SS-MohMoh KeDhage-A finite vision of an infinite relation-PT7 PG8 UPDT

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artzdreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Aawww my dear Kitz you will have next update by tomorrow so that it fills our week end boredom.. :-)

Thanks for sharing your feedback ..it means so much to me ... glad you liked it my dear... :-)

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kit0kat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: artzdreamer

Honestly, I want to commend you and all the other forum writers. You guys have great thoughts and sense when you write these kind of story lines. These CV members should read up and get ideas. Sometimes, your stories out beat their episodes. Cheers..

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artzdreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kit0kat

HahHh am obliged with the respect and liking you have on the writers here dear . Am not a pro in writing. .. i dont know this story roped my soul into writing .. at times i write few words in strategic column of my company internal blog. Very rare... I dont get time to continuously update ... but somehow am writing this... am overwhelmed with your feedback .. !!

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@Doc.love

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Wah wah wah wah.. another awesome update!! 😊👏

Dear AD, your ideas are beautiful and you pen them down in a very unique manner. I find some retro touch in your writing and i m liking it. Some thoughts of yours show how deeply you think about things... I insist that even after you finish this SS, please continue to write... because you can! 😊😊

Waiting for the next update. Thank you soo much for blessing us with an SS that fills our boring weekends with happiness.. 😊⭐️

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artzdreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Doc.love
Wah wah wah wah.. another awesome update!! 😊👏
Dear AD, your ideas are beautiful and you pen them down in a very unique manner. I find some retro touch in your writing and i m liking it. Some thoughts of yours show how deeply you think about things... I insist that even after you finish this SS, please continue to write... because you can! 😊😊
Waiting for the next update. Thank you soo much for blessing us with an SS that fills our boring weekends with happiness.. 😊⭐️

haye haye haye...meri jaan... muah... thank you so much for liking the update... and my inner vision too

yes i will continue writing my dear... and yes i will write here for sure ...

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

What a beautiful piece of writing! I could visualise their reunion and love which they had missed all these years. I am waiting for the next update.

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Mallika

@malkasub

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

AD! This confession and reunion is so beautiful. Thank you so much for this update and please buck up with the next one soon.

Are we in real going to get a leap and a kid? I wonder? Interesting...intense!

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artzdreamer

@artzdreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: manzilmukul
What a beautiful piece of writing! I could visualise their reunion and love which they had missed all these years. I am waiting for the next update.

aww thanks dear ... glad you liked it ... yes the update will be up soon ... today

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artzdreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: malkasub
AD! This confession and reunion is so beautiful. Thank you so much for this update and please buck up with the next one soon.
Are we in real going to get a leap and a kid? I wonder? Interesting...intense!

ah ah ah ... thanks for liking it ... lets see how my thoughts will shpe this little story that i am writing and yes all your views and encouraging words are key drivers for me you see hahah love you dear

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artzdreamer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Looking at such bold confession after years... Mukhi just forgot everything ..all that he wanted is that moment that very moment to go still , be eternal ..her confession so surreal...

He wants to show his love for her for once atleast once... he wants to hug her and leave his breath in the hug... couldnt stop himself from standing away... yet his ego isnt allowing him, but all his guards are ought be off at that very moment. He turns her to face him by pulling her elbow ... she doesnt look at him and she turns her face off...

Mother nature wants to accommodate her solace to these two kids... breeze picks up ... chillness in the weather is injected like a shot of scotch..she resists .. he insists ... she still resists... he places his hand on her back and pulls her more close ..the proximity started doing its fireworks in them. Those explosions inside them are knowing no bounds .. their wanting, their craving is reaching its extremes ... breath heaving aru pushes him off and moves away to the other corner

He wants to know everything every day, every second of her life that he missed ..but will she reveal? He then determines to self to irritate her, instigate her provoke her to reveal everything even if it costs him to face her hate for him or any insult even if its a tight slap he will take it. HE wants to become that bad boy of her life to let her vent out the pain the struggle the perseverance of all these years and wants her to melt down and flow in him, in his arms and collapse in him so that they can again emerge as an unbreakable, un separable soul.

He moves with double force to her, with only one notion to always feel her, he forces himself on her and pins her to his body and asks.. why ?

Kyun? Nafrat ho rahi hai mujhe se ... abhi to tu ne kaha tha ne ki tujhe mujhse prem hai.. to mere sparsh se kyu nafrat...

sachi waat to eh hai ki tu kabhi mere se prem kiya hi nahi ... woh sab umr ki josh tha ne ... aur jab josh chali gayi toh apne umr ke chokre ke saath ishq ladayi aur ab jab woh bhi tujhe doka diya hoga ne tab phirs e mein yad agay hai ne ..

Bass mukhi ji ek vat aur nahi ...

kyu bas karu ... ha kyu mein toh budda hu na ...is bayalees saal ke bude se jeene me dard ho ne lagi ne .. tujhe

Mukhi ji ek bat aur nahi basss

Mein bolunga shu thayu...mein aur bhi bolunga...

mujhe to us chokre pe taras ati hai jis ne tujh jaisi khud garzladki se pyar kiya acha kiya ki woh tujhe chod diya

Acha to app bhi kiya na mujhe chodke ...to phir daude bhage kyu aye mukhiji aur aap jo bhi kar rahe ho ab eh kya hai

Mukhi : Eh nafrat hai mera tujhe pe ..

Aru: Mujhe aise kyun lag raha hai ki aap jhoot bol rahe ho

waise bhi, mujhe apne aap ko kam samjhke, apne aap ko tyaag na aur dard ko dairy ke panno mein chipane ki adat nahi hai

Mukhi startled by her words ...taken aback looks at her ...

Tumhara matlab kya hai ?

Mera matlab chodiye ab mujhe jane dejie aur aap yaha se jaiye

Mukhi : Is baar mein nahi jaunga .. tujhe khoon ke aansu rulakar tumhar woh har dhoke ka jawab lekar tujhese tera sab kuch cheen kar jaunga

Aru: Ap mujhe aapse door kar sab kuch waise bhi chin chuke ho ab kya reh gaya meri beti? teek hai le lijie ... mein bhi dekhti hu kaise lenge aap use

Mukhi : teri beti nahi woh meri bhi beti hai

Aru: aap mere wajood pe sawal utaye the na ..toh aise kaise mangaye woh aapki hai ? bas mere bolne se? itna bharosa...

Mukhi to self thinks looking at her : Bharosa agar kisi pe karu is duniya mein woh sirf tum ho ...jo bhi mein bole jaraha hu woh hume kareeb layegi

aur tere dil mein jitna bhi dard ho woh mein peelunga ...bass tera dil aur dimag dard se mukt ho jaye aur meri gaurani ke chere pe woh natqat jhalak dikhjaye basss aur kuch nahi ...chala jaunga ...

Aru to self : Aap jitna bhi dard de meh sehlungi..lekin is baar mat jayie mukhi ji mujhe sab pata hai aapne kya kiya kis wajah se kiya isiliye shayad mere pyar aapkeliye kam hone ki bajay dugni ho gayi ...

To be continued in the next part hopefully today itself .. please bear with the short update

Dear friends, please care to share your views ...

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