SS-MohMoh KeDhage-A finite vision of an infinite relation-PT7 PG8 UPDT - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏👏 wah wah.. another zabardast update . Short thy par chalta hai. Write next update soon please.. and make it long too.. 😊😊😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

👏👏wah wah.. another zabardast update . Short thy par chalta hai. Write next update soon please.. and make it long too..😊😊😳

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Hahaha yaraa weekend bhi working hai .. pair bhi ARMU ki yad a gayi toh Humare ArMu club ki yad agayi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for another beautiful and touching update. Seriously, these kind of story lines makes my weekend. I always have a tough time reading the hindi updates and have to read them few times to understand it. Waiting for more and more to come..SOON.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
AD... Thank you so much for this update.

This is just getting better and better. Love it. Love that Mukhi wants to draw all the pain away from Aru. So typical of him

What the hell happened in the past... I'm dying to know. Please update fast.


And if possible, please add an index to all the parts on the first page.
Edited by malkasub - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aru to self : Aap jitna bhi dard de meh sehlungi..lekin is baar mat jayie mukhi ji mujhe sab pata hai aapne kya kiya kis wajah se kiya isiliye shayad mere pyar aapkeliye kam hone ki bajay dugni ho gayi ...

Mukhi: Woh sab bat chodo ... batao tu ne mujhe dhoka kyu diya ... beti meri hai lekin woh chokre ke saat tera sambandh tha aur won mein apne kano se suna hai aur ankho se dekha bhi tha

Aru: Apne jo bhi dekha ho jo bhi suna ho apne rai mein nahi mangi aap chale jaiyen

Mukhi : Mein nahi jaunga yahi rahunga tere saath

Aaru: Mein yaha nahi rahungi mein toh..

Raji comes crying.. mummmaaa ap kaha ho ..

Aru: Mea bacha bass aise hi phone agaya toh mein ap ko chodke agayi chalo sojate hai

Mukhi lifts Raji and they three enter theroom

Mukhi looks on while aru like a grown up matured woman - Mother of his child is taking care of raji and is putting her to sleep.

His heart ached that he is not with aru when she was pregnant when she very much needed him when his baby doll was born to his wifey doll

both his dolls fighting world alone without him ...his daughters first cry, first standing attempts, those nappy changing sessions ... everything he missed. He wants to live all that with his Aru. that can happen only when they have another child. But it can never happen. As he doenst have clue that his gaurani will forgive him.

Aru wants to share all her experiences during her pregnant journey and raji's 5 years sharing memories. but is really pissed off that mukhi hasnt understood her.

Mukhi phone rings

its mishri

Mishri : Baila kaha hi tu mujhe abhi isi waqt bat karni hai tujhse

Mukhi : Dingli tu kab ayi... mein abhi nahi asakta

Mishri: Bas baila bohot hogayi tu kaha hai aur aru se baat karna hai itne saal mein yaha nahi thi aur aru se phone se baat horahi thi mein mails likha hai ek mail ko bhi jawab nahi deti ho kya raha hai

Mukhi : Tu aru se baat kar rahi itne saal?

Aru: Kya mishri mere se kab baat ki?

Mukhi tu abhi mein jo address bata raha hu aja waha pe

Mukhi bas ab amne samne bat karenge

Aru feels hungry and so does mukhi.. she looks at him and asks kuch khana hai?

Mukhi : Acha tujhe yad hai ki mujhe bhook bhi lagti hai?

Aru: Dhakke marke aapne mujhe nakala hai apne zindagi se mein khud nahi bhagi

Mukhi: Looks at her painful yet happy

Aru gets dhokla for him and they both have it ... its aru's habit to eat in kiddish way ... a little peice of dhokla is on her lips ... left

Mukhi sees that he rubs the lower lip removing it ... an electrifying current passes both of them...

