologue into Mukhi's thought process...so your version of it would be such a wonderful one.
However, I am also enjoying this diary-less Mukhi...as he is showing a deeper version of himself with every new situation in his life...with every hesitation of Aru...there is a mature Mukhi...for every dream of Aru...there is a supportive Mukhi...for every fear of Aru...there is a re-assuring Mukhi. And the best is Aru gets to see all of it...in the most tender of moments. He is a man of few words but his nobility and ingenuity is to absolutely die for.
I loved reading this AD!! Keep it coming...😊


Aaah thanks honey! I never felt that my piece of writing could get such good readers...and it is soul touching. Thanks... to bluejalpari for motivating me to write ... and you all for liking my write up ...

This is just one page of his and then into himself in reality...there is much more from his dairy we will get to knw and parallel to it we see him its all one side...we havent event entered our beautiful aru lets see how it flows yar.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: malkasub

Another wonderful update 👏, thank you and again you're leaving us at the edge. Waiting eagerly for the next update please..



heyyy thanks malz... glad you liked it..will update it tonight itself let me watch todays episode and get todays dose... am at work and couldnt stop myself from writing lolol armu smitten soul u c

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: artzdreamer



heyyy thanks malz... glad you liked it..will update it tonight itself let me watch todays episode and get todays dose... am at work and couldnt stop myself from writing lolol armu smitten soul u c

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OMG! You haven't watched it yet!!!! You wont get a dose of romance, you'll get a tsunami from our dear darling sweetheart Mukhiman!


Get drenched in it and then give us your update! Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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What an interesting read on a Saturday afternoon! It the much awaited and most beautiful progress of the story. I keep wondering what transpired between both of them to lead it to a state like this😳 Keep updating.
Lots of Lubb,
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

What an interesting read on a Saturday afternoon! It the much awaited and most beautiful progress of the story. I keep wondering what transpired between both of them to lead it to a state like this😳 Keep updating.

Lots of Lubb,
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Thanks my dear ... i will be updating in sometime ... got to sitback and think now ... haha
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He rushes to the address given. With a whack of guilt spreading his face...and a deep throb in his heart he knocks the door... and yes there you go ... He doesn't see her anywhere around ...he just pushes the door and the door is opened...

He is freaked out for what he saw as and when he entered the house...


He entered the house... and is grounds just felt sweeped off his feet... his heart exploded into zillions... tears started rolling down he never knew that he falls this weak one day! Yes its Arundhati Raidan Raj khatara's , Woman of the decade award hanging infront of his eyes... He couldnt believe that its not just arundhati but his name too has reached heights ...proud started welling up is heart...his chest widened with pride ... he turns to his left, he takes few more steps to come inside... and is even more freaked out ... to see his picture hanging there right infront of him ..its their pic which they had as a memory on the night they had a moment for the first time.
Memories flooding... nostalgia rushing through his heart ... a strong pull in the groin... a pain that is unheard off for years now ... he couldnt stand there .. a fear of guilt is making his feet shiver and go weak...he may pass out any time with that guilt...

A little girl running with a doll in her hand ... with cute little voice " nahi mumma... mujhe doodh nahi peena hai" and another voice " Raji... mere baat sun..tu meri pyari pari hai na ... mumma ki baat maaano " a known voice... that same face is coming running to him ... and his world stopped there... there is nothing left for him to see in his life.. if that very moment would be the last of mukhi.. he would happily take it ... yes its his gaurani his wife..his one and only one lady love ... running behind a cute girl and her name is Raji ...

The girl came running into Mukhi sees him and says a loud " Papaaa"

Mukhi is taken aback ... the girl comes opening her cute little wings to him and without his knowledge he kneels downs and the girl hugs him and pour kisses on his cheeks...

And now its Aru who goes dumb speechless... her heart is jumping out of joy ... she couldnt help it.. his heart is beating in doubled tripled pace... yes after 5 years its her mukhiji ... her salman khan who is standing infront of her ... she takes a step towards out of joy to run into his arms... the flashes of their marriage, their cute tug of wars, their first confession, the first touch, the first kiss, the first intimacy felt every thing rushes through out memory lane ... her heart is thumping... she is not able to see anything else clearly ...other than her mukhiji... she is at loss of words... its he, her and the kid.