5 years of pain, separation, insult guilt, anger, love and now they are here at a crossroad with full of misunderstandings showing them separation roads ... with only one road showing them unison that is their daughter and her future.

she tries to get up and leave ... Mukhi catches her hand... and pulls her close to him ... she couldnt balance so she falls in his lap... they share an eyelock... aru couldnt stop her self tears rolls down... apne kyu kiya mere saath aisa ... he beats him on his chest accusing him

He hugs her tight as tight as that not even air can surpass them ... his heart is aching his body is exploding in that hug... seeking apology for life time ...

Na woh mera boy friend tha na mein uske saath kuch kiya raji ki kasam khati hu mukhiji,

Mukhi: Basss kuch der keliye mein bhoolna chahta hu ki humare beech 5 saal ka faasla hai

Aru: She realizes how close she is to him and tries to move back...

Mukhi doesn't let her go from his hug His grip on her tightens ..she looks at him so closely. His eyes are screaming in confession of his love for her ... she knows it she is reading through them. Yet, her self respect alarms her. She says

Mukhiji mujhe kuch kehna hai

Aru: Nahi kuch bhi nahi and he places his finger on her lips ... The hot fire touch on her feathered lips sets her on fire... She pleads him through her eyes to let her

He slowly removes his finger and replaces it with his lips ...they never knew when the painful, hurtful conversation turned out to be a wanting kiss. Their hands were exploring each other's hair, and skin while their hearts trying to get in sync to hear each others cry

Calling bell rang.. they broke their passionate hug and yes there its mishri, deep sanvi and her husband Abhinav whom she got married to after delivery. Abhinav is aru's childhood friend.

They four come and aru opens the door and is shocked to see these four at the door steps.

Mishri in anger slaps aru for lying to her that she is happy. Aru says she never spoke to mishri as she doesn't have any contact information of the later.

Mishri shows the phone number to aru and asks for explanation

Aru identifies the number and says its Rami ben's number which she earlier used to fool her naming it as dharmi. So its rami ben who spoke to you all the while and it was never her.

Mishir, Mukhi along with sanvi abhi got shocked knowing this.

Aru asks them to come in and says morning they can talk on this.

Everyone retires to their respective room calling it a day.

Later in the night, Anshul rushes to aru cornering her with sentiment of kid that the kid needs a mother or a lady figure who can treat kid as her own. And for the fact, none can go beyond Aru. Aru's parents too try to persuade her as Anshul creates a drama that he is flying for US forever.

Mukhi and others in home listen to this entire conversation but none comes out. Anshul sheds crocodile tears infront of aru's parents and they fall in his trap. But, aru being aru, she doesn't budge to marry him and questions his motives, questions him what did he do with the jewelry that belongs to mukhiji family. He tries tochange the topic. She questions his identity and worth asking him about his affairs that she got to know.

Anshul : Aru dekh, jo hua so ho gaya ... lekin mein sirf is bacho ke liye jee raha hu

Aru: BOchon keliye ya phir, bacho ke zariye mere pe dore daal ke baite ho nikal jao yaha se

Anshul: He slaps aru and forces himself on her showing his real face ... Today I will claim you as mine and will make you mine forever even your that village mukhi can never claim you as his ...as it is we executed our plan years back to separate you both and the result is you living alone

And he married sanvi and he has two kids with her do you even know?

Rami ben, me dharma and arjan together chalked a plan years back to bring arun in your life and create doubts and rifts between you both.

We made fake recordings with your voice and shared it with him and he trusted. Old illiterate fool he is.

We morphed a pic which has you and arun in intimate positions and showed him. We created sequences where you supported arun for his innocence but we showed your mukhi with our story and sowed doubts on your conduct in his mind. He tainted your conduct, he broke all ties with you, he has taken back mangalsutra and declared you a widow inspite of he being alive. He punished you so badly. You were begging him literally but your plead is paid a deaf ear. What sort of love you are talking about?

He never loved you. He never. You yourself stepped in his life, You married him, you stayed with him, you confessed him, you took initiative what did he do ... apart from considering you a pain in his neck and bearing you all along in that short period of relation.

Infact, he left you coz you will live happily with your new found love and he left you so that he too can live peacefully. He hates you to bits today.

Aru: Hogayi bat? Eh sab mujhe pata hai ki ap sab milke dhool jhoka hai mere aur mukhiji ke zindagi mein. Lekin mein kisi ki age kuch nahi kahi kyunki, dharma ne gidgidayi ki uski jaan tere hath mein khatre mein hai

Anshul : who bhi humare hi natak thi hum tumhe bewakoof banaye the

Aru is taken aback with this one confession which sounded like last nail on the coffin and says, whether he loves or not am not bothered. Am not worried. I don't want anyone in my life and I just want to live my life. I hate to live with anyone on this earth. Please .

Anshul tried to come even more close to her but she pushes him off and takes a broom stick giving him black and blue of his life kicks him in his ass.

Her parents too jump in with tears asking aru to marry Anshul for kids sake

She makes it clear to them that she has decided what to do and she will do what is in best interest of kids and herself.

Tells them that they were always dharmi's parents and never her's. Always concern goes around for dharma and never for her. Years back they have supported Dharmi when she was manipulating her and they too played their part in her and mukhijis separation. Hence she doesn't wish to keep or maintain relations with anyone apart from what she has left with.

That's when mukhi, sanvi, mishri, deep, abhinav comes out and Anshul is taken aback for all the nonsense he blabbered. Mukhi too gives his piece of mind to beat the shit out of Anshul warning him for the adversities that he might have to face after this and throws him out.

Entire night passes with this revelations. A new sunrise awaits the family to rework on their relation status. Awkwardness, guild ripping them apart while selfrespect, and integrity taking its route to stand high...

In the morning, aru serves breakfast and they all sit in the hall... aru is completely depressed with what happened previous night. While mukhi is just looking at her wanting to talk to her, but she is not even looking at him.

He enters her room, and sits on the bed. His eye catches an open book, scattered papers and a pen ... he gathers them and he sees

" Pyar kiya bhi toh, aise ki jaise agar pyar hai toh saans hai, agar woh nahi toh jeene ya marne ka jais fark hi na ho"

Mukhiji ... maaf kardijiye mein apke pyar ki pariksha mein asafal ho gyai...ab is zindagi mein na mere liye pyar ke barein mein sochungi na intezar karungi"

Mein khud ayi thi na apke ziindagi mein isiliye mein khud dur rahungi ab... apko meri khushi keliye kuch bhi tyagene nahi dungi"

Mukhi's heart gears up with heaviness unknowing discomfort wells up ... and he realizes that its her dairy. He locks himself in the room to read his gaurani's pain ...


To be continued ...

Dear friends, as i always say, care to share your views as that stands as major encouragement to continue this journey of writing...

Love
AD
Edited by artzdreamer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
AD... another beautiful update. 👏. Thank you.
And Anshul's back story was so🤬

Loved that Mukhi found her diary and started reading it... now update quickly and tell us what Aru has written.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: malkasub

AD... another beautiful update.👏. Thank you.

And Anshul's back story was so🤬

Loved that Mukhi found her diary and started reading it... now update quickly and tell us what Aru has written.



It's just not even half of their pain that's revealed. More is yet to come dearie...

Love
AD
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: artzdreamer



It's just not even half of their pain that's revealed. More is yet to come dearie...

Love
AD



What? More pain! 😭 . Oh I'm dying to know the details.

This is so sweet of you, to take the time and trouble to update so frequently. Thank you once again!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Excellent update.. Thank You so much.. I read this during my offsite today which was so boring. That is why I am responding late.
kamina Anshul.. Good for Nothing useless human.. I personally would like to punch his lights out...Mukhi can watch and video me doing so..
Waiting for yet another update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyyy AD yaaar... awesome update! There was pain and then there was a glimpse of romance! But i m really happy that Anshul mota admitted everything and Mukhiji knows the truth completely now...
Their kiss was soo forlorn.. my heart cried for them.. 😭
Please jaldi se next update kero naa...

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