Mukhi looks at the kid closely...she resembles aru and him clearly... he looks up and sees aru..

nanny comes and aru asks her to take the kid from there...

Raji asks" mumma mei nahi jaungi agar papa phir se chalegaye toh? "

Mukhi : Looks on ... number of questions running around... none does have answers and only aru can give him ... but he is not sure of whats round the corner..

Aru : She looks at Mukhiji and the kid ... says " Papa ko hum nahi jane denge tum jao ... aaj papa tere saath hi rahenge ... ja andar ja" with a determined look turns to him asks" Mukhiji kaise ho aap?"

Her behavior has no difference... she is behaving as though nothing had happened. She is behaving as though he has gone out of country and reached home after a trip. He is hell freaked with the way she is asking him

Mukhi : His heart, soul and himself are desperate to run to her and take her in his arms and hug tightly till their hearts ache and map to each other with the ached arrows to hit the sweet bitterness... a psychological orgasm.. if i say might not be wrong.. but questions, are to be clarified. He comes to her close to her wantedly asks " checks out her from top to bottom, her face, places his hand on her head taking it down to her cheeks cupping, kaisi ho? bohot badal gayi ho.. moti hui ho .."

Aru : Shivering like a baby feather for his touch , the touch she was craving for years says aap bhi toh badla badla dikh rahe ho... mein won delivery ke bad weight put on ... waise.. ap kaise ho ? bataya nahi..

Mukhi : Zinda hu... tere dokhe ke baad bhi zinda hu... saans leraha hu

Aru: gulps her pain inside and says zindagi ko jeena padta hai ..hume acha lage ya nahi par jeena hoga... kuch kisse ki katti meeti kadwi yadein hume zinda rakhte hai... khair... baitiye.. mein aapko kuch peene keliye dungi

Mukhi : zeher dena tere haath se

Aru : Anger wells up turns to him and looks on

Mukhi : mujhe yaha eh maryada nahi chahiye... tujhe kisene diya eh haq ki tu mere tasweer tere ghar pe rakhe ... woh bachi kaun hai? aur itne saal kyu nahi bataya ki is duniya mein koi badnaseeb ka pala tere pe pada hai ...

Aru: Super hurt for that statement ... basss

Mukhi : in anger like a lion tries to take aru's hand twisting it back and pinning her to the wall looks into her those dove shaped eyes...

Aru: WOh meri beti hai... matlab meri aur ..woh

Mukhi: Tumhari aur ...tere woh dost ki hai na? (all of his soul screaming it has to be him and not someone else ...soul acknowledging that its his daughter)

Aru: Khabardaar agar kisi aur ke naam mere naaam se jodake yar raji ke naame ke peche jod ke kahenge toh

Mukhi : His soul is almost dancing ..still.. acha toh agar eh bat sach hai toh bataya kyun nahi ..zinda to hu

Raji comes running asking mukhi to play with her

Aru takes him inside he changes and sits near the kid looking passionately at her ...

Mein kya soch ke aya .. aur yaha too... mein itne saal eh soch raha tha ki aru ki shadi ho gayi us chokre se ... lekin yaha to ...meri apni beti ... aur aru uski chehre pe woh aas nahi rahi jo pehle hua karti thi ...

He plays with the kid and promises to take her out next day for buying toys and lulls her ...

while she keeps on asking for aru too to stay there... they never know when the kid fell asleep and its just pitch silence between them ...while their hands are put together on their daughter ... aru gets cautioned of his touch and she tries tofree her hand ... while mukhi holds it tight looking into her eyes straight..

Mujhe tumse bohot puchna hai ...

Aru : mujhe bhi aap se bohot puchna hai ... aur aap mujhse kuch bhi sawal kare ..use pehle mein ye batadu ki pehli baat .. yaha nahi bat karenge aap aiye and she takes him to the hall way in stair case .. with wide opened window... with darkness of night setting up dais mirroring their life and their hearts state .. with little stars shining like rays of hope in their relation with full moon glowing bright as bright as their daughter raji with an assuring smile that they are still united by their souls ...

she stands facing outside while her back is to him ... says... Raji humari beti hai... woh kisi ki nahi hai ..aur aaj bhi mein aap hi se pyar karti hu.. beshaq be jijhaq mein eh baat kahungi ..mujhe eh baat kehne mein koi sharam nahi ... mein meri beti ke baap se pyar karti hu na hi koi air gair se.. lekin ... ap eh mat samajhna ki mein aapke pass rote rote abla nari ki terah aungi .. is janam mein woh nahi hoga... aur na hi mein apke saath rehne mein icha dikhaunge

( her soul yelling at the attitude she is throwing at him.. saying to self - you lusty liar... you want to run to him you want to feel him ... how mean you could be ) while her integrity is asking her not to accept the man infront of her ever.


Looking at such bold confession after years... Mukhi just forgot everything ..all that he wanted is that moment that very moment to go still , be eternal ..her confession so surreal...

To be continued ...


Dear friends, hope you all like this thought flow ... leaving it to all your guesses here .. as i always say care to share your views...


Love

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Edited by artzdreamer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: artzdreamer

He rushes to the address given. With a whack of guilt spreading his face...and a deep throb in his heart he knocks the door... and yes there you go ... He doesn't see her anywhere around ...he just pushes the door and the door is opened...

He is freaked out for what he saw as and when he entered the house...


He entered the house... and is grounds just felt sweeped off his feet... his heart exploded into zillions... tears started rolling down he never knew that he falls this weak one day! Yes its Arundhati Raidan Raj khatara's , Woman of the decade award hanging infront of his eyes... He couldnt believe that its not just arundhati but his name too has reached heights ...proud started welling up is heart...his chest widened with pride ... he turns to his left, he takes few more steps to come inside... and is even more freaked out ... to see his picture hanging there right infront of him ..its their pic which they had as a memory on the night they had a moment for the first time.
Memories flooding... nostalgia rushing through his heart ... a strong pull in the groin... a pain that is unheard off for years now ... he couldnt stand there .. a fear of guilt is making his feet shiver and go weak...he may pass out any time with that guilt...

A little girl running with a doll in her hand ... with cute little voice " nahi mumma... mujhe doodh nahi peena hai" and another voice " Raji... mere baat sun..tu meri pyari pari hai na ... mumma ki baat maaano " a known voice... that same face is coming running to him ... and his world stopped there... there is nothing left for him to see in his life.. if that very moment would be the last of mukhi.. he would happily take it ... yes its his gaurani his wife..his one and only one lady love ... running behind a cute girl and her name is Raji ...

The girl came running into Mukhi sees him and says a loud " Papaaa"

Mukhi is taken aback ... the girl comes opening her cute little wings to him and without his knowledge he kneels downs and the girl hugs him and pour kisses on his cheeks...

And now its Aru who goes dumb speechless... her heart is jumping out of joy ... she couldnt help it.. his heart is beating in doubled tripled pace... yes after 5 years its her mukhiji ... her salman khan who is standing infront of her ... she takes a step towards out of joy to run into his arms... the flashes of their marriage, their cute tug of wars, their first confession, the first touch, the first kiss, the first intimacy felt every thing rushes through out memory lane ... her heart is thumping... she is not able to see anything else clearly ...other than her mukhiji... she is at loss of words... its he, her and the kid.

Mukhi looks at the kid closely...she resembles aru and him clearly... he looks up and sees aru..

nanny comes and aru asks her to take the kid from there...

Raji asks" mumma mei nahi jaungi agar papa phir se chalegaye toh? "

Mukhi : Looks on ... number of questions running around... none does have answers and only aru can give him ... but he is not sure of whats round the corner..

Aru : She looks at Mukhiji and the kid ... says " Papa ko hum nahi jane denge tum jao ... aaj papa tere saath hi rahenge ... ja andar ja" with a determined look turns to him asks" Mukhiji kaise ho aap?"

Her behavior has no difference... she is behaving as though nothing had happened. She is behaving as though he has gone out of country and reached home after a trip. He is hell freaked with the way she is asking him

Mukhi : His heart, soul and himself are desperate to run to her and take her in his arms and hug tightly till their hearts ache and map to each other with the ached arrows to hit the sweet bitterness... a psychological orgasm.. if i say might not be wrong.. but questions, are to be clarified. He comes to her close to her wantedly asks " checks out her from top to bottom, her face, places his hand on her head taking it down to her cheeks cupping, kaisi ho? bohot badal gayi ho.. moti hui ho .."

Aru : Shivering like a baby feather for his touch , the touch she was craving for years says aap bhi toh badla badla dikh rahe ho... mein won delivery ke bad weight put on ... waise.. ap kaise ho ? bataya nahi..

Mukhi : Zinda hu... tere dokhe ke baad bhi zinda hu... saans leraha hu

Aru: gulps her pain inside and says zindagi ko jeena padta hai ..hume acha lage ya nahi par jeena hoga... kuch kisse ki katti meeti kadwi yadein hume zinda rakhte hai... khair... baitiye.. mein aapko kuch peene keliye dungi

Mukhi : zeher dena tere haath se

Aru : Anger wells up turns to him and looks on

Mukhi : mujhe yaha eh maryada nahi chahiye... tujhe kisene diya eh haq ki tu mere tasweer tere ghar pe rakhe ... woh bachi kaun hai? aur itne saal kyu nahi bataya ki is duniya mein koi badnaseeb ka pala tere pe pada hai ...

Aru: Super hurt for that statement ... basss

Mukhi : in anger like a lion tries to take aru's hand twisting it back and pinning her to the wall looks into her those dove shaped eyes...

Aru: WOh meri beti hai... matlab meri aur ..woh

Mukhi: Tumhari aur ...tere woh dost ki hai na? (all of his soul screaming it has to be him and not someone else ...soul acknowledging that its his daughter)

Aru: Khabardaar agar kisi aur ke naam mere naaam se jodake yar raji ke naame ke peche jod ke kahenge toh

Mukhi : His soul is almost dancing ..still.. acha toh agar eh bat sach hai toh bataya kyun nahi ..zinda to hu

Raji comes running asking mukhi to play with her

Aru takes him inside he changes and sits near the kid looking passionately at her ...

Mein kya soch ke aya .. aur yaha too... mein itne saal eh soch raha tha ki aru ki shadi ho gayi us chokre se ... lekin yaha to ...meri apni beti ... aur aru uski chehre pe woh aas nahi rahi jo pehle hua karti thi ...

He plays with the kid and promises to take her out next day for buying toys and lulls her ...

while she keeps on asking for aru too to stay there... they never know when the kid fell asleep and its just pitch silence between them ...while their hands are put together on their daughter ... aru gets cautioned of his touch and she tries tofree her hand ... while mukhi holds it tight looking into her eyes straight..

Mujhe tumse bohot puchna hai ...

Aru : mujhe bhi aap se bohot puchna hai ... aur aap mujhse kuch bhi sawal kare ..use pehle mein ye batadu ki pehli baat .. yaha nahi bat karenge aap aiye and she takes him to the hall way in stair case .. with wide opened window... with darkness of night setting up dais mirroring their life and their hearts state .. with little stars shining like rays of hope in their relation with full moon glowing bright as bright as their daughter raji with an assuring smile that they are still united by their souls ...

she stands facing outside while her back is to him ... says... Raji humari beti hai... woh kisi ki nahi hai ..aur aaj bhi mein aap hi se pyar karti hu.. beshaq be jijhaq mein eh baat kahungi ..mujhe eh baat kehne mein koi sharam nahi ... mein meri beti ke baap se pyar karti hu na hi koi air gair se.. lekin ... ap eh mat samajhna ki mein aapke pass rote rote abla nari ki terah aungi .. is janam mein woh nahi hoga... aur na hi mein apke saath rehne mein icha dikhaunge

( her soul yelling at the attitude she is throwing at him.. saying to self - you lusty liar... you want to run to him you want to feel him ... how mean you could be ) while her integrity is asking her not to accept the man infront of her ever.


Looking at such bold confession after years... Mukhi just forgot everything ..all that he wanted is that moment that very moment to go still , be eternal ..her confession so surreal...

To be continued ...


Dear friends, hope you all like this thought flow ... leaving it to all your guesses here .. as i always say care to share your views...


Love

AD


Lord have mercy... Loved it...almost made me teary and gave me a heartache... beautiful...Continue soon please..THANK YOU.

